Don't Make Me Leave - One Shot [On Separation Track] [23.07.17] - Page 4

Originally posted by: ithihaas

This is simply amazing.

I felt you have portrayed the story true to the characterization. I loved what Shivaay in your story has done. That made more sense. Annika is as stubborn as Shivaay. Even if he demands the reason for her behaviour then she wouldn't. So he decided to give her time, let her be. All he needed was to be with her. Doesn't matter where, just being with her is what he wanted.

Loved this Shivaay.

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

So happy to read this...the way it should be...but in d world of serials nothing gets solved so ideally like this...glad it happens in ff at least:-)))

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Awesome os
this sso is fast unlike gul sso
beautifully wrritern

Originally posted by: lourel24

When I read title of your os,I thought it would be anika saying don't make her leave to shivay as she is helpless at present but the surprise of sso saying it was pleasant surprise. I totally loved it. He mumbling again and again not to make him leave,trusting her with everything was just fabulous. The dialogue where he said that if she and his brothers are jeopardizing their relationship for some truth, that means that the truth is not worth knowing for him, was something that stood out in your whole shot for me.

Originally posted by: Shaina744

You are just amazing... How badly I want this scene in IB but.. :(
This is the real Shivay who believes his Anika blindly and in the show they showed that Shivay believes her a lot but just a word against his family has broken all relations all feelings!!!
Shivay knows her so well after all their love is pure... Their eyes spoke a lot...
Tnq so much for the pm...

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_

Res

Will be back in a few hours :)

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Unres

This was a fabulous read Harshu! I can't thank you enough f or bringing out the clever side of Shivaay coz I'm just so tired of the writers turning him dumber by the day.

This is the Shivaay I used to know. This is the Shivaay I miss, terribly these days!

I wish you could continue it, you know! The thought of Shivaay and Annika alone in that house - with no one to disturb them and all the villains(Pinky, mainly) being clueless about them for the first time in their life😛 Ahhh, I'm blushing thinking about what they could do and how they could enjoy their alone time😃

Really loved this one. Keep writing more of such wonderful pieces😊 Much love to you!

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow so want writers to see this

Originally posted by: meetaa_13

PERFECT!!

This cud have been the perfect end to the most illogical separation track of IB...it was amazing Harshada!

Keep writing !!

Meeta