Shivika OS: I Feel Complete | An SR based OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: S.love1

Fabulous

Emotions were expressed so beautifully, loved reading each sentence

A marvellous writer

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Awesome one shot loved it so much.

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Aparna, that episode just left me in daze. words won't suffice for that episode. Nakuul being nakuul just pulled off so many emotions for his lady without uttering a single word in that complete stretch of the paint scene while Surbhi just nailed it from every which way with her surreal beauty and that mixed reactions of nervousness, excitement and overjoy with the sense of finally feeling complete.

So happy you liked this shot. I was so nervous until I read all your comments. Thank you so much for all the appreciation my love🤗

Originally posted by: shivika_65

Hi Mushfika ! 👏👏👏

This was amazing beyond words ! fabulous and breathtaking ! It would have been the exact feelings of Anika. I loved the morning after part especially the concerned shivaay who makes sure his lady is fine. The reply she gives is enough to take away all his concerns ! The bruises were a great add on, in fact I went on to assume that had happened in the serial too that's why Anika wore a high neck top.

The way you narrated about letting go of her insecurities and overcoming fear were too good. Your choice of words and the flow with which you write is beyond imagination. Keep writing and do PM me when you post the next OS ! 👍🏼

-An ardent fan : Vishaka.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

you beautifully portrayed Annika's pov yar...

its something beautiful...Totally loved it

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Mush, why do you even doubt your writing ???

You just enhance the beauty of Shivika with your writing...

Narbhi nailed with their expressions without exchanging a single word and girl you nailed by penning the thoughts that they both went through... they exchanged a lot with their eyes and touches and you gave them the words that they never uttered...❤️

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Extremely sorry for late review...
This update is just beyond anything... Love the way you had portrait anika's emotions...
Lovely lovely and lovely.. That's what I want to say know..
Tnq so much for pm...

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Although I like to go by order in terms of replying, I'm gonna break it just 'cause I know I won't be able to work in peace until I say this: Rohini, your comments will always act like the sweets in my bitter and stressful life 😆 You've been encouraging me since "Time of The Month" and it is no exception this time and I can't tell you how much it means to me...🤗

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Mush, why do you even doubt your writing ???

You just enhance the beauty of Shivika with your writing...

Narbhi nailed with their expressions without exchanging a single word and girl you nailed by penning the thoughts that they both went through... they exchanged a lot with their eyes and touches and you gave them the words that they never uttered...❤️

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Oh and omg you became yellow from blue!! It took me a moment to realize it's you 😆 I'm always so used to seeing your UN in blue lol ..

P.S. Replied above if you didn't check ❤️