New Beginnings || Shivika in Chawl Series|| UPDATED CH 3&4-PG 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

This was exactly what needed to happen. But alas then the CVs happened 😆
This was very well written. The flow of emotions were well woven and the subtly put show of love was beautiful ❤️
Do continue it !



Thank you. have read a few of your stuff too! Absolutely magical :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: aisha1099

Awesome update.Loved it.😃

When i got to to know of this track I was so excited and I had so any expectations from it.Par harneet ne sab par paani pher diya.They turned it into the comedy episode.Not that I didnot enjoy it but I felt their timing was not good.Shivika had so any things to talk about.Their pain,loneliness,scars,fears etc needed to explored and brought to the front.
Once again a big thank you for picking up this topic for your drabble.👏
Love❤️
Aisha



Thanks a lot. Too many expectations from my side too! Will try to cover each of the emotions in the drabblea to be added here :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: farinaks

First of all welcome to the forum
It was beautiful... Perfect nd magical
I jzt loved it
Continue soon
Do pm me if possible



Thank you for the warm welcome and also for liking my writing! Will try PMing you for the next one!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Brilliant
An awsome Drabble
Love it completely
This is exactly what we wanted to see in the show

Loved how no words were needed to be said
Very enjoyable work
You are a great writer
Keep writing
Much love!
.Saumya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing work
It was beautiful
This is how I wanted the scene to be in episode
And you gave words to what I imagined
Wonderful
Would love to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Amazing drabble...Loved It ❤️
So full of Emotions & beautifully written!
This is what the CVs must have shown instead of random comedy.
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Amazing😊
CVs should take inspiration from your story😆
Plz continue and PM me the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: priyanka_22

Amazing😊

CVs should take inspiration from your story😆
Plz continue and PM me the next update



Awww! How I wish they would! Literally waiting to see something like this in the show!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautifully written.



Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tadibaaaz

Amazing work
It was beautiful
This is how I wanted the scene to be in episode
And you gave words to what I imagined
Wonderful
Would love to read more



Thank you so much for your words! Updating soon. Also, love your username. 😆

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