Don't Make Me Leave - One Shot [On Separation Track] [23.07.17] - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Awesome update harshu
how much I wished that this had happened in the show
the writer of the show built their relationship so beautifully and broked it in one second...Trust was the base of their relationship but finally they broked that
there were so much other ways for their seperation but they choosed that only... but you wrote it amazingly without breaking it... kash the shivaay in the show would have used 10% of his brain then how beautiful it would have been
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Fantastic OS.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
I wish this version had played in the show but sadly v have to deal with Dumb Singh Oberoi instead of Smart Singh Oberoi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Again Harshada , a brilliant piece of work !
I swear you have some magic in your hands that somehow pierces your heart. I usually try not to read the separation stuff and I was almost going to skip this because I knew if you are writing it then the angst will be a 100 times more but I couldn't. I don't know I am happy or sad reading this but the pain of separation hit me hard all over again and the last night when Annika was recording , I swear I felt I will almost cry ! But this also made me equally angry on Shivaay.. the anger which I felt on their separation day. While my rational part knows he loves his brothers more than Annika , my heart constantly asked me was throwing her out of the house that easy ? I can't believe it hurts so much for 2 fictional characters but it does anyway. I don't have any words left for your writing. You are a phenomenal writer and I am so glad that I am getting to read your stuff. Only last two words on this story would be : I Wish
This was a relief of sorts from the show where they are trying very hard to literally ruin all the characters. Thank you so much for this dear โค๏ธ
Take care
Lots of Love
-Lisa




Thank you so much Lisaโค๏ธ Woah, I don't have any magic Darling but your words are indeed making me feel magical. Gosh, I don't write angst Lisa... Okay let me correct myself. I did not used to write but if I am writing on track, that just comes. Next piece... light one... I promise.
I am thrilled to know you felt so emotionally for that scene. That recording scene was something, still sends me goosebumps if I remember how I wrote it.
That's what. Was it that easy for him to ask her to get out of his life? I don't know the answer.
The fact that we start connecting with show so much, makes us feel everything they go through ๐Ÿ˜†
You are so sweet. Thank you.

Loads of love
- Harshada


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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
That was a MASTERPIECE
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I'm jzt speechless ...short of every adjective to describe it
Sooo heart touching
..nd u know I always love shivaay of ur stories... U make me fall in love with him more deeper nd stronger with every story of urs
The trust ...faith...love ...he has in her is jzt unbelievable
It was eorth reading...Blisss I should say
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: .Dalisay.

Can we replace this Shivaay with the one in our show ๐Ÿ˜†
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Brilliant writting Harshada. Loved it.
Don't mindthe length at all.. you made my Sunday with this OS.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thanks for that. :)




Hey Rucha ๐Ÿ˜ณ
No, we certainly can't ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed reading this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Harshada, day after tomorrow I am having my university exams and I am here sitting and reading this amazing work of yours.
Time is so limited,
As always you rocked gal



Hey dear, hope you are well.
Woah, I can understand๐Ÿ˜† I do that so many times๐Ÿ˜‰
Time is indeed limited
Thank you so much. I am glad you liked this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Again a brilliant piece of work di!!!

Loved it totally!!!
Catching the glimpse of show in between since the last week and wanna replace Gulneet Shivaay with your Shivaay...
Amazing piece of writing!!!
Keep Rocking!!!
and thanks a lot for PM



Thank you so much Chhaya. I am glad you liked this๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Amazing OS Harshada๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Di that as amazing! but with some wits and logic as well!!!! Finally!!!! ๐Ÿฅณ

I mean that day Anika did whatever she could do in her power to make him kick her out the house, and that is what happened. Great, her plan worked and she had help from OmRu, Jhanvi (I guess we can say Tej as well, even if he did not have to do anything), and not to forget Tia for heaven's sake! Well Pinky can be considered as well as she did fuel the fire, but the my point is that all that has happened and yet they behave like they do currently, it's just so confusing ๐Ÿ˜• ... am I making sense or just confusing you? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I guess all I am trying to say is that Shivaay has known Anika for a while and he knows her pretty well, so then how can he believe her charade? ๐Ÿ˜ก I agree that in the moment he may have believed her, but if he were to think with a cool mind and try to connect something's if not everything, he would've realised that she was faking it.

For the love of God, when she accused Om of being illegitimate and what not, the brother's did not even attempt to at least pretend to knock some sense into her or anything as far as I remember ( do correct me if I am wrong ๐Ÿ˜ณ ). So now when she is back 3 months later, does he not notice the bond OmRu, Gauri and Bhavya share with her?

Like dude, she fully insulted you and your family in front the media and press, yet OmRu are locking you two together so that you two can sort your issues, RINGIN' ANY BELLS! I swear does he not notice these things or what?!? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Like why would they do all this despite what she did?

Seriously sometimes I really doubt the intelligence of the writers ๐Ÿค” What do they think we are, idiots?

Anyways, enough of my rant, sorry about that ๐Ÿ˜ณ I just had to get it off my chest

Back to your OS ...

I loved it! โค๏ธ You again proved the perfection of you characters and concepts โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ

I'm glad he put two and two together to realise that she had faked it and no way will he lit her go All that matter was her, them, just the TWO of them โค๏ธ
I'm telling you, he's the man girls want ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

Absolutely perfect, brilliant, and most importantly logical! ๐Ÿ˜ณ โญ๏ธ

Waiting for more of your creations Di ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loads of Love,
- Sims ๐Ÿค—

P.S Thanks for the PM! ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Hello Harshu!! ๐Ÿค—
How are you dear?๐Ÿ˜ƒ It was amazing,brilliant!!๐Ÿ‘ I wanted to see this SSO in show.. GulNeet just destroyed the base of Shivika's relationship i.e. TRUST..๐Ÿ˜ก But here you have shown that..am so happy after reading it..โญ๏ธ SSO's intelligent version came out here in few hours..but in show that's not coming in three months!๐Ÿค” here your SSO will never let her go..โค๏ธ Loved how SHIVIKA are true to their character..๐Ÿ‘ And that's the speciality of your writing Harshu!โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ You made me so happy dear!!๐Ÿค—

Thanks for the pm!๐Ÿ˜ณ

With love,
Rusha

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