Imagine this ... #Regret ( chandini looking for answers ), - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sana2017

Mayu,

I agree with others we so need some sensitive screenplay with scenes such as the one you wrote, but i am managing my expectations.

As far as i understand Advay thinks she already knows what actually happened to his parents, he doesn't believe her version of events that she doesn't know what happened, therefore does not need to tell her again. This tashan is all part of her deceitful act .

Nani does believe Chandni so her supporting Chandni's behaviour when she knows what Advay is thinking about Chandni, makes me wonder what Nani is thinking? She is just make the MU between Advay and Chandni worse in my opinion.

I even find Advay-Adi dynamic could be written with a lot more subtlety then it is, i am incredibly close to my nephews and the most precious moments with them is not about buying them toys but spending time together playing and comforting each other. When i have been really down, a cuddle from my nephews has given me so much comfort. Children are perceptive and capable of showing empathy too - not just make loud aggressive demands.

Yesterday Adi scene i would like to have seen something like:

Pooja tell Adi to go get Advay for dinner. Adi goes to Advay's room, sees that Advay is sitting in a pensive mood staring into space. Adi goes and climbs into Advay's lap, cuddles into him. Mentions that he misses Chandni Mami. Advay listens, emotions playout in Advay's eyes and take the comfort offered from Adi. After a warm hug, Advay and Adi come out to the dinner.

But hey ho - this is an indian daily soap!

Originally posted by: pentu82

beautiful mayu!! i could feel the emotions of both chandni and Advay perfectly.. when will CVs learn the art of writing good scenes.. i wish they had shown chandu showing some sensitivity then yesterday's epi would have been good...

they should just outsource writing to talented writers like you!!! 😊

Originally posted by: orion23

Nice!

Good one Mayu!

Its real fun reading your spin offs!

You have a deep understanding of these characters which makes it a treat to read!

👏

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Wonderfully written Mayu
The dialogs are matching the characters
I want this to happen
Or something similar

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Till now she has never given a thought
As to why he hates her so much
She thinks this is just a MU
She does not realize that this is a much bigger issue
In her playful nature for some time
She is just happy that she has go Dev

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I feel the new GF will make her search for answers
She will not be able to see him with any one else
And then she will want to know why he hates her so much
The new girl can give her the much needed reality check

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Priya... 🤗

Thank you dear.

I kept the dialogues simple... This thought came to mind right after reading hotstar spoiler😆

But dialogues after watching the episode😳

I just wish a monologue of chandini telling why it's necessary to bring Dev out first😕

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Till now she wanted to know why advay hates her.

When she realised it's her Dev she concluded that his hate is bcoz he thought she lied.

But she believes she didn't..

According to her it's just MU.. as you said.

She is very happy to finally meet Dev and more over she is married to him. Look at that..😆

I love seeing chandini happy .. and teasing Dev..

But once she knows the whole truth..

She will regret 😭