SS:Vanvaas (part 6 pg 6 updated) 16/12

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Svetlana has blackmailed shivaay to transfer all his shares on her name but in front of family to pretend its omru's share and create circumstances so as to leave the family...



"Bohot pyaar karte ho na tum apne bhaiyoo se to aise kaise hona diya tumne ...jawaab do mujhe BTAAOO " tej
roared


"Meri baat sunniyee... " pleaded shivaay


"Chup ekdum chup ...main jab bhi omru ko kehta h zimmedaar bnane ko apna haq maangne ko to kahi na kahi mujhe bhi lagta tha ki main galat kar raha hu ...kyuki mujhe bharosa tha SHIVAAY kabhi apne bhaiya ka bura nahi krega par aaj tumne mujhe galat prove kar diyaa " said tej dejected


Shivaay closed his eyes ,clenching his hands so hard..that blood came out from his hands


"Please shivaay kuch boliye ...sabko btaiye ki aap kabhi aisa nahi kar sakte ...mujhe aap pe pura yakeen hai ..please shivaay kuch boliye kuch boliye sab aapko galat samjh rahe hai " cried Annika[


Shivaay turned his eyes not able to face annika
Dadi came and put her hand on shivaay's head with tears in her eyes said "mera billu kabhi galat nahi kar sakta...uska dil sheeshe ki tarah saaf hai ..bata sach sabko mujhe pata tu apne bhaiyo ko apni jaan se bhi zayda pyaar karta hai "


Shivaay closed his eyes in pain and then with determination said "main kisi ko reason nahi bata sakta...mujhe itna to bharosa kijiye "


Rudra came and stood beside shivaay holding his hand shouted "Bas Bohot ho gaya kitni der se dekh raha hu sab shivaay bhaiya ko kos rahe ho...Mere aur O ke shares hai naa ..jab humne unse kuch nhi pucha to aap log kon hote hai unse sawaal puchne wale... "


"RUDY tumhare hi vishvaas ka nateeja hai yeh ...karte ho na apne bhaiyo se pyaar to prove karo ...kardo apni har cheez unke naam aur chale jaoo iss ghar se kyuki jab tak tum yaha rahoge humesha yeh tumhare sahare chalenge..khud kabhi aage nahi badh payge " demanded tej


"TEJJ pagal hogaya hai tu " shouted dadi


Shivaay seeing a way to fulfill svetlana ...with determination in his voice said "yahi chahte hai na bade papa to yahi hoga ...chala jaunga main ...omru ki kamzoori nahi banuga...unke liye main apni jaan de sakta hu ..to yeh kya cheez hai "


Pinky shouted "yahi to chahte the aap Jethji sab kuch aapke beto ko mil jaye ...mere bete ne apni mehnat se oberoi empire badhayaa hai ..aur aapke beto ne kiya kya hai aaj tak ..ek nashedi tha aur ek ladkio ke peeche pagal ...mere shivaay ne un dono ko apni maa se aage rakha ..khud se bhi aage mila kya usse Vanvaas "


Shivaay disapproving pinky "koi kuch nahi bolega bade papa ko yeh mera faisla hai "


Pinky cried "par shivaay.. "


Shivaay looking straight in pinky's eyes put her hand on his head "agar aaj tak kabhi bhi apne mera dil se bhala chaha hai na to aap kisi ko kuch bura nhi bolegi na bade papa ko na omru ko aapko meri kasam "


Pinky sighed in resignation "main haar gayi shivaay haar gayi tere pyaar ke aage saying that went near Annika and cried folding her hands in apology " Main jante hu main aaj tak tujhe apnaya nhi ..par main yeh bhi jaanti hu ki shivaay ke liye tera pyaar sachaa hai ..tu uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai ...mere bacche ka khayal rakhna "


Annika hugged her in response "main shivaay ka apni jaan se bhi zyda khayal rakhugi
"


Gauri coming near shivaay "bade bhaiyaa aapne to mujhe apni behen mana hai na ...to meri khaatir mat jaiyee...omkaraji hume kabhi maaf nahi krege agar unke yaha na hote hue humne yeh sab hone dia "


Shivaay putting his hand lovingly on her head with red eyes said " behn mana hai tabhi yeh sab kar raha hu ..tum sab humesha mere liye mujhse bhi zaroori rahoge...aur mera Om thoda gussail hai par utni hu shiddat se pyaar karta hai..us se koi galti ho jaye to maaf kar dena "


Gauri " mat jaiye na fir agar hum aur omkaraji ladege to hume kon samjhayega "


Shivaay chuckling with tears "bache ho tum dono ..ek ziddi to doosri pagli ..tumhara pyaar tumhe raasta dikhaya ...apna aur Om ka dhyaan rakhna itni si baat maan lena apne bade bhai ki "


