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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Till now she has never given a thought
As to why he hates her so much
She thinks this is just a MU
She does not realize that this is a much bigger issue
In her playful nature for some time
She is just happy that she has go Dev

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I feel the new GF will make her search for answers
She will not be able to see him with any one else
And then she will want to know why he hates her so much
The new girl can give her the much needed reality check

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: tasnimrayian
The story is very neat and clear and very meticulously written.Hats off to you!At this point of the show,I am not able to accept Chandni's such side to Advay.It is more important to find Advay 's total past instead just trying to turn Him in Dev and impose herself on him.
Your story reminded me of the same..
you write very well👏

Thank you😊

I think that chandini is yet to know the complete truth about what happened that day.

And she is trying to bring out Dev bcoz she can't make advay understand, I hope.

Well we may be trying to justify character.. but CVS may be just wanted a light hearted tracks. With out logic , for now. Trps sake

Glad to know you like my imagination. 😊

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sivani

@soumyamurali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Hi mayu
Intense n beautiful write up. I don't expect this much intensity from the CVs, but atleast half of it is ok for me. I expect them to move the story along these lines n has hopes because they didn't reveal the complete truth to chandni.

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi
Well written Mayu.. I loved it.
Coming to yesterday's episode I actually enjoyed Chandni's 'jii' part with Murshi banters and all...
For me as of now Chandni is too happy to find her Dev, Advay will never listen to her, so I think she is trying to bring out Dev ... And about her sassy part I feel its just a light episode after back to back intense ones last week...
And also I doubt if Chandni know about his parents being killed due to her One statement...need to wait for more clarity...

Hello Arshika..

Thanks a lot 😊

😛 me too dear... I enjoyed the episode .. ji. The way she said .. just the right amount to tease... Loved it😆. The episode was surely entertaining.

@bold... I believe the same thing ... But the problem here was the CVS should have given a monologue if the same. During the vows or after that where she says she is infact sorry of what happened.. but first she have bring out Dev.. only then can she explain it to him.. bcoz for her advay us still a stranger.

Cvs missed this and it was important. If they given us this one line there wouldn't have any confusion regarding her lack of empathy.

I feel so. I understand chandini but these cvs😡

Edited by mayukatta - 7 years ago

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Joyness
Mayu...lovely..and you are right we need a Chandni who would want to empathize with Dev but here they are showing only tashan wali Chandni and somehow it looks very cold on part of Chandni..I too felt disconnected yesterday.. and would like to know your take on why Advay has not disclosed all the mayhem that was caused by Chandni then

Jyo...😊

Thank you .

Let us not consider her lack of empathy as a character flaw instead let just take it as CVS fault. I failed to bring out the reading. Behind her behaviour. For some, it is understandable and for some it's out right lacks empathy.

Be to frank I have a theory why the CVS held that info. But no idea regarding Advay reasoning. I will think about it and hopefully i may actually find the answer will surely write an imagination then😃

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: shibaniana
That was as always, brilliantly written mayu. You really capture the love hate between them and their pain. I feel so bad for Advay here. While Chandni is ecstatic and doing everything in her power to get back, she doesn't know he can't go back even if all he wants is to get back his chandu. Her one innocent mistake cost him everything.

Shivanee...

Thank you dear🤗

She is yet to know the truth here. And once she knows Iam sure she will act differently. Let's just consider yesterday's episode as a such needed light hearted one.😛

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: srdb5

Very nicely written mayu. You penned down Chandni's emotions really well. I haven't watched today's epi yet but I really liked the way you described Chandni and Advay's scene where he just stopped her from falling from the staircase but didn't pull her further. And also nani and Chandni's conversation.

Thank you sharda.

I hope you saw the episode by now. It is indeed good.

Glad to know you like my imagination. In my head this scene came out very well... Mainly the bit you mentioned. It all dramatic with ASR BGM in the back and camera going round in a suspended moment. Ha ha.

I put the Nani bit just to bring out chandini's point and her reasoning for her sassy behaviour.😊. I totally love her sassy side but wanted an explanation for her lack of empathy. So ...😳

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Sana2020

@Sana2020

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Mayu,

I agree with others we so need some sensitive screenplay with scenes such as the one you wrote, but i am managing my expectations.

As far as i understand Advay thinks she already knows what actually happened to his parents, he doesn't believe her version of events that she doesn't know what happened, therefore does not need to tell her again. This tashan is all part of her deceitful act .

Nani does believe Chandni so her supporting Chandni's behaviour when she knows what Advay is thinking about Chandni, makes me wonder what Nani is thinking? She is just make the MU between Advay and Chandni worse in my opinion.

I even find Advay-Adi dynamic could be written with a lot more subtlety then it is, i am incredibly close to my nephews and the most precious moments with them is not about buying them toys but spending time together playing and comforting each other. When i have been really down, a cuddle from my nephews has given me so much comfort. Children are perceptive and capable of showing empathy too - not just make loud aggressive demands.

Yesterday Adi scene i would like to have seen something like:

Pooja tell Adi to go get Advay for dinner. Adi goes to Advay's room, sees that Advay is sitting in a pensive mood staring into space. Adi goes and climbs into Advay's lap, cuddles into him. Mentions that he misses Chandni Mami. Advay listens, emotions playout in Advay's eyes and take the comfort offered from Adi. After a warm hug, Advay and Adi come out to the dinner.

But hey ho - this is an indian daily soap!