Don't Make Me Leave - One Shot [On Separation Track] [23.07.17]

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Fantastic os
Shivay understood Anika's plan and pain
Too

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

You are just amazing... How badly I want this scene in IB but.. :(
This is the real Shivay who believes his Anika blindly and in the show they showed that Shivay believes her a lot but just a word against his family has broken all relations all feelings!!!
Shivay knows her so well after all their love is pure... Their eyes spoke a lot...
Tnq so much for the pm...

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Res

Will be back in a few hours :)

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Unres

This was a fabulous read Harshu! I can't thank you enough f or bringing out the clever side of Shivaay coz I'm just so tired of the writers turning him dumber by the day.

This is the Shivaay I used to know. This is the Shivaay I miss, terribly these days!

I wish you could continue it, you know! The thought of Shivaay and Annika alone in that house - with no one to disturb them and all the villains(Pinky, mainly) being clueless about them for the first time in their life😛 Ahhh, I'm blushing thinking about what they could do and how they could enjoy their alone time😃

Really loved this one. Keep writing more of such wonderful pieces😊 Much love to you!

Edited by _SilverLining_ - 8 years ago

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ashti1234
Lovely story😭
Kash the writer had used her brains a bit, in her arrogance to give a separation track, she completely destroyed the most important thing in shivika, that was SSO's trust n understanding for annika!
Your SSO is actually the SSO we all were expecting, but alas even after 3 months he hasnt introspected as much as your SSO has done within hours😭😭
I felt so happy reading this story😃

Thank you so much Ashti 😳 I am glad you liked this shot.
I am a fan of trust between people in any relationship. So this is just a result of that, I guess.
I am actually thrilled to know you did not find this out of characters but rather liked this.

Knowing that you felt happy reading this, is the best complement for me as a writer.

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

wow so want writers to see this

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meetaa_13

@meetaa_13

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

PERFECT!!

This cud have been the perfect end to the most illogical separation track of IB...it was amazing Harshada!

Keep writing !!

Meeta

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S.love1

@S.love1

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow wow wow

This was pure fabulous

You have done great justice to the feeling and emotions of the character, the characters were true to their personality and feelings

The way shivaay understood annika was exactly what should have happened, I love the fact that although shivaay acted impulsive at first but later he stood by his characterisation and turned to intelligent Singh oberio unlike in the show

Similarly annika was written beautifully too

You are a magician, a gem, usually I avoid reading separation stories cause I can't take them, but you are something else, you make me cry in satisfaction

Hats off to you my friend

Great writing style, admire you for it

Keep writing

Much much love!!!