Rikara FS - Agar Tum Mil Jao | COMPLETED | Index added on PG 1 | - Page 12

Originally posted by: krits67

It's amazing I loved it

Such a grt story yr

Continue soom

Hey..thank you so much..
I'm glad you like it..

Originally posted by: krits67

It's amazing I loved it

Such a grt story yr

Continue soom

Hey..thank you so much.. I'm glad you like it..

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Thanks dear.. 😃
Omkara wants to start afresh with Ri..anf for that he thinks Gauri should know everything about his past...
Let's see how she reacts..
I haven't planned anything for the party yet except a scene between Ridz and Ri...will try to add your dance part.. 😉

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Can't wait to see her reaction dear😳And a scene between her and Ridz :O

What will they talk about? Will Gauri show her that Riddhima is the one at loss for losing someone like Om? Will Om's respect for Gauri grow?

( Even if the dance is not added I assure you I WILL TOTALLY LOVE the chapter👏👏👏)

Pls do continue soon

Well, both Ri and Ridz has a common chapter in their life which is called Kara..so you can imagine what will they talk about..
😉
Ri will do Oh My Mata of Riddhima..don't know if she'll realise about her loss or not...but Kara will definitely realise what he got in a form of Gauri..
Thanks again..hope you'll like it..

Missed out the last 2 shots. Sorry for that! :)

Originally posted by: _Annie_

Missed out the last 2 shots. Sorry for that! :)

Loved both the parts, tasnim! It was Amazing to see Gauri defending Om and him acknowledging it <3 Really loving how Om is considering this relation and wants to give them a chance :) The growth in their relation is amazing, and you're handling it perfectly :)

And Gauri is such a little patakha here! Aaap chulbul pandey ko nahin jaante??🤣

Thank you for the mention my dear, but it's all you! You have a great story and the execution is perfect :) A tight jhappi back at you for an amazing story🤗

It's okay..I'm glad you liked it..
Gauri will always defend her Kara..and he's realising his feelings for Ri..I don't know if it was too rushed..but in five shots itna hi ho paya...but I'm happy with it as you guys liked it...
You encouraged me a lot to continue...so mention kaise naa karti..?? 😳
Thank you so much for the lovely words Ann..

Shot 5

When Omkara and Gauri entered the party hand in hand, Riddhima frowned seeing them..she didn't expect Omkara to behave so unaffected...she expected him to be shocked to see her with someone else..but what she witnessed hit her ego..she couldn't take the fact that Omkara has moved on forgetting her so soon..she felt irritated and was in no mood to talk with Omkara and his girlfriend..so she moved from there before Omkara could reach her...

Suddenly Daniyal pulled Omkara to his side and gave him a bone crushing hug..he said something to his ears which made him chuckle..

"Won't you introduce me to your lady...??, Daniyal said and Gauri's heart skipped a beat..she wasn't sure if Omkara was comfortable to give their relation a name..

"Meet my girlfriend Gauri..", said Omkara holding her by shoulder..as his fingers touched her bare skin, she felt shivers running down her spine...the physical proximity is new to her...

Gauri came out of her reverie when Omkara tapped her shoulder gently asking her to greet his friend..she felt slightly embarrassed for being so bothered with his simple touch...

The party was unusually boring for Gauri..Omkara was busy with his friends..seems like they met after a long time..her eyes fell on the dance floor..she wanted to dance with Omkara..but he was nowhere to be found..sighing in disappointment Gauri gulped down the drink and handed over the glass to the waiter..she went to a corner and kept staring the couples on the dance floor..she didn't notice the man coming to her..the man was extremely close to her and whispered in her ears, "Can I have a dance with the gorgeous lady..??"

Gauri shivered feeling his breath on her ears..she was going to give him a tight slap when the man said, "Are aap toh dar gaye..!! I was just asking for a dance..lagta hain aapko dance karna bohot pasand hain..." The man tried to make a conversation..but Gauri was in no mood to talk to him..she just stood there trying to find Omkara..she was cursing him for leaving her alone...the man sensed something wrong and asked her if she was looking for someone..Gauri didn't say anything and the man decided to introduce himself first.."Waise main Ajay..Daniyal ki cousin..agar aap kisi dhoond rahi hain aapne saath dance karne ke liye toh I can be your partner...", Ajay said in a exciting tone...

Gauri wanted to say a no..but going against her own will she nodded in a affirmative..she was already upset that Omkara didn't care about her..she needed a break...so she went to the dance floor with Ajay and they started dancing..

