I missed you Neha .. i couldn't check The forum from past two days.. and today I kept thinking that there will be a update from you...Iam so in love with your story. . no seriously.. it's just heart touching in many ways... It feels so real ... The show if continued would never have been this beautiful i can say that for sure... If they showed one tenth of this we would have been mesmerized and praised them... Good thing that they ended the show... Otherwise adni would have been some loose links... Shabby tracks... Butchered characters...thank god that they ended it. So now we can remember adni through your beautiful story...
About the ninth chapter...
Everything is just perfect... There isn't one bit where I lost my concentration and started thinking beyond your wordss..
The whole scene of chandini overcoming her fear is executed well... No unnecessary drama it's just baby steps..
And the raavan dialogue... I read your and Priya convo and understood the reason behind you choosing the specific line.. again makes me wonder about the thought process you go through before penning each and every line.
The trauma faced my miku is so clearly brought out. He may be small but he is still traumatized. Your words painted a boy crying himself to sleep in my brain and my heart went out for the kid. You just mademiku even more special for me. A corner in my heart will be always reserved for miku.
The family scene was a nice touch. Never heard the song. So I don't know the tune. Read the lyrics thought.
Ha ha. the whole seduction by chandini and advay saying you need rest and all reminded me of Twilight. How Edward is always worried about her and she just can't stay put. But I have small doubt here.. may be you already explained it to pihu and I may missed it... It's about saam dham bhand bhed... How is this applicable in this situation.. I didn't get it.
Now comes the advay break down scene.. instead telling how well you wrote it and struggle to find the right words that are worthy for your praise. Let me tell you what it made me feel... The way you started itself dragged me in to the scene .. as if Iam there standing in their room and witnessing their turmoil.. his fears ... Oh god he was crying and I thought Iam gonna cry and she helping him... Consoling and then breaking down .. both of them healing each other. . The reference to shiva. . I tell you. . When people say ' a husband like Rama ' I use to say I want a husband like shiva... I mean he just loves his Sathi / parvathi .. I was so lost in all that... Only when the scene ended I realized that I was actually crying... Like I had tears rolling down my cheeks and I didn't even realise that... Now you tell me how can I say how well you wrote it. I have no words to describe an emotion such as this Neha...
I need more... Even when t's ended.. I was like... Where is the second part of this chapter ... Come on your update should have two chapters right ? I think Iam getting bold like chandini... When you ended the chapter I was like where are the details.. ??
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Thank you for sharing your story with us Neha. Iam sure this became part of your life now. Something you can't think of giving up . Remember that it became a part of our life too we keep looking forward for the story remember adni through your story may be after years when people talk about ipk 3 we would remember this story as an extension,thee show never ended for us just after three months. .. it has continued where their souls finally healed and hearts mended... There were hugs.. breakdowns ,dramaa... Romance... Family... Privacy... Dreamy sequence. Raw realities... There was a story of adni's beautifull journey!
Edited by mayukatta - 7 years ago
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