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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: 2filmy
also remember one thing
I don't know how much others love me
but I love u unconditionally
and I hope our relationship stays forever

I love you equally unconditionally... our relationship will stay n flourish forever! Amen!

Your comments do help me hugely, pls do keep commenting. I love them.

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: 2filmy
yes Di
Shiv ji is a perfect husband
and he is the God who has a proper family life just like us mortals
he also faces such problems regularly
Advay has characteristics of both
Krishna ji is a real puzzle
no one can understand him completely
and of the two I love Krishna ji more
I find him more appealing more romantic more adventurous more challenging
I just love Rukmini haran episode
I loved how he saved Draupadi while cheer haran
I love his friendship with Arjun
and how he encouraged him and Subhadra to elope

Same my thoughts. I love Krishna, too! I love his entire life story... like Govradhan pooja, his teasing the gopis, his real love of life radha, the way he killed kansa but did not claim the kingdom, bestowed it to the right owner...

the way he talks to draupadi when she stops him for going for Sandhi with duryodhan, the way he maneuvers the entire battle, and then takes ownership of the battle and accepts Gandhari curse.

My absolute hero!

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#413

Amazing story loved it so much.
Continue soon.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

I love you equally unconditionally... our relationship will stay n flourish forever! Amen!

Your comments do help me hugely, pls do keep commenting. I love them.

our feelings are mutual then
our relationship is forever
of course I will keep commenting
I love to

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#415

oh yes he did everything in a hatke way
his way of handling and managing things were so unique
I was angry with gandhari for cursing him
she couldn't make her son's follow the path of Dharma
just as her son's died a deserved death she cursed him
that was so unjust and mean of her
she couldn't manage her sons and then blamed him
wah what a justice

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: 2filmy
oh yes he did everything in a hatke way
his way of handling and managing things were so unique
I was angry with gandhari for cursing him
she couldn't make her son's follow the path of Dharma
just as her son's died a deserved death she cursed him
that was so unjust and mean of her
she couldn't manage her sons and then blamed him
wah what a justice

That's the greatness of mythology in our religion. Krishna narrates Geeta and tells the world "Karmanye vaadhikaarste...

Whatever is preached is followed in his own life. Just because he has done the right thing or justice does not mean right will come his way. So just because you do a good deed, don't keep the expectation that good will come your way.

Not keeping the expectation reduces the risk of your own unhappiness due to expectation not getting fulfilled. So what he's trying to tell all of us is for our own good.

Gandhari! if she had a just heart... would she not stand up for a woman getting almost raped in public. She and Dhrutarashtra are both blind to their children's flaws.

Even Mythology keeps character continuity... just because battle is won by Pandavas, why should her heart undergo change suddenly? She curses the person responsible for it...

same as Maasi in my FF, keeps fueling anger

Pooja keeps being positively supportive of bhaiyya Bhabhi

Advay, however in love, has the same old langu when angry " just leave.."

Harneet ne mahabhaarat padhani chaahiye thee na?😆There would be some character continuity!😆

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#417

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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CrazyBilli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#418

Both the chapters were just amazing. Loved how Dev helped Chandni to come out of her fear. Loved Dev and Miku scenes. And DevNi romance at the end.☺️ About the 'Raavan' comment, is there any chance of the kidnapper coming back?

Continue soon.🤗

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere
Both the chapters were just amazing. Loved how Dev helped Chandni to come out of her fear. Loved Dev and Miku scenes. And DevNi romance at the end.☺️ About the 'Raavan' comment, is there any chance of the kidnapper coming back?
Continue soon.🤗

Thanks so much.🤗

Anything can happen in the story, yes! But when it happens and if it happens, you'll find it very logical and at the same time interesting too... keep reading n commenting.

if you have time do go through the interim pages and you'll find beautiful dialogue between me and priyu touching multiple topics such as the thought process behind the FF, the show itself and life in general.

Work in progress for next chapter.

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#420

Hi Friends,

Today morning, I was going through my own FF from the beginning and fell in love with the story. You may find this bragging; but believe me it's not. It's just sharing of thoughts in my mind. Every writer loves his creation as her own child. At the same time, all mothers of the world like to praise their kid. so please bear with this post.😃

The story opens on SR which has soulful confessions and repentance of both DevNi. Then comes fun-filled morning between couple followed by family gathering at breakfast.

The discussions lead to Chandani's grief about Sasha, then a clarification by Dev... and the loop closed in 8th chapter when Dev knows that Sasha is wiped out between the couple.

In the same heart to heart talk, Chandani shares her perspective. It leads to giving Dev the pleasure of union which he wanted before going for B/F.😳

The B/F discussions have led to Bromance and opening out of original show open loop as to how Chandani found Miku. The revelation makes Dev fall in love all the more and then wanting to Undo the hurt caused by him to Chandani.

When one reads chapter 5, there are loops getting closed at the same time further chapters opening. For example Dev wanting to give new marriage vows and go ahead given by Nani... this has lead to new marriage vows at the Sunrise of beautiful KC morning.

It's first day after SR and Chandani is unable to eat because she is hugely missing Dev. The morning B/F is missed due to sudden topic of Sasha coming up. Evening dinner is missed due to Dev's sudden illness attack owing to his kidney problem. The next morning she wants to have sargi but Dev's outburst stops her and then her eventual fainting has led to KC completed privately with both doing the rituals. Truly a memorable KC for Chandani, I would say!

This KC topic was opened in 5th chapter itself when maasi was doing sargi preparation. Chandani approached her to ask about Dev but in vain.

Earlier Chandani had approached Naani which eventually led to women gathering for Geeta pathan. This in turn led to her going for women's function and then her PTSD attack... So it's like one small convo opening out a wonderful loop closure track later... n very logically, too.

In the same chapter, Chandani discussion with Pooja explained the sudden jerk of the show, where a maths professor originally coming from London suddenly became a business tycoon of Mumbai. It also builds logic in Advay's working through the nights for online consulting and lecturing. This was shown in show earlier and will intermittently pop up in my FF as well.

The PTSD attack has now taken DevNi to Diwali shopping and further building of their love as well as romance.

At the same time VeerKha nok-jhok romance and MurShi romance run as parallel story.

Maasi and Chandani are building the drama conflict in Dev's mind about a tragic past and hopeful happy future.

The way the tracks open, loops close... I am justified in my own falling in love with my story ...thanks to the fact that FF story has been interesting as well as logical till date. There is a beautiful saying

" Geet Jab Swayam ke Liye Gaaya Jaata Hai , Tab Sangeet Ho Jaata hai" When Song is sung for own self-happiness it's music!

I am writing this story further for my own happiness while wanting to bring happiness to you readers, too. I very much appreciate your feeling eager for the next update... Yet, I would suggest, to get the true pleasure of reading, go through the whole story sometime at leaisure... you'll enjoy the continuity beauty. Also read priyu's and my dialogues or my own posts putting up different debate points... you'll enjoy the thought beauty ... feel free to comment honestly, claps or raps for me, on any of the previous chapters or discussion topics... there is no restriction whatsoever.😊

My objective is to bring all of us a feeling like truly show is continued in our imagination part of brain and we get the same pleasure as we would in discussing the show heartily after each episode was aired.

Thanks for reading through longish post. I have correctly awarded myself Miss badbad 😆in my own convocation ceremony thread ( ref: refer to Pg 5 for my earlier posts. All links available in reply post to Juhi@Amorentia.

Edited by LovingAHA2017 - 7 years ago

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