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shruthisurbhi98

@shruthisurbhi98

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Wow that was so good damn! How I missed reading such wondrous works! Annika's POV was even better I have to admit. Though it was too short, never have a longer update been as satisfying. Keep going girl. Lo padliya aur tarif Karliya.

~@shruthidimpy98 (Twitter)

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

wow i totally loved it

so cute in end

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Rani_Love

@Rani_Love

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -Rhea-
Such a beautiful update. Such a light hearted series.
I can't tell you how much I love this series.
Eagerly waiting to read the next parts.
Continue soon. ❤️
Thank you so much for the PM. 🤗

Thank you. Will try to update soon 🤗

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Rani_Love

@Rani_Love

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
The chawl scene was perfect for intense scenes but CV's wasted it...why can't CV's undestand wat we want to see...we just don't want some random comedy scenes and unconvincing progression of charecterors... we want some intense and emotional scenes like this...you portrayed it beautifully yar..
especially the promise part...superb

Hey, thank you so much for liking it. I felt the same with the Chawl scenes, thus this series. :)

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Rani_Love

@Rani_Love

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: S.love1
This was so beautiful BEAUTIFUL
loved it thoroughly
Very eager for next chapter
Update soon please
Much much love!
.Saumya.

Thank you so much Saumya! Will update soon, have the next part written but not too happy with it.

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Rani_Love

@Rani_Love

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ithihaas
This is such a beautiful shot... so serene and peaceful and full of love.
You have written it so beautifully. These small moments is what it makes life so beautiful😊

Aah yes! Shivika have had such beautiful moments in the past inside OM, that i felt the chawl scenes could have been even more breathtaking! Thank you for liking this.