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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ks_angel

Loved it dear...😃

So emotional...😭

Loved how Om gave it back to Jhanvi...Hoping for this to happen in the show too...
And Gauri supporting Om...😳
ShivRu's letters to Om...feeling sad for the Obro's...😭
And also loved the Shivaay-Pinky conversation...
Rudra leaving with Shivika...😳


Thanks a lot ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Loved it amazing the way I'm have it back to jhanvi wow whet is dadi ?? And yaar can't wait for more parts


Thanks ❤️ ... about dadi I am still kinda thinking about further story ...lets see maybe next update will see her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oh god i am so dreading these episodes these days..


I am myself emotional mess from writing this and offcourse episodes this week 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Part-6

It has been one week since shivika along with rudra has shifted to a mansion in goa that he bought from money he kept as investment on Annika's name . With a MBA degree from oxford and expertise of handling Oberoi empire it was not difficult for shivaay to find investors for his new business . Omkara tried all possible ways to find shivaay and rudra but could'nt and om somewhere knew if shivaay doesnt want to be found then nobody could trace him .
At night , Shivika's room

Shivaay woke up in cold sweat because of another nightmare of Om being in danger . He found annika fast sleep talking again in sleep, blanket thrown to one side , sleeping in awkard position , which made him smile " yeh ladki neend me bhi bolna band nahi karegi " . He very carefully got up from the bed so as to not disturb her and covered her properly with blanket , kissed her forehead and went to the place which he knew could calm turmoil inside him to a extent

The minute shivaay left , tears which annika had been holding came out from the corner of her eyes . From past week she has been observing shivaay , everyday shivaay would wake up screaming from a nightmare and would leave the room to not disturb her . She knew he didnt want her to see him like this so she pretended to sleep . It killed her to see shivaay like that but she knew , she could do nothing but wait for shivaay to finally let go of all the pain he has been bottling up inside in order to move on.

Shivaay entered rudy's almost ended up falling over rudy's shoes " yeh ladka aur iska kamra bachpan se hi aisa hai...kya haal banake rakha hai room ka " . He picked up rudy's shoes and kept it in their rightful place . He sat near rudy's bed , kissed his head , and was about to get up when he noticed rudy holding a frame of their whole family. Shivaay gently pried it from rudy's hand and kept it on bedside and mumbled to a sleeping rudra " mujhe pata hai tu sabko kitna miss kar raha hai , mujhe maaf karde tujhe sabse door karne ke liye ... "

Shivaay entered his room but he knew sleep was far away from his eyes , so he moved to the window , thinking how similar his life was currently to this night complete darkness with few stars in form of rudra and annika and tears came out of corner of his eyes remembering all that he lost. Suddenly he felt two arms snaking around his waist and resting her head on his back , he urgently wiped his tears " Annika I am sorry maine tumhe utha diya "

Hearing his voice , annika gently removed her arms from around him and came in front of him and said in calm tone " aanso to ponch lege , par yeh aankhen jo apke dil ka dard btati hai inke kaise chupayge "

Shivaay mumbled in child like voice " nahi vo to bas mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi "

Annika kept her hand on shivaay's cheek " kyu kar rahe hai aisa , ek baad dil kholke ro lijiye varna yeh dard aapko andar se tod dega ...aur agar aapko kuch ho gaya to main mar jaaugi "

Hearing about death from annika's mouth shivaay lost it and shouted " PAGAL HOGAYI HO TUM ...himmat kaise hui aisa bolni ..tum bhi mujhe chodh ke jaana chahti ..tumhe bhi mujh par yakeen nahi hai ...sab mujhe chodh ke chale jayge ...akela reh jauga main " .
Everything shivaay had bottled up came to surface and he fell to his knees wailing in anguish and raw pain ..mumbing in trance " kisi ko mujh par bharosa nahi hai , sab mujhe chodh ke jana chahte hai ...main haar gaya "

Annika sat beside shivaay pulling him in hug , constantly rubbing his chest , peppering kisses on his head , cheek to calm him whispering soft words " sshhh main hu aapke saath humesha ...shivaay annika ek hai aur inhe koi alag nahi kar sakta ... hum sab theek karedege "

Shivaay kept his head in annika's head and said in a choked voice " kya main itna bura hu ..kisi ne mujh par bharosa kyu nahi kiya ...mujhe pata tha ki main jo kar raha hu usse sab mujhse naraaz hoge par yeh nahi socha tha paraya hi kardege ... "

Annika kissed shivaay's forehead " Shivaay aap iss din duniya ke sabse ache insaan hai ... jab hum dono ek doosre ko pasand nahi karte the na , tab bhi mujhe aapke parivaar ke kiye aapke pyaar par pura bharosa tha ... aur mujhe yakeen hai sabko ek din jab sach pata lagega to woh aapko khud lene aayge , humara parivaar ek din zaroor saath hoga "

Shivaay looked at her with childlike expression " aisa hoga na ... sab mujhe maaf kardege na "

Annika took shivaay's hand in her hand and kissed it " aur kya koi zyada der gussa reh sakta hai aapse ... " . She looked down to found shivaay asleep , pained expression and tear marks visible on his face . She wiped his tears and said in a determined voice " main aapka har dard door kardugi yeh aapki annika ka vaada hai aapse " . Annika rested her back on the wall and closed her eyes preparing herself for the battle ahead .

