Rikara FS - Agar Tum Mil Jao | COMPLETED | Index added on PG 1 | - Page 14

Originally posted by: minamma

I guess dabang ri is gonna slap evil ri..

He he lolzz

Dabang Ri will give evil Ri a tight jhaap.. 😆

Awesome...
Possessive and Jealous Omkara was so cute... can't tolerate his girl giving attention to someone else 😉
Why do I have a feeling that Ridhima s plan gonna backfire...
Continue Soon

Loved it.Gauri getting affected by mere touch of Omkara.Om getting jealous.. Finally Om is able to see his future with Gauri..Waiting for the confrontation scene between Ridhima,Gauri and Om.I know Gauri is gonna give it back to Ridhima.Want to see how Om will express his feelings to Gauri.Will Gauri tell Om that she loves him even before they formally met.

Originally posted by: Chulbul_Chachi

Loved it.Gauri getting affected by mere touch of Omkara.Om getting jealous.. Finally Om is able to see his future with Gauri..Waiting for the confrontation scene between Ridhima,Gauri and Om.I know Gauri is gonna give it back to Ridhima.Want to see how Om will express his feelings to Gauri.Will Gauri tell Om that she loves him even before they formally met.

Dying to know how the ending of this beautiful story will happen.. I have been a silent reader for too long..but your story forced me to comment and say Thank You.. Stories like these are working as breeze and cold water in desert for us rikarians..

Aaahh..!! I'm overwhelmed to know how you felt while reading it..
It's just that I wanted an unsophisticated version of Rikara..I'm not a fan of drama so tried to keep it simple...
Omkara's confession will be as simple as his feelings for Ri..I hope you'll like it...
Riddhima will get everything she deserve..after all Dabang Gauri se pala pada hain..
I'm glad it inspired you to leave a comment..
Thank you so much for the lovely words...

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Aaahh..!! I'm overwhelmed to know how you felt while reading it..
It's just that I wanted an unsophisticated version of Rikara..I'm not a fan of drama so tried to keep it simple...
Omkara's confession will be as simple as his feelings for Ri..I hope you'll like it...
Riddhima will get everything she deserve..after all Dabang Gauri se pala pada hain..
I'm glad it inspired you to leave a comment..
Thank you so much for the lovely words...

Originally posted by: Chulbul_Chachi

Kabhi kabhi simple cheezein dil ko deep tak chu jaati hai..and same goes for this story..its such a simple yet heart touching one..Gauri's innocent,pure and selfless love..

The best thing which I liked about the story was Gauri taking a initiative to build a bond by proposing to court for a long period..

Gauri toh hai hi apni dabang chirayaa..Ridhima ko uski jagah dikhaa hi degi..

Omkara has always been a man of few words whenever it comes to Gauri.. aur kya kehtay hai..ki pyaar ka izhaar karnay kay liye words say zada feelings kitni strong hai woh matter karta hai..Jo ki OM ki aankhon main Gauri dekh hi legi..

And iss story pay OM ki shayari bilkul fit baithti hai..

pura hona kismat hai iss adhuray hissay ki

Abhi mohbat karni hai inhay inkay hissay ki

Will be eagerly waiting for the final part..But sachii btau..I dnt want it to end...But we all know End is inevitable..

I believe that simple things has it's own charm..you don't need complex words to express your feelings..same goes to Omkara..he'll definitely propose her..and the confession will be simple...
The best thing about GKS character is she isn't shy away to take a initiative..yes, she's affected by the physical intimacy..but she'll never step back when it's about Omkara..she's innocent but strong enough to take the first step towards a relation...
About seeing the feelings in Omkara eyes, toh Kara ko Ri se behtar kaun janta hain..? 😉 😳
Everything has a ending..but they'll have their happily ever after I promise..

Originally posted by: vrittima

Update soon

It'll take some time..maybe two days as I'm not well...
Hope you'll like the update..

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Amel.. 😳
I'm glad you liked the update..
Physical proximity is new to Gauri..her body reacts to his touch before her mind could... 😉
And Omkara's character is just like the show here...he reacts on everything that bothers him..but the calmness is still there..
Riddhima is a witch..she has no idea who GKS is..a jhaap is waiting for her...
Will try to update soon..
Thanks again for your support from the starting.. it feels really good to hear from one of the best Rikara ff writers.. 😳

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I know what you mean

Riddhima is a witch and I can't wait for gauri to show her her place!

And especially for Gauri a girl that never was in a relationship physical proximity is new and exciting😉

Tasnim🤗Of course I will always support you no matter what you are a great writer and you deserve every compliment for your writings I can possible think of❤️

Can't wait for your update dear and I feel honored that you think that I am one of the best that means so much to me you have no idea how much❤️

For Gauri the physical intimacy is completely an unknown feeling..but she'll never shy away to shower him with love..we know our GKS, right..?? 😳
Riddhima will have her lesson..Gauri will definitely show her the place she deserves..
Will try to update in two days..I'm having pain in my backbone, so couldn't finish the last chapter...I'll complete it soon and post soon..
To be honest, I wasn't sure if I should continue as writing is new to me and I didn't know if I'll be able to pen down my thoughts and convey them to the readers..but you always got the point I wanted to highlight and let me know..
Your words are really motivating..thank you so much for supporting me...
And yes, you're a great writer Amel..I really love to read your stories..
Please keep writing as these stories are the lifeline of Rikarians...
Thanks once again.. <3

Shot 5 (Last Part)


"Kya hua Omkara..? Tumhare chehre ka rang kyun utar gaya..??", Riddhima said with a smirk, adding fuel to Gauri's anger...

