Don't Make Me Leave - One Shot [On Separation Track] [23.07.17] - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: S.love1

Wow wow wow

This was pure fabulous
You have done great justice to the feeling and emotions of the character, the characters were true to their personality and feelings
The way shivaay understood annika was exactly what should have happened, I love the fact that although shivaay acted impulsive at first but later he stood by his characterisation and turned to intelligent Singh oberio unlike in the show
Similarly annika was written beautifully too

You are a magician, a gem, usually I avoid reading separation stories cause I can't take them, but you are something else, you make me cry in satisfaction
Hats off to you my friend

Great writing style, admire you for it
Keep writing
Much much love!!!



Hey there🤗 Thanks a ton for this lovely feedback. You made my day, you know😳
Its always a pleasure knowing people out here, like what I write. That is the best complement if you felt that this was justified to the storyline because I am bad at writing on track stuff.
I am a big fan of what you say, trust and understanding in a relation. I don't see when it breaks so easily, it makes me wonder was it even there in the first place?
Woah, I am no magician. Just someone who enjoy writing, creating different imaginary stories and turning out them to be happy because I love happy imagination. 😳
I get you there when you say you avoid reading separation stuff. I am so thrilled you still gave this a try and typed out this beautiful comment for me. Thank you so much.

Loads of love

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: pri12

Awsome Harshda...You are amazing yaar

How I wish this would have happened in the show...
I loved this one...Smart Singh Oberoi figured out so easily that something is wrong



Thank you so much Kulraj😳
I am glad you liked this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: .Aashi.

Such a beautiful piece of writing and true to character, wish this happened in the show 👏



Thank you so much Aashi🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: aishwa04

Beautiful os
Brilliant writing
So emotional 😭



Thanks a ton dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update harshu

how much I wished that this had happened in the show
the writer of the show built their relationship so beautifully and broke it in one second...Trust was the base of their relationship but finally they broke that
there were so much other ways for their separation but they choose that only... but you wrote it amazingly without breaking it... kash the shivaay in the show would have used 10% of his brain then how beautiful it would have been



Hey Aparna😳 Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed reading this.
I adore the trust any people in any relationship shares. I somehow felt very uneasy the way, it broke like it was never there within Shivaay and Anika.
Pleasure knowing you liked this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mineforever

Fantastic OS.. 😊
I wish this version had played in the show but sadly v have to deal with Dumb Singh Oberoi instead of Smart Singh Oberoi..



Hey Ayesha, after long time😳 Thank you so much. I am glad you liked this shot. I am wondering the same if we will get Intelligent Singh Oberoi back.🤔

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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: farinaks

That was a MASTERPIECE
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I'm jzt speechless ...short of every adjective to describe it
Sooo heart touching
..nd u know I always love shivaay of ur stories... U make me fall in love with him more deeper nd stronger with every story of urs
The trust ...faith...love ...he has in her is jzt unbelievable
It was eorth reading...Blisss I should say



Hey Farah🤗
Thank you so, very much for you sweet words. I am at loss of words. Do not know what to reply to this beautiful comment. If this touched our heart, then your comment touched mine. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Amazing OS Harshada😃



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: moon99

Di that as amazing! but with some wits and logic as well!!!! Finally!!!! 🥳

I mean that day Anika did whatever she could do in her power to make him kick her out the house, and that is what happened. Great, her plan worked and she had help from OmRu, Jhanvi (I guess we can say Tej as well, even if he did not have to do anything), and not to forget Tia for heaven's sake! Well Pinky can be considered as well as she did fuel the fire, but the my point is that all that has happened and yet they behave like they do currently, it's just so confusing 😕 ... am I making sense or just confusing you? 😳


I guess all I am trying to say is that Shivaay has known Anika for a while and he knows her pretty well, so then how can he believe her charade? 😡 I agree that in the moment he may have believed her, but if he were to think with a cool mind and try to connect something's if not everything, he would've realised that she was faking it.

For the love of God, when she accused Om of being illegitimate and what not, the brother's did not even attempt to at least pretend to knock some sense into her or anything as far as I remember ( do correct me if I am wrong 😳 ). So now when she is back 3 months later, does he not notice the bond OmRu, Gauri and Bhavya share with her?

Like dude, she fully insulted you and your family in front the media and press, yet OmRu are locking you two together so that you two can sort your issues, RINGIN' ANY BELLS! I swear does he not notice these things or what?!? 😲 😡 😲 Like why would they do all this despite what she did?

Seriously sometimes I really doubt the intelligence of the writers 🤔 What do they think we are, idiots?

Anyways, enough of my rant, sorry about that 😳 I just had to get it off my chest

Back to your OS ...

I loved it! ❤️ You again proved the perfection of you characters and concepts ⭐️ ⭐️

I'm glad he put two and two together to realise that she had faked it and no way will he lit her go All that matter was her, them, just the TWO of them ❤️
I'm telling you, he's the man girls want 😉 😆

Absolutely perfect, brilliant, and most importantly logical! 😳 ⭐️

Waiting for more of your creations Di 😃 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the PM! 😛




Hey Sims😳 Darling, you said it all. This comment deserves a separate thread you know.👏 Nobody could have put this in such perfect manner.

Reading your every line, I was like ... Go girl

Exactly. Writer is confused and so the characters. Yesterday they were disgusted of each other and now they are romancing🤣

Absolutely not. This is just amazing. Thank a ton.

Loads of love




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