Tum Bin..! A RiKara OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: peeyara

Hi
I did remembered you mentioning about your OS once so as soon as I saw it posted, i read it :)
It was beautifully painful
Initially I thot Gauri have seperated from Om or Om again threw her out but girl it was you who threw out Om out of this world
Did got the slightest hint that Om is dead :(
Even after accident, i thot both held respknsible each other for baby's death n seperated :P but Om too was dead
Way emoyional to handle and it was so so well written

Originally posted by: book.worm

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Priya... this is one of the best work I've read on IF... this was so beautiful and heartbreaking. From the word go, I had guessed that Om is no more but from the hospital scenes my eyes were filled and there were parts when I couldn't read coz of the tears. That has happened to me only once or twice before on IF. This is a truly an amazing piece of work.

Gauri's situation broke my heart, and I felt so bad for her. You expressed her loneliness and her craving so beautifully.
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Thank you dear for liking it. :) coming from you who is a experienced writer, it is really motivating for a newbie like me. :)

Thank you again..:-)

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

Piyu girl, Sigh ! I am just in awe that this piece of writing is your first.

That was a really dolorous tale. Destiny is so cruel. Every word spoken, every emotion illustrated by your pen just made this story wonderful.

Love you !

Lasya,

Thank you sweety for reading & liking it. :-)

Hugs back 😳

This is a masterpiece priya 👏👏👏 ... i had tears in my eyes as i read this.. m speachless.. u r an amazing writer 👏.. ohh god.. its not easy to write such a tragic story so convincingly n keeping readers glued to it.. but u hav done it so delicately.. everything is explained so beautifuly right from rikaras first meeting to der faling in love to der romance n familys bonding wid them.. kudos to u yaar 👏

Originally posted by: nami9j

This is a masterpiece priya👏👏👏... i had tears in my eyes as i read this.. m speachless.. u r an amazing writer👏.. ohh god.. its not easy to write such a tragic story so convincingly n keeping readers glued to it.. but u hav done it so delicately.. everything is explained so beautifuly right from rikaras first meeting to der faling in love to der romance n familys bonding wid them.. kudos to u yaar👏

Hi nami sweety,
Thank you for reading it!
Thank you for your words of encouragement. I was quite wary of posting it here. But everyone's encouragement is a confidence booster. :)

Cheers!

gosh this is so so good

Originally posted by: DEFOM

gosh this is so so good

very well written

Thanks palakh sweety. :)

Hey!

This is so tragically beautiful

Originally posted by: dbo_savina

Hey!

First things first. How could Omki die? Nooo that just broke my heart and will take some time to recover from that.

I loved the OS. Initially I thought Rikara had separated due to some misunderstanding

But then... sigh... he's no more, and she's still holding onto her past ... will she ever move on from the loss of her husband and her child? She needs some closure... but i think that's what brought out the pain in this story, that she will never move on or cope with the loss.

Just so beautifully written, dearest... loved the pain and the bitterness it left... when there's no cure, one must endure...

One of the best painful pieces I've ever read...

Do keep writing more

Love,

Savina

Hi savy,

Yes she will never move on. And how could she from a love like that? My intention was to highlight the love she still carries. Fate managed to take him away, but their love lingers. Her love still burns strong.

Thank you for reading it baby. Your comment mean a lot.

Hugs
Piyu