Gauri closing her eyes sighed "jaisa aap chahte hai hum vaisa karege kyuki hume apne shankarji par bharosa aap vaapis aayge ..aap teeno ka pyaar aapko alag nhi hone dega ..Shivomru ek doosre ke hisse hai ..inhe koi alag nhi kar sakta "


Rudy hearing that started crying holding shivaay's leg "Bhaiyaa please aisa mat kariye...bachpan se aapne hum dono ko sambhala hai ...jab bhi mummy papa ladte the aapne hume unn sab cheezo se door rakha hai...mere aur O ke liye sab ho..aap nahi to kuch nahi...agar O ko pata laga na maine yaha se jane diye vo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega "


Shivaay taking rudy's hand made him stand up ,wiping his tears said "apne bhaiyaa pe bharosa rakh rudyy..maanega na tu meri baat..sabka khayaal rakhna..tu hi kehta hai na tu ab bacchaa nahi hai ..tujhe saari zimmedari de raha hu..Om to ziddi hai...usse gusse me kisi cheez ka khayal nahi rehta apna bhi nhi usse sambhal liyo "


Rudy hugging shivaay tightly cried bitterly " nahi hu main bada ...hu main bachaa aapka baby cry baby ...apne bachhe ko chodh ke mat jaao ..nahi reh paunga main aapke bina.. "


Shivaay controlling his tears "tu humesha mera pehla bachha rahega rudy par kabhi kabaar apno ki bhalaai ke liye unse door jana padta hai... " detaching his hand went to his room to pack his belongings Annika following him


Rudy fell to his knees crying bitterly "mere superman mujhe chodh ke haa rahe hai


Bhavya sitting near rudy keeping her hand on his shoulder "rudra sambhaliye apne aap ko..aapke parivaar ko aapki zaarurat hai "


Shivika's room


Annika found shivaay crying with family's photo in his hand and half packed bag beside him "jab inse door hone ka soch kar hi aapka yeh haal hai to kyu kar rahe hai aisa btaiye shivaay "


Shivaay stood up in a flash and hugging annika cried "inke bhalai ke liye hi to kar raha hu..agar maine yeh sab nahi kiya to svetlana kuch bhi kar sakti hai.. "


Annika rubbing his back controlling herself so as to not be weak in front of shivaay
Hum kaise rahege sabke bina ..aap kaise rahege omru ke bina "


Shivaay pulling himself from the hug holding annika's hand in her own hiccupped " Annik..kaa mujh...hee maa...aaf kardo "


Annika ran to bring shivaay a glass of water ..making him drink it " shhh shaant ho jaiyee shivaay ki baat ki maafi aapki kya galti hai "


Shivaay again crying " tum bachpan se parivaar ke liye tadpi ho ..aur jab finally tumhe family ka pyaar mila hai main tumhe unse alag kar raha hu...vaada kiya tha tumse tumhe duniya ki saari khushiya dunga aur aaj main hi tumhare dukhon ka kaaran ban raha hu...mujhe maaf kardo maaf krdo "


Annika shushing him keeping hand on his mouth " Mere liyee aap sab kuch hai shivaay ..mere No 1 jiske aas paaas meri duniya ghoomti hai ...aapse zyaada ya aapse kum mujhe kuch nahi chahiyee...aur rahi baat parivaar ki to hum sirf unse door rahege door nahi hoge ...pyaar ka rishta dil se hota hai ..jab dil judee ho to kuch alag nahi kar sakta ...omru mere bhaai rahege ...gauri meri behn aur yeh parivaar mera apnaa ..aap dekhna humara pyaar hi hume vapas yaha layga "


Shivaay embracing her again with soft voice said " aisa hoga na annika... "

BR]Annika with determination " hoga shivaay Main hu aapke saath aur aapki Annika aapke ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai ...chaliye sambhaliye apne aap ko hume apna farz nibhana hai "


Shivaay wiping his tears stood up with hard look in his eyes " chalo annika ..aakhri baar apne ghar ko jee bhar ke dekh lete hai "


Guyz this is my take on vanvaas track ..hope you like it ..

Part 1 & 2 : pg 1
Part 3 : pg 2
Part 4 : pg 4
Part 5 : pg 5
Edited by kavleen17 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i just hope this track will end soon.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
This probably might happen. It's interesting. Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
It was so painful and heart wrenching 🥺💔😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Hi dear...😊
Emotional OS...😭

Vanvaas is one of the tracks i have been waiting for since the first promo...Thank you for this OS...👏😳

Shivaay's pain was heartbreaking...The man who has brought up the family as Shivaay has leaving them would be the biggest punishment he can get...and Shivaay is accepting it on himself...😭

And Tej...ergh I have no words for that man...

Shivaay's conversation with Gauri and Rudra...😭

Shivaay breaking down holding the family photo...
Annika's pain because of Shivaay's pain...
And Shivaay apologizing to Annika for taking the family that she had come to love ,away again...😭
He cares for everybody so much...

