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And I thought my chhotu behna was an innocent chirraiyya ...

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

And I thought my chhotu behna was an innocent chirraiyya ...

Tasnim ... I am so absolutely shocked ... Kya likha hai, you have to write more ... Chalk do an OS for me now ... Pleaj ...

Uff, the whole literal 'EK JHAAP MEIN SATT JAIIBE' scene got me like🤣... I was cheering for gauri with pompoms ... Total yeh toh hona hi thha vibes.

Their confession. O.M.G. Can it get sweeter? Can it get simpler? Can it get romantic? It was such a perfect daily soap moment ... What I loved the most was 'Stay with me'

Iss thand mein aag lagane ki kasam khai hai kya ... Jala jala ke dhuan karogi hum sabko ... The epilogue ... You chhupi rustom ... Kya likha hai ... Wah ... Mashallah ... Subahnallah.

Another surprise was a pregnant Gauri ... Gauri in red ... Rikara dancing ... Their night ... The black lace ... Her arrangement ... Behen jaan hi kyon nahi maangli tumne haan ... Baapre kitna temperature badhaya ... I am so surprised ...

Now write me another such romantic OS ... Like Omkara painting gauri ... Remember gauri in that golden Saree ... The green couch and the night ... Likho.

Are behna..main itni bhi bhooli nehi hoon you know.. 😉 😆 I'm not good at writing romantic stuffs..bass ainvaayi socha thoda sanskaar dal doon..I'm glad it helped to rise the temperature in this thand.. 😆
I don't like drama..first I thought to slap Riddhima..then I changed my mind..Ri is sensible..she won't create a scene before everyone..and when her gesture of giving jhaap can make Riddhina bheegi billi then why the need of asli thappad..??
And confession wasn't a love confession actually..Kara wasn't sure if he loves her..but he wanted her in his life..so tried to make it simple..I struggled with words..didn't know kya likhoon..but now I'm satisfied with the way it came out as...
Thank you sho mush behna..pappiesh and jhappish for you...
I don't know if I can write a romantic and sanskaari OS..but I promise, khuda kasam I'll give it an honest try for you..
You know your chhoti behen is yet to celebrate her 18th birthday..so bachhi se likhne mein bhul chukh hogaya maf kar dena...I'll surely try to write paint wala romance..
*LOBS YOU*