Omkara was feeling numb..yes, he did want to disclose everything to Gauri about him and Riddhima, about their relation..but definitely not this way..he tightened his hold on Gauri's hand and she instantly understood Omkara wasn't feeling comfortable to stand there and listen to the nonsense of this woman...she shifted her gaze from Riddhima to Omkara only to find him standing with a pale face..she hated the sight..she hated to see him helpless...

Listening to Riddhima's splitting words, Gauri guessed, the way everything ended between Riddhima and Omkara wasn't really specious..but decided to keep mum as she didn't want to create a scene and ruin the party of his friend..she kept her other hand on their locked hands and asked him to leave the party..Omkara just nodded and turned to leave without sparing a glace to Riddhima..but she started again..

"Tumne jawab nehi diya, Omkara..?? Are you really serious about her or just using her to forget me...??", though Riddhima tried to sound rude but somewhere in her heart she expected him to say that he wasn't interested in Gauri..she stayed with Omkara for five years...she thought it would be painful for him to move on..but when she saw him with Gauri she couldn't take it..she was hurt and offended at the same time..hurt to see him with Gauri and offended to see him happy without her..

It was enough for Gauri..she knew Omkara wasn't really interested in her when they started dating..but it doesn't mean he was using her to get over his ex...she couldn't stand like a statue anymore and blurted out gritting her teeth, "Ek jhaap mein dewaar pe satt jaibe.."

Riddhima was shocked listening to her..but she couldn't understand what she was saying..so asked with a frown, "What did you just say..??"

"Oh..samajh nehi aya..?? Badi bakwaas baatein kar rahe the..lagta hain aapki zubaan bohot chalti hain..but I'll not say anything, I'll rather show you what I meant..", Gauri said..

Riddhima gasped realising Gauri has a sharp tongue..she was about to spit venom again but stopped midway feeling everyone's penetrating gazes on her..she was really embarrassed noticing everyone gossiping about her..soon Samar came to rescue her and left the party dragging her with him...

As soon she left Omkara looked at the petite woman who looked back to him narrowing her eyebrows.."Why are looking at me like this..??", asked Gauri behaving all innocent as if nothing happened..

Before Omkara could say anything Daniyal came and asked them what happened..he knew Omkara and Riddhima broke up a few days back..but the reason was unknown to him and everyone else..looking at a bewildered Omkara he guessed Omkara is yet to reveal everything to Gauri..so he didn't want to ask anything making the situation more awkward..Gauri spoke this time.."I think we should leave Mr.Khan..the party was good and I'm really glad to meet you..", Gauri bid him goodbye..Omkara came back to his sense and said, "I'll talk to you later..chalta hoon.." Daniyal just smile assuring him he understood the situation...

The way to Gauri's home was silent and none of Omkara and Gauri uttered a single word..Omkara was feeling restless..he thought Gauri is angry with him for not letting her know about his relationship with Riddhima..

The car halted before Sharma House and she came out of the car followed by Omkara..

"Gauri..??", called Omkara in a low but audible voice..

She turned and said, "Haan boliye.."

"Can we talk..??", asked Omkara unsure about her response..

Gauri just nodded as an approval and they started walking towards the garden..

"Aap abhi bhi Riddhima se pyaar karte hain..??", Gauri asked straightway looking into his eyes...she never demanded love from Omkara..but it hurts her to see him unaffected..so she just wanted to make everything clear between them..it's been three months and all these time she felt as if she was forcing herself on Omkara..she just wanted assurance from him that she wasn't unwanted in his life..

Omkara was taken aback for a moment...he didn't expect this..

"Gauri..!!", he went to her and wiped the tears in her eyes with his thumb...

"I never wanted to force myself on you, Omkara..I'm sorry for making you feel suffocated with a unwanted relationship..", she told him lowering her head..

Omkara felt thousand knives piercing through his hurt..he was hating the tears in her eyes.."Please don't cry, Gauri..I'm sorry..I should have told you everything..but I was confused about my feelings..I didn't know how tell you about Riddhima...I just wanted to wait for the right time...", he said guiltily...

"I loved Riddhima..but she never cared...she just wanted the Oberoi tag..when I left my home to marry her, she told me that she cannot marry me as I disowned my surname...", Omkara sighed and Gauri looked at him...she could see the broken man before her..she wanted to comfort him..but did she have that right..?? She thought and a lone tear escaped her eyes...

Omkara continued.."When I met you, I thought you wanted to marry me because I'm an Oberoi..and believe me, I curse myself for thinking so..."

He looked into her eyes and said, "I know I'm flawed..I know I'm not perfect..maybe I'm not the person you dreamt of marrying..but I want you to give me a chance..I want you in my life, Gauri..I want to start everything afresh with you...I don't know whether I love you or not, I just know that I need you..I need you to heal me..to teach me to love again..to make me fall for you..please give me a chance..give us a chance..."

As he finished, she just wrapped her arms around his waist and hid herself in his chest..he was feeling his shirt getting wet with her tears...he dropped a kiss on her hairs and murmured, "Please stay with me.."

"Always..", she smiled through tears and hugged him more tightly while he closed his eyes and held her protectively in his arms...



So it's the last shot of ATMJ..

I'm really sorry if I disappoint anyone with the confession part...

And I'm really grateful to each and everyone who read and liked the story...

I just tried my hands on writing with this story..but you guys showered this with so much love and appreciation, for which I cannot thank you enough...

There's an epilogue..I'll post it soon...