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One of the most beautiful pieces ever written by you Mushfi!!! It was such a bliss to read, I'm falling short in words to express what i felt reading this shot. I don't think i can thank you enough for making it from Anika's point of view for the same reasons you mentioned in your note. the way you described her feeling with his every touch, ufff I need time to come out of it!!!
I absolutely loved how you connected whole sr sequence to a mean of taking away Anika's insecurity and making her feel worthy. Such a wonderful message that no matter how much you tell yourself that you're independent and doing just fine all alone in this journey of life, you'll always someone to make you realize your value. And who else can do it better than your husband...god, How do you come up with such stuff? I think my mouth was left open for god knows how long cause i was so engrossed into reading these emotions behind Anika.
BEST PART: you didn't rush for them to do 'it'. you first showed she started feeling strong and powerful after that kiss. how worthy she started to feel and how confident she was with his touch. and THEN she surrendered herself to him.. which was exactly the case on the show too, except that I never saw it until i read this shot. Just HOW do you write every shot of yours with such perfection? how do you see such small things that I can never see?! This is just so so so gorgeous mushfi!!!
And then omg the pool scene...anika is scared of water aww😳 And shivay didn't let her go when she pleaded to get herself out of water...rather he held her tighter and said to trust him with all his insecurities and fear... Tell me one thing Mushfika, do you need more reasons after this as to WHY I love your stories so much? Like, what the hell are you even? you're not real! Who thinks like THIS?!!
The morning scene my god, Love love love it. Shivay's overprotective side. The way he got panicked seeing those bruises☺️ And then he asks her placing his hand on her abdomen, indirectly whether she has pain in her lower body...I almost died at this point. This is why I love you so much...you just give such a real and home feeling to everything ...I don't know...I really don't know what to say anymore.
thank you for making me relive the entire SR scene once again, with such explicit and blissful point of view of Anika. This was a MASTERPIECE 👏
Edited by Maisha123 - 7 years ago
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