Don't Make Me Leave - One Shot [On Separation Track] [23.07.17]

Lovely story😭

Again Harshada , a brilliant piece of work !
I swear you have some magic in your hands that somehow pierces your heart. I usually try not to read the separation stuff and I was almost going to skip this because I knew if you are writing it then the angst will be a 100 times more but I couldn't. I don't know I am happy or sad reading this but the pain of separation hit me hard all over again and the last night when Annika was recording , I swear I felt I will almost cry ! But this also made me equally angry on Shivaay.. the anger which I felt on their separation day. While my rational part knows he loves his brothers more than Annika , my heart constantly asked me was throwing her out of the house that easy ? I can't believe it hurts so much for 2 fictional characters but it does anyway. I don't have any words left for your writing. You are a phenomenal writer and I am so glad that I am getting to read your stuff. Only last two words on this story would be : I Wish
This was a relief of sorts from the show where they are trying very hard to literally ruin all the characters. Thank you so much for this dear ❤️
Take care
Lots of Love
-Lisa

Harshada, day after tomorrow I am having my university exams and I am here sitting and reading this amazing work of yours.
Time is so limited,
As always you rocked gal

Again a brilliant piece of work di!!!

This is simply amazing.

So happy to read this...the way it should be...but in d world of serials nothing gets solved so ideally like this...glad it happens in ff at least:-)))

Awesome os
this sso is fast unlike gul sso
beautifully wrritern

When I read title of your os,I thought it would be anika saying don't make her leave to shivay as she is helpless at present but the surprise of sso saying it was pleasant surprise. I totally loved it. He mumbling again and again not to make him leave,trusting her with everything was just fabulous. The dialogue where he said that if she and his brothers are jeopardizing their relationship for some truth, that means that the truth is not worth knowing for him, was something that stood out in your whole shot for me.