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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice update, they have bonded so well in so little time...looking forward to more updates

When true hearts meet they don't need time to find each other. They just know the moment they meet. Time is irrelevant. Thank you latha for the comment. Do keep reading and letting me know what your precious thoughts are,

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

i am so sad now...dont know why😭

make me hate more ppl with prejudices who care about what society will think...society is mostly full of ppl who are ready to look into other peoples lives and comment and gossip about it...while hiding their own misery and dark secrets...

it is 21st century and we are still obsessed with race, age, religion and all things that can differentiate us rather than look for the things that connect us...

if you put too much limitations when choosing friends or partner you could miss some really great ppl and not let them into your life

and i am not talking only about India...even in "modern" societies there is so much hypocrisy...while pretending to be cool and open-minded ppl end up look at you based on your race, origin, religion etc...

who cares what society thinks? society wont live with that person but you will...

ppl are good or bad...there is no other division...

and in this story Astha is good,her daughters are good, Shlok is good...that is all that matters...

sorry for this long post Anu...

Edited by Serviana - 11 years ago

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Wonderful Update Anu,

Both Ashlok started missing each other before he boarded the flight...too sad...

Shlok made sure he spoke to her whenever and wherever time permit during his journey back to home...

The girls felt their mother is sad...They made her feel comfort and asked her to sleep with them...So Sweet...

Shlok after reaching home also...He felt like he is still in LA...

Anjali being a mother cares for his son...She found something is wrong with his son...went to his room and discussed with him...

When she found out abt his son's decision she is shocked...Instead of thing abt his child happiness,she was thinking abt the society and others...

Hope she wont make astha to break the relationship since shlok told clear to Anjali that "Please don't try to stop me this time. I won't. No one or nothing can. Only she can" ,only astha can seperate them...

Loved the conversation the had in the terrace, Astha is the true soulmate,she sense something is worrying Shlok and enquired him...

Varad is the loveable brother...who supported shlok's love and his decision...

Chat with the kids was just mindblowing...They loved each other a lot...the way kids spoke to him was just amazing...

Amazing update...Wonderful and beautiful writing...

I dont want to see Heart broken Ashlok again...

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

really wonderful updates anu

good job👏

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: Serviana
i am so sad now...dont know why😭

make me hate more ppl with prejudices who care about what society will think...society is mostly full of ppl who are ready to look into other peoples lives and comment and gossip about it...while hiding their own misery and dark secrets...

it is 21st century and we are still obsessed with race, age, religion and all things that can differentiate us rather than look for the things that connect us...

if you put too much limitations when choosing friends or partner you could miss some really great ppl and not let them into your life

and i am not talking only about India...even in modern societies there is so much hypocrisy...while pretending to be cool and open-minded ppl end up look at you based on your race, origin, religion etc...

who cares what society thinks? society wont live with that person but you will...

ppl are good or bad...there is no other division...

and in this story Astha is good,her daughters are good, Shlok is good...that is all that matters...

sorry for this long post Anu...

Well said Yasna,

When two people love each other...Why do they have to worry abt society...

But in reality more people are afraid about the society and ready to sacrifice there happiness...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: Serviana
i am so sad now...dont know why😭
make me hate more ppl with prejudices who care about what society will think...society is mostly full of ppl who are ready to look into other peoples lives and comment and gossip about it...while hiding their own misery and dark secrets...

it is 21st century and we are still obsessed with race, age, religion and all things that can differentiate us rather than look for the things that connect us...

if you put too much limitations when choosing friends or partner you could miss some really great ppl and not let them into your life

and i am not talking only about India...even in modern societies there is so much hypocrisy...while pretending to be cool and open-minded ppl end up look at you based on your race, origin, religion etc...

who cares what society thinks? society wont live with that person but you will...

ppl are good or bad...there is no other division...

and in this story Astha is good,her daughters are good, Shlok is good...that is all that matters...

sorry for this long post Anu...

Sorry to have spoilt your Monday dear YAS! And please don't say sorry. I love reading long posts.

Well you have said it all. You'd think in this day and age we've past all all that crap. But reality is such. It's far from over. What's surprising is that even modern educated people still harbour those age old theories.

As you said for Shlok there's no one more pure and better than Astha and her kids. As long as she wants him to be in their lives nothing else is gonna matter. Shlok is rock solid in his decision.

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Hope NA is ok with this. Very nice update.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Wonderful Update Anu,

Both Ashlok started missing each other before he boarded the flight...too sad...

Shlok made sure he spoke to her whenever and wherever time permit during his journey back to home...

The girls felt their mother is sad...They made her feel comfort and asked her to sleep with them...So Sweet...

Shlok after reaching home also...He felt like he is still in LA...

Anjali being a mother cares for his son...She found something is wrong with his son...went to his room and discussed with him...

When she found out abt his son's decision she is shocked...Instead of thing abt his child happiness,she was thinking abt the society and others...

Hope she wont make astha to break the relationship since shlok told clear to Anjali that "Please don't try to stop me this time. I won't. No one or nothing can. Only she can" ,only astha can seperate them...

Loved the conversation the had in the terrace, Astha is the true soulmate,she sense something is worrying Shlok and enquired him...

Varad is the loveable brother...who supported shlok's love and his decision...

Chat with the kids was just mindblowing...They loved each other a lot...the way kids spoke to him was just amazing...

Amazing update...Wonderful and beautiful writing...

I dont want to see Heart broken Ashlok again...

What can I say! You are a keen observer. I'll just leave it that. Nothing gets past you. Thank you sathu for that once again. You make Writing such a pleasure. I'm sure even deeps feels the same way about your support.

We all are seeking acceptance aren't we? From some one at every juncture. Even Shlok wants his parents approval. Asths more so than Shlok. For she fears coming between Shlok and his parents.