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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
It was so sweet!
Finally a happy ending
Loved his confession!!
Waiting for the epilogue

Thank you so much Afrin..
I'm glad you liked his confession...
I'm already done with the epilogue..will post it soon..

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Nice story dear...
Now waiting for epilogue...
Hope Gauri will confess her long time love to him...

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#153

All I want you to know is to never apologise for your creativity spilled in words. It was a no-non-sense short tale. Really liked it. ❤️

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Confession can never be more perfect than this. It was superb.

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

It was beautiful. Please write an epilogue. And keep writing. For a person trying her hand on writing for the first time i t was super.

So best of luck!!

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Tasniiim you did a Splendid job with the ending 👏👏❤️

I LOVED IT

How Om finally realized that Gauri was the one. He is not perfect but he wants her in his life.

My favorite part was that:

He looked into her eyes and said, "I know I'm flawed..I know I'm not perfect..maybe I'm not the person you dreamt of marrying..but I want you to give me a chance..I want you in my life, Gauri..I want to start everything afresh with you...I don't know whether I love you or not, I just know that I need you..I need you to heal me..to teach me to love again..to make me fall for you..please give me a chance..give us a chance..."

I was almost crying😭👏 So sweet how he asked her for a second chance, how to teach him to love , to heal. He knows he has a long way to go before he loves her and that he will do everything he can to be worthy of her love.

He realized that no one could love him as selflessly and unconditionally as Gauri does

and meeting Riddhima opened his eyes! He finally saw how wrong he was in loving her, pinning away her

AMAZING

pls do update the epilogue soon😳

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Hey tasnim🤗

I'm Visit here after long time

And glad you write something on our favourite couple

Read all parts in one go

All parts are amazing and well written behna

Loved ri's character here ..totally bindaass

Confession part was amazing

Waiting for more stuff of yours and afcourse waiting for the epilogue😛 plz update asap

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: dazzles
Nice story dear...
Now waiting for epilogue...
Hope Gauri will confess her long time love to him...

Thank you so much..
I'll post the epilogue soon..
Let's see if she confess her long time love for him or not...

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress
All I want you to know is to never apologise for your creativity spilled in words. It was a no-non-sense short tale. Really liked it. ❤️

Thank you so much..
I'm glad you liked it..
It was my first time in writing and I was hell nervous...but your words are truly inspiring... 😳