Tum Bin..! A RiKara OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: NESRIA

super

very emotional AND SAD but it felt so real

you are a good writer plz keep giving us rikara stories😉

Thank you for reading n liking it dear. :)

Originally posted by: rikara94

Piyu darling🤗

So you did..likh hi dali..i am very happy that you wrote this..i always like your post or analysis on rikara and i knew that if you will write a shot on rikara that will also be wonderfull...but i had no idea that have an amazing ability and writing skills..you did great job darling👏

Ammm...i have nothing to say about it yar.. i have zero to express my feelings..i hope samjh jayegi my darling😳

You know goosebumps aa gye mere while reading this..and i was crying while reading..see abhi bhi😭😭

She lost her everything in a moment..her unborn baby, her loving caring hubby, her hapiness and her family ..everything..

The moment when their car smashed..heartbreaking moment for me😭😭.i can imagine that scenario

You described emotions and feelings..emptiness in her life without him very well dear..hats of to you..brilliant and i loved it from the bottom of my heart

Agar kuch aur kahungi na toh phoot phoot ke ro dungi

Btw keep writing..i would love to read another stuff of yours..but next time happy wala han..i always like happy endings

P.s. sorry for the late dear..i'm late just bcoz of exam🤢

Jyothiii 🤗
Thank you for liking it dear. :) and sorry I made you cry! Next one happy ending wala likhoongi. Its the collective wish of the most. Been receiving pms. 😆

Thank you for the words of encouragement sweety!

Hugs!

Originally posted by: Crazy_Saks_

Emotional one ...Truly loved it.

Thank you. :)

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

true..they are complex and sometimes hard to understand..we can see different shades of rikara..that attracted me a lot but cvs will never understand such things..

Yes. We are left to assume and imagine and come up with plots and stories!

Hi
I did remembered you mentioning about your OS once so as soon as I saw it posted, i read it :)
It was beautifully painful
Initially I thot Gauri have seperated from Om or Om again threw her out but girl it was you who threw out Om out of this world
Did got the slightest hint that Om is dead :(
Even after accident, i thot both held respknsible each other for baby's death n seperated :P but Om too was dead
Way emoyional to handle and it was so so well written

Piyu girl, Sigh ! I am just in awe that this piece of writing is your first.

Originally posted by: priya_86

You know Piyu...this is the perfect tragedy...but life moves on despite the heaviest of all losses

Tragedy has always been my favourite genre...and some of the greatest love stories are tragic.

The best part of the OS...was that Gauri makes a attempt to sustain herself...true she will never get back her past...but you have shown her as a fighter...hats off to you

Ruk jaana nahi...tu kahi haarke...

Kaanto pe chalke...milenge saaye bahaar ke...

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Thank you di for liking it. Though I am a huge sucker for happy endings with complex & deep characters finding their way to happiness, sad stories tend to stay with me forever. 😭 I just can't get over them. 😭

GOSO in the show and in this OS will always be a survivor, not a victim! :-) 😳

Originally posted by: priya_86

You know Piyu...that was the best part of this story...depsite suffering so much...she didnt give up...she fought for a new beginning...you perfectly maintained the essence of GKS in this story...which is awesome 😊