Shivaay woke up with the first ray of sunlight , rubbed his eyes and for the first time since they left house , he felt quite light hearted . He then realised he slept in annika's lap and because of that she had to sleep in awkard position . He quickly got up and carried annika in his arms to lay her properly on bed because it was too early for her to get up . Feeling shivaay's touch annika nestled her head in crook of shivaay's neck which made shivaay smile , he kissed her forehead in response and carefully placed annika on bed covering her with blanket and was about to go when annika held his hand

Shivaay turned back and said with a grin " tum uth gayi ...so jao abhi boht jaldi nahi hai tumhare uthne ke liye "

Hearing that annika got up in jiffy " haww aapka kya matlab main soti rehti hu sara din "

Shivaay smirked " nahi saara din to nahi par 12 baje se pehle to nahi uthti atleast "

Annika felt nice to see her tadibaaz bagad billa make a comeback but she replied in mock anger " aapki information ke liye bata du aaj main jaldi hi uthne wali thi ... mera aaj interview hai uss event management company me ...kya naam tha uskaaa...haa Panasche "

Shivaay asked in a serious voice " Annika ...are u sure tum kaam karna chahti ho ..iski koi zaroorat nahi hai "

Annika came near shivaay and placed her hand on shivaay's cheek and replied in a soft voice " shivaay baat zaroorat ki nahi hai man ki hai ...main janti hu aapke rehte mujhe kisi cheez ki kami nahi hogi ...par main akele ghar pe pura din bore ho jati hu ..aap aur rudra to office chale jate hai "

Shivaay replied with a smile kissing her forehead " theek hai jaisa tumhe sahi lage " and then a thought came to his mind and he smirked " aur vaisi bhi tumhe ghar par akela chodha to pata nahi kya haal karogi ghar ka... pta hai main rudra kitna dar gaye the pure ghar me dhuaa dekh ke "
Hearing that Annika cheeks turned red and she said in a embarassed voice " vo to main bas kuch khaane ka banane ka soch rahi thi "

Shivaay pinched her cheeks " awww somebody is embarassed ..but seriously tum agar ek din akele ghar ka yeh haal karti ho to koi event kaise manage karogi "
Annika taunted " acha ji bhool aapke kitni shaadiya plan ki hai maine ..5 ya 6 to hogi hi...Shivaay Singh oberoi ki shaadi ko plan karne se bada koi kaam nahi "

Shivaay chuckled hearing that and suddenly pulled her closer , looping his arms around her waist rubbing her cheeks with his own and whispered seductively " achaa meri 5-6 shaadiya plan ki hai tumne ...par har baar tumhari vajah se todni bhi padi na ...aur aakhir me phasa hi liya tumne mujhe "

Annika tried to get out from shivaay's hold " haaww phasaya maine aapko ...chodiye mujhe ...koi baat nahi karni mujhe aapse " saying that turned her face on other side

Shivaay kissed her cheek and cupped her cheek lovingly " phas to usi din gaya tha , jiss din pehli baar tumhe dekha tha ...tumhari har cheez ..har weird aadat ... mujhe tumhari taraf kheechti gayi ... aur ab bas humesha aise hi phasa rehna chahta "

Annika had tears listening that " Aap na ekdum ajeeb hai ...kabhi bhi gussa dilate hai aur kabhi bhi pyaar "

Shivaay wiped her cheeks " aur tum jo har baat pe roti hai "

Annika hugged shivaay resting her head near his heart " Hum dono hi ekdum ajeeb hai ...isley to ek doosre ke liye bane hai "

Shivaay pulled apart and kissed her forehead " chalo tum naha kar aao tab tak main dekhta hu rudy utha ki nahi ...neend ke mamle me tum par gaya hai "

Annika hit shivaay playfully " jaiye aur haa aaj breakfast aap banyage ...maid ne aana nahi aaj aur aapke hisaab se mujhe khaana banana aata nahi ...so breakfast me Aloo puri honi chahiye aapki koi english vinglish recipes nahi ...samjhe "

Shivaay bowed down dramatically " yes mam ... aur kuch "

Annika chuckled " nahi ...abhi ke liye bas itna hi "
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
MY favourite chapter So far
Very nicel written
Very enjoyable to read


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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: S.love1

MY favourite chapter So far

Very nicel written
Very enjoyable to read



Thank you soo much 😊 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
aww loving this anika giving such wifey kind orders
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

aww loving this anika giving such wifey kind orders

loved it


Thanks ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Very nice story
On gng track...
Good that Rudy is also with Shivika
Poor.om left alone...
Continue soon

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