Thank you so much for this OS dear...
Keep writing...👏😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Annika held shivaay's hand and shivaay clutched her fingers with his own in firm grip and both walked together towards poolside .
Shivaay left annika's hand and moved towards pool "tumhe pata hai annika kitni raatien maine aur omru ne yaha baatien karke bitayi hai ..aur pata hai rudy to meri god me hi so jata tha ...aur fir na " saying that shivaay closed his eyes in pain remembering every moment

annika moved towards shivaay and kept her hand on shivaay's shoulders "fir kya shivaay "


Shivaay taking her hand in his own and keeping it near his heart "fir kya bachpan me to main usse uthakr andar sula deta ..par socho ab kaise uthata rudy ko ..body builder jo ban gaya hai " shivaay said chuckling lost in the moment

Annika laughed at that tears in her eyes " baat to sahi hai body chodho ...height to dekho "

Hearing which shivaay glared at her in mock anger " Kitna bada hogaya na mera bachaaa..Annika kya reh payga vo mere bina ..pta hai jab main london gaya tha padhne ke liye ...tab kitna roya thaa..khaana peena sab chodh diya tha..beemar tak pad gaya " said shivvay with childlike expression on his voice

Annika moved toward shivaay and brought their interlinked hands close to her face and kissed on his ring finger " shivaay rudy aapka bhai hai ...jitne strong aap hai utna strong vo hai ..aur mujhe us par pura bharosa hai ..vo apne aap ko aur pure ghar ko sambhalega "


Shivaay looked at her with admiration on his face " tumhe pata hai annika..rudy na starting se chahta tha ki hum dono saath ho ...tumhara sabse bada supporter hai vo...kitni raatien maine aur omru ne yaha tumhari baatien kari hai "

annika raised her imaginary collar with pride " vo to hona hi tha kyuki main hu hi khidkitod ...aur vaise bhi rudy aapse smart hain ...vo apne bhaiya ki pasand unse pehle janta tha "


Shivaay overwhelmed with emotions hugged her and annika kept rubbing his back in support.

Shivaay controlling his emotions " chlo annika tumhe hamari yaadon ka sabse anmol hissa dikhata hu " saying that shivaay took her to kitchen holding her hand
Shivaay looked at her with tears in eyes "maine tumhe aaj tak nahi btaya na ki maine khaana kyu banana seekha " to which annika nodded her head in no..shivaay moved towards the kitchen shelf and moved his hand over it as if to reminisice every moment " main shayad 14 saala ka houga...ek baar na main aur omru ghar pe akele the koi nahi tha...na badi maa ...na maa aur na hi dadi ...aur fir omru ko bohot tez bhook lag rahi thi ..par na om bohot ziddi tha vo sirf ghar ke logo ke haath ka khana khata tha " saying that shivaay stopped


Annika fully engrossed in the story " fir kya hua shivaay... "

shivaay wiping his tears chuckled " hona kya tha uss din pehli baar Shivaay singh oberoi ne kitchen me kadam rakha ..aur mujhe yaad hai zyda kuch nahi 2 min noodles banayi thi
...par vo khake jo khushi omru ke chehre pe aayi thi na..uss wajah se mujhe cooking se pyaar ho gaya ". saying that shivaay started crying bitterly leaning on the counter .


Annika went towards shivaay's side in a flash and with tears in own eyes said "shivaay aapko pata hai maine pehli baar us khadoos SSO se alag kab jaana tha..rakhi ka din yaad hai sab aap pe sawaal utha rahe the aapke pyaar pe...par aapne palatke jawab nahi diya bhale hi aap sab om liye kar rahe the ... aur baat me jab sab sach jaane ke baad apse maafi maang rahe the ..apne unhe jhat se maaf kar diya ek baar bhi bura nahi maana.. " saying that annika kept her hand on his heart and said "aapka na yeh dil itna pyaara hai...jisse pyaar karte hai us par jaan chidakte hai ...mujhe garv hai ki main aap jaise insaan se pyaar karte hu ..aap mere pati hai "


Shivaay whispered in voice choked with tears "Nahi hu main achaa apne hi bhaaiyo ..apne hi parivaar ko chot pahucha raha hu " and started beating his hand on the wall .

Annika in panic tried to snatch his hand but shivaay paid no heed to her "shivaay please ruk jaiye ...please " saying that started crying bitterly .

Hearing her cries pain shivaay finally came to senses and hugged her with all his might " nahi ho bardaash yeh dard ... " saying that shivaay fell to his knees giving into his pain .

Annika knelt beside him taking his head on her lap and rubbing his hair to sooth him "Aapka dard mera hai ...main hu aapke saath shivaay "
Edited by kavleen17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
anika tak good care of our hero
he needs your full support now
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Very nice update. Do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
The fbs are so emotional .
Shivika are so emotional 😭.
All because of Lana😡.
Please continue story is interesting😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Soon painful nd emotional
Brought tears in my eyes
Continue soon

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