Shivika OS: I Feel Complete | An SR based OS - Page 2

Fabulous

Awesome one shot loved it so much.

Hi Mushfika ! 👏👏👏

This was amazing beyond words ! fabulous and breathtaking ! It would have been the exact feelings of Anika. I loved the morning after part especially the concerned shivaay who makes sure his lady is fine. The reply she gives is enough to take away all his concerns ! The bruises were a great add on, in fact I went on to assume that had happened in the serial too that's why Anika wore a high neck top.

The way you narrated about letting go of her insecurities and overcoming fear were too good. Your choice of words and the flow with which you write is beyond imagination. Keep writing and do PM me when you post the next OS ! 👍🏼

-An ardent fan : Vishaka.

Awesome update yar...

Extremely sorry for late review...
This update is just beyond anything... Love the way you had portrait anika's emotions...
Lovely lovely and lovely.. That's what I want to say know..
Tnq so much for pm...

awesome analysis

Well well well, look who's back from heaven. Exams and uni stuff sab bahane hai, in real toh you didn't rant to come back 😆

On a more serious note; this is pure beauty. Agreed, that it's not easy at all to pen down their feelings, be it Anika or Shivaay. Because like I said, they itself are a feeling, but you tried and it's more than good.

Yes Anika has always been the one to shy away from her feelings, even though she was the first one to realize her feelings for him but she has never been vocal about her deepest inner feelings. All of this was so new and unknown to get, that she was too scared to give those feelings a voice, afraid it might be a dream and all of it will shatter into pieces. But destiny made it up to her and how; by giving her the biggest and most important reason to live, her Shivaay. She was right when she said that she has seen his worst and also his best. Now, she saw another dimension of her Shivaay and she let loose herself too. Indeed, nothing vulgar about it at all. In fact, it is indeed by far the most beautiful SR ever on TV. Everything was just perfect; visuals, direction, camerawork, execution, fusion of the songs, performance, body language, expressions, movements, the feelings and emotions. It was and will always be a visual treat!

Laal Ishq is not only a song anymore; it is those words that were meant to bring two bodies together, to mingle two souls, to make two halves complete, to make Shivaay and Anika become one...

Even I liked their after scene; that was pure bliss and made it complete for me personally

Mush, your version gives so many feels too. It's just heartwarming to finally see these two on a whole other level and be genuinely happy and satisfied with life. Although, cheapda Shivaay can never have enough of his wife 😉

Thanks a ton for this, despite of being hell busy, toh still managed to write so beautifully and makes us all happy 😳 🤗

You just KILLED me!!!!!!
I am just speechless.
I don't think so that my words will tell what I feel right now.
I am totally turned on!
Shivaay's concern was fan.
There was rarely any conversation between the two but man-oh-man, you nailed it!!!!
You should really write more hot OSs.
And thanks for the pm.

Loved ur version of laal Ishq. Totally engrossed in reading it version.

lovely can so imagine shivaay reacting like this