Shivika OS: I Feel Complete | An SR based OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: LoveNakuulMehta

Mush is showing an exponential improvement 😆

Originally posted by: Blink_Cat

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first time in my reading history.😆
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this is so amazing, t way u describe h whole scene was amazing n being with anikas POV make this way better,,,
t morning stuff(my love) so amazing, n word caught my attention is femini she feel after t night.. n possive shivaay, think he is hars on ani, bt buddu dnt know that he can never b..
lovely is washoff t paint scene... hope we have 1 in show also.. also in a way this make them complete...
also wakeup scene in t show n hug is my fav. too.. so much feels.
hope to read more frm ur side.
thanks for PM

Originally posted by: Thwisha617

very nice

the after effects of laal ishq!

completes it

brilliant😃😳

Originally posted by: farinaks

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It was so beautiful magical mind blowing

Nd I loved ur way of presentation musHi. ...nd ur thought of crafting it from annika's pov was lovely ...nd my favourite line was 'she felt so feminine after the last night'

And big 🤗 for this . ..though I wanna snd kisses from u but forum lack that emoji

Standing ovation for u 👏👍🏼 After reading it I'm like ☺️🥳 not recovered from that episode yet nd know this os of Urs. ..rrest u planning to murder me

Nd bout the epi it was BREATHTAKING RAVISHINGn SENSUOUS ND YET SOOO BEAUTIFUL. ...NND BLISS TO WATCH ...he is just incredible nd love..

Originally posted by: Maisha123

This is the Best surprise I got today

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One of the most beautiful pieces ever written by you Mushfi!!! It was such a bliss to read, I'm falling short in words to express what i felt reading this shot. I don't think i can thank you enough for making it from Anika's point of view for the same reasons you mentioned in your note. the way you described her feeling with his every touch, ufff I need time to come out of it!!!

I absolutely loved how you connected whole sr sequence to a mean of taking away Anika's insecurity and making her feel worthy. Such a wonderful message that no matter how much you tell yourself that you're independent and doing just fine all alone in this journey of life, you'll always someone to make you realize your value. And who else can do it better than your husband...god, How do you come up with such stuff? I think my mouth was left open for god knows how long cause i was so engrossed into reading these emotions behind Anika.

BEST PART: you didn't rush for them to do 'it'. you first showed she started feeling strong and powerful after that kiss. how worthy she started to feel and how confident she was with his touch. and THEN she surrendered herself to him.. which was exactly the case on the show too, except that I never saw it until i read this shot. Just HOW do you write every shot of yours with such perfection? how do you see such small things that I can never see?! This is just so so so gorgeous mushfi!!!

And then omg the pool scene...anika is scared of water aww😳 And shivay didn't let her go when she pleaded to get herself out of water...rather he held her tighter and said to trust him with all his insecurities and fear... Tell me one thing Mushfika, do you need more reasons after this as to WHY I love your stories so much? Like, what the hell are you even? you're not real! Who thinks like THIS?!!

The morning scene my god, Love love love it. Shivay's overprotective side. The way he got panicked seeing those bruises☺️ And then he asks her placing his hand on her abdomen, indirectly whether she has pain in her lower body...I almost died at this point. This is why I love you so much...you just give such a real and home feeling to everything ...I don't know...I really don't know what to say anymore.

thank you for making me relive the entire SR scene once again, with such explicit and blissful point of view of Anika. This was a MASTERPIECE 👏

Originally posted by: kaavya009

Mushfika you just nailed it love. Loved it to the power of infinity 😃, A bear hug for writing this beautiful piece of work 🤗

Originally posted by: elysianights

Hello Mushfika! ❤️

Was surfing through the forum and end up reading this beautiful piece of literary. To be true I loved how you showcased annika pov in this, it was a bliss to read this. And it's jist tempting me to go and see the laal Ishq scene again 😳

And the aftermath! Hayyeee!! *dead at the spot* I just love protective Singh Oberoi *day dreaming* he is Love Just PURE LOVE.

Do write more!

Love,

-Anya.

Originally posted by: yash2010

Hugs ... n you finished the unfinished part if the story making it complete. Oh how i wish they did the same in the show . But no worries write up is always better than onscreen play . Thsnk you .