Broken trust || a Rikara SS short SEVENTEEN (22-08) pg 34 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

I loved the update

she is back hope Om wins her this time
I love Tej and Pinky 😆
Who is the person who sent's her letters i guess it is Om


Thank you so much
Let's see who it is
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Why do I feel that the Achintyah is none other than Om..?! 😲 Gauri is broken beyond repair and even Omkara's genuine words cannot breat the walls she has build around her.. Hate Daadi yaar..kill her..she's too old to spit venom on others.. 😡 Continue soonish..


Thank you so much
And sorry Dadiji ko kaise marun.. I like her yaar😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Awesome update loved it so much.
She should not give in no matter what happens.
Glad to see pinky and tej on her side.
And dadiji is same as usual.
Continue soon.


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Spyngli

Wowww beautiful update Ayu...Finally she is back to OM for her mother...She thought that he want her back only bcz of her mother n will go back aftr her mothr returns to Bariley...n that slap...It shows how much hurt she is...She changed so much...if she was that old chirpy bubbly Gauri never think abt hurting her omkaraji like this...But here i support her...she suffered a lot...😕

Loved Tej n Pinky...😊The way they support Gauri against Dadi...😃 n Dadi...😡
Loved the update...😊
Waiting for next chapter
Update soon...😊


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

she slapped On!!! yesss acha hua...


btw when r u going to update dear... pls pm me


Thank you
The update will be soon
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Posted: 7 years ago






SHORT TWELVE

Omkara went to his art room because he needed to think. Think about her and him once again; analyse the phase they both were in; seek his next move in the mission of mending the heart he had broken. How would he even talk to her when she was not even ready to see his face? How would he resolve this situation when she is not even reacting to it? How to bring her back when she has already taken miles? Well, he himself can't blame her. She was just doing what she should have been. Expecting an immediate forgiveness was his fault. She was just right in whatever she did or was doing. It was just him who was wrong always. Every time he opened his mouth what ever he uttered was just rubbish. Except the day he confessed his feelings.

He was actually himself back then, but he himself didn't knew since when he started ignoring her. When did the circumstances became so hard for him to handle that Omkara, the Omkara who fought with his father was not able to handle it. When did the things changed so much that he himself was not able to handle them. When did his peaceful life started facing storm. When did his beautiful love started getting deprived of it. Did he even paid attention to anything? No, because if he had her love would have been his peace forever. But now, nor she is there neither her love. He huffed

"Omi chachu the little Ansh came running to him. "Yes my superboy Ansh giggled on it as Omkara picked him up. "Atually Maine naa ek khubsurat si pari dekhi... Jaise aapne bataya tha... he said in his little voice. "Aap mile usse Omkara asked him with his brows pushed up. "Nahi mila main, voh ghar mein dadi aur bade dadu ke alawa aur kisise baat nahi kar rahi. Maine dekha Ansh pouted as the smile from his face dropped. "Aise kaise humare superboy se koi baat nahi karega. Hum usse baat karenge he understood the reason. Though he did not wanted to disturb her this time, but this little soul was not to be sad and especially when the reason is him. "Chachu, pari she baat karni h Ansh pulled her kurta with his little hands. "Achcha kara dunga he smiled. "Abhi karni hai Ansh started tapping his foot on the ground. Not having any guts to ignore him Omkara sighed and picked him up "chalo he said.

This house brought all her memories back. Every place in this house had a package of good and bad memories for her. The gates from where Shivaay brought her in; the living room where they used to laugh, giggle, talk, cry, hold each other at bad times, hug each other in good ones; the kitchen where all the family used to cook and especially her making dishes for everyone; and her room where she had lots and lots of beautiful and peaceful memories with him every thing was like in front of her eyes since the time she entered.

Pinky entered the room "how are you bachcha? she cupped one of her cheek. "I am fine choti maaji she answered in a low voice. "But you don't seem to be. What happened? It seems as if I have lost my little chirraiya Pinky spoke softly. "It's just studies choti maaji she answered moving her eyes away. "The girl who once handled the whole Oberoi Mansion on her own shoulders is telling me that the studies effected her. Gauri answer me, what happened? Pinky's tone was both soft and firm this time. Tears came in her eyes as she hugged Pinky tightly "do saal choti maaji, do saal har roz marte the hum aur aaj bhi mar rahe hain. I didn't wanted to see him, but he came. I didn't wanted to return. Nahi rehna mujhe yahan, bohot dard hota hai voh saari yaadein apne samne dekhke she cried.

