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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

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I will be replying to one page per day lol..Sorry! my schedule is being a jerk. But read all the comments and ☺️

Hugs and kisses for being the best readers in the world

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@BoonAndBane

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Res😳😳

Unres😆😆

Hey Mushfika😊😊,

It was such a lovely read that I can't describe that in words. 😛😛
I won't be exaggerating if I say that I enjoyed reading your shot more than the actual scene.😳😳
Though the actual scene was perfect the way it was. But in the scene with no dialogue, there is a scope of imagination which depends upon the mind of the viewer ( And my imagination regarding scenes is usually 😕😕).
But while writing one can pen down the unsaid and unexpressed emotions too.😃😃
I just loved how had an amazing build-up of the story. Annika's fear of submitting herself in love which was something that comes naturally to Annika. 👏👏
Amazing work dear.⭐️⭐️

Edited by Rainzz - 7 years ago

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Wow i wanted to read something like this

Laal ishq completed

Thank you!

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Maisha

@Maisha123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Mushfika

Maisha, why do you always do this to me? 😒 why do you manage to leave ME so tongue-tied with your words😒

The best part about your entire comment is how you understood every unsaid thing...esp @red bold.

And thank YOU for making me not regret my decision of writing this on friday night. your comment just made my evening yaar. like, how do you even manage to gather all these love for me and my stories😆😳 Love you to the moon and back 🤗

Mushfi🤗 I feel like I'm hearing back from you after years. Its my pleasure my dear. you just blow my mind with every shot and I am forced to say all that. Love you too my dear...love you too❤️

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Maisha

@Maisha123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

I was shocked for a second when i saw a comment on something I couldn't remember even reading the title of. and then i realized you changed the title from complete to i feel complete rofl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Maisha123
I was shocked for a second when i saw a comment on something I couldn't remember even reading the title of. and then i realized you changed the title from complete to i feel complete rofl

Lmao same thing happened to me. Yeh ladki bhi Na 🤪

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: LoveNakuulMehta

Lmao same thing happened to me. Yeh ladki bhi Na 🤪

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: minamma
Mushfika could you please actually give us the flashback of how shivika actually done the deed...
Please i know you can write it so well
Its a humble request

I swear I'm just downright horrible at writing such stuff.So I don't wanna present an utter crap to you guys by writing that genre and make a fool of myself 😆 I'm surprised I even wrote this shot lol. Sorry yaar😒

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jarir2010
brilliant os

Thank you!😳

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Apu_915
That was an amazing read Mushfika. Totally loved it ❤️
Emotions were so beautifully written. How do you always manage to write something this good? 😆
Even I had wanted something from Anika's POV, like her letting go of the insecurities.
No doubt the Laal Ishq sequence was so beautiful. Everything was perfect from the cinematography to Narbhi's precious expressions. It was passionate but not vulgar. Then I loved the morning scene of them hugging. Such a visual treat
I still haven't recovered from that episode & everyday we're getting cute Shivika scenes. Their casual, intimate conversation & the way they love reading eachbither is so endearing 😳 Cheapda Shivaay is also back ☺️
Keep Writing!
Lots of love ❤️
-Aparna

Aparna, that episode just left me in daze. words won't suffice for that episode. Nakuul being nakuul just pulled off so many emotions for his lady without uttering a single word in that complete stretch of the paint scene while Surbhi just nailed it from every which way with her surreal beauty and that mixed reactions of nervousness, excitement and overjoy with the sense of finally feeling complete.

So happy you liked this shot. I was so nervous until I read all your comments. Thank you so much for all the appreciation my love🤗