Omkara was back with Daniyal when he saw Gauri dancing with a stranger..he was fuming in anger..how can someone else touch her..Omkara went to them and kept his hand on Ajay's shoulder..Ajay turned and Gauri saw Omkara staring Ajay...she was about to say something when Omkara cut her off rising his hand..he looked at Ajay's eyes and said, "I think you're laying your hands on something that belongs to me..." Omkara's eyes were red but his tone was composed..Gauri's eyes widened listening to him..did he just call her his..?? She wasn't getting what was happening until Omkara pulled her towards him and wrapped his hand on her waist...

Ajay thought Gauri to be single..but when Omkara Singh Oberoi claimed her as his, he didn't want to put himself in trouble...so he left the place without making the situation more awkward..

As Ajay left Omkara tightened his grip on Gauri's waist and made her look into his eyes..the intensity of his eyes was enough to make her heart beat a little faster...she looked at him trying to read his eyes.."Why did you dance with him..??", Omkara asked her as he took her hand in his and placed the other on his shoulder..he pressed her more into his body...she felt butterflies in her stomach..she wasn't in a state to answer...she kept staring him..he touched his forehead with hers and closed his eyes as if inhaling her breathes...

Riddhima saw them lost in their own world..somewhere in her heart she felt jealous of Gauri..she has everything now..she's going to be wife of Samar Rana very soon..Ranas are one of the most powerful families of India..she got what she wanted..power, money, name..but love..?? Love is now a beautiful dream to her..she knew Samar is marrying her for mere publicity..she felt hurt...she wanted Omkara back..but couldn't let that happen..her dreams are much more important to her..but she'll not let him live in peace..she'll not let him have a life filled with love while she's craving for love..making a plan in her filthy mind, she went towards them..

"Seems like you forgot everything having her..", said Riddhima making Omkara shocked..

He just started to think about a future with Gauri..but here, his past is standing before him..he wanted to show Riddhima that he was happy with Gauri..but now seeing the evil smirk in her face he felt like her words will destroy his future...he didn't dare to utter a word..he stood there still and Gauri looked at the woman in shock..

"Mujhe toh laga thha humare ek saath bitaye huye woh din tum kabhi nehi bhuloge..par yaha toh tum aapni zindegi maze se jee rahe ho..sach mein iss ladki se pyaar karte ho ya phir sirf time pass hain sab kuch..", Riddhima taunted Omkara..she felt kind of satisfaction seeing him shocked..but she failed to notice the anger in the face of the petite woman standing beside him...



I've decided to post last shot in two parts..here's the first part...will try to post the final part as soon as possible...

Thank you so much for supporting and encouraging me with your comments..

AND THEY DANCED Loved it dear
Especially when Om came and claimef Gauri as his and how he rested his forehead agaibst hers. In that Moment he didn't care about anyone or anything just about Gauri and their future together

Loved how sweetly Gauri reacted to his touch and his words. She was surprised by his possessiveness especially since she thought he didn't like her that way
I LOVED THAT HE INTRODUCED HER AS HIS GILFRIEND❤️

And i want to slap Riddhima:D But can't wait to see what Gauri will tell her ;) after all no one messes with Gauri Kumari Sharmas soon to be husband right? ;)


Dear I really really like this story of yours and I hope you continue soon. I t was amazing and you should definitely write more soon :D you are talented dear
Thank you 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

AND THEY DANCED Loved it dear
Especially when Om came and claimef Gauri as his and how he rested his forehead agaibst hers. In that Moment he didn't care about anyone or anything just about Gauri and their future together

Loved how sweetly Gauri reacted to his touch and his words. She was surprised by his possessiveness especially since she thought he didn't like her that way
I LOVED THAT HE INTRODUCED HER AS HIS GILFRIEND❤️

And i want to slap Riddhima:D But can't wait to see what Gauri will tell her ;) after all no one messes with Gauri Kumari Sharmas soon to be husband right? ;)


Dear I really really like this story of yours and I hope you continue soon. I t was amazing and you should definitely write more soon :D you are talented dear
Thank you 🤗 ❤️

Amel.. 😳
I'm glad you liked the update..
Physical proximity is new to Gauri..her body reacts to his touch before her mind could... 😉
And Omkara's character is just like the show here...he reacts on everything that bothers him..but the calmness is still there..
Riddhima is a witch..she has no idea who GKS is..a jhaap is waiting for her...
Will try to update soon..
Thanks again for your support from the starting.. it feels really good to hear from one of the best Rikara ff writers.. 😳

Ah I love possessive Kara