"Shh... naa mere bachche, don't cry. I understand how difficult it is to get back. I know how difficult it would be to face him she ran her hand on Gauri's back. "Hum reh lete Manali mein, I was okay there, I didn't wanted to come back. But Maa, hum usse kaise akela chod dete Gauri was still hugging Pinky, crying on her shoulder. Pinky was silent as she let her cry, to let her pain shred with tears. "Humse nahi hota, hum nahi kar sakte. I can't reject and jerk him away every time. Dam ghuta hai humara jab hume voh din yaad aata hai, unki voh nafrat... Humse nahi hoga she said.

"Shh... But you have to do it bachche, for you, for your mom. You can't leave her this way. She needs you the most Pinky told her. "Issiliye yahan aaye hain choti maaji. That is the only reason I agreed. Maa humare liye kiss bhi cheez se badh kar hai she parted wiping her tears as she heard her mother coming out of the washroom. "Arey Pinky JI namastey she greeted Pinky. "Namastey, koi takleef toh nahi hai aapko Pinky asked Gauri's mom. "Nahi, dhanyawaad she answered. "Maa, take some rest. You needed it Gauri turned to her mother. "Gauri it is not only me in this house, you have a lot of people to talk to here. Go, you are the daughter- in- law of this house her mother said.

"She is the daughter, not daughter in law behenji Tej entered the conversation. "She is my daughter and she doesn't has to take any worries till I am there he smiled. "Papaji she started touching his feet when he stopped her "daughters don't touch feet he said. Her mother seemed happy on seeing so much love this family provided her daughter whereas Gauri was ready to do anything for her mother. She would do anything to keep the smile on her face intact. "Achcha ab bas Ho gaya, now take rest I will bring you something to eat she came out of the room before her mother started his topic to her which she definitely could not answer.

She went to kitchen to make soup for her mother. Shocking factor there was that even after a whole two years, nothing changed. The spice boxes, the cutlery, the knife stand, the cabinets, the stove and even the walls which had the same colour. Still trying not to remember anything she started preparing the soup when a servant entered "Ma'am what are you doing she rushed to Gauri. "Preparing soup she shrugged. "Please let me do it she asked. "No, I can do it Gauri said. "Please ma'am let me do it or else I will lose my job the servant pleaded. "What are you talking? asked a confused Gauri. "Ma'am we are ordered to not to let you do any work the servant informed. "What?! Why? she was shocked. "The sirs have ordered us and if we failed we would lose our job she said taking the spatula. "Oh...okay send it to my mother's room she said walking out of the kitchen.

"Omi chachu, look pari Ansh rushed to Gauri. "Pari... I love you sooo much he said stretching his arms. "And who is the handsome who loves me and I don't even know she sat on her knees talking to Ansh. "Ansh, I am Ansh he raked his fingers through his hair. "He is Shivaay and Annika bhabhi's sonOmkara entered the conversation. "Oh, I guessed that she smiled to Ansh. "Omi chachu, pari bohot sundar hai he said with his glittering eyes. "Pari, aapko kismet bataya ki main pari hoon she cupped Ansh's face. "Omi chachu said when he told me a story of a prince who met a fairy when he was struggling and how that fairy took all the pain away in a whoosh he answered.

"I am not a fairy Ansh, I am just a common girl she said caressing his face. "No, you are my fairy... Meri pyaari pari he stomped his feet. No one could deny Ansh's cute pout and his face "okay but only your fairy she said. "Okay Ansh hugged her smiling.
"Sir, Gauri ma'am has a visitor one of his security guards told him as both Omkara and Gauri looked at each other in confusion. "Who? Gauri asked. "Some Arjun... Yeah his name is Arjun the security guard answered. Gauri immediately understood "yes, send him in she said. The man entered the house as Gauri handed Ansh to Omkara and walked to him "hello sir, nice to see you she said smiling. "Oh yes, just was there to give you your notes. Shweta said me to give you he answered. "Oh yes, thank you please come in she said. "No, thank you. I will see you later. Now since you are here, I think we could meet someone times she laughed on the statement.

"I hate this man, he took my pari's attention Ansh said pouting. "Me too superboy, the feelings are mutual Omkara said with the same expression as both the boys looked at her talking to Arjun.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Aww this was so cute di
Ansh's Pari 😳😳
the last sentence
Ansh and Omi 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww...😳 it was cute Ayu...😛 Loved it...❤️
Ansh calls Gauri as pari...😛 n his cute talks with her...😃 curious to knw whoz that mystery well wisher...😃
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aw such an adorable update loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it
How no one wnats gauri to work
They seem scared that she might think herself as a maid again
And it was a really sweet gesture
Can om pls finally do something to win her back ;ad he needs to come
Up with a plan to convince her, to win back her love
i want them happily together sooonish xD
Uuh Arjun ;P


Continue soon it was an amazing update

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