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Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice
Faye... Oh you have me enchanted... and the first four lines are so for you ... custom made for you my Li'l Fairy... 🤗Aapke lafzon ne kuch yun bhardi,Waqt ke reth mein jaan;Kuch aahen aur siskiyon se likhi,Ik Mirzya ki daastaan.To start with I loved the title ...O Mirzyaaa - the cry of longing of a beloved... the song that so beautifully encompasses the emptiness of separation... a plead so filled with hope to have let one know - not all is lost.Masking beneath the cloak of the night-With one of the greatest heartbreaks that a human can bear- that of a mother leaving behind her babies... the ones she bore and loves to death ... knowing that they would never know her...... I feel for the MotherMasking beneath the cloak of the night-Trying to hide her unfathomable love for her better half, even if it means being left with only the ashes of her desire to be understood and maybe ... loved...by him... I feel for the WifeMasking beneath the cloak of the night-There is someone who has been through every imaginable strife and fought every unimaginable battle... Strong enough to let go all that define her life- the very epicenter of her being... her Omkara and their babies- if letting them go is what it takes to see them in a better place... so be it!...... I feel for the WomanThat's what you did again Li'l Fairy- You made me feel and I so love you for that ❤️Now for some specific mentions in the write-up...Sometimes all you want to say is "Nothing"- little does one know that the very "Nothing" engulfs "Everything" ~She could have lashed out accusations at her once assaulter of words, but all she says is - "Humaare paas kehne ke liye kuch tha hi nahi, kya likhte?"- Sheer beauty Faye ❤️Sometimes all you can do is love someone unconditionally~He has broken her so much, that sometimes the cracks glaringly gaze back through her eyes...and yet a mere realisation of what he implies as he says "I'll die bef" breaks her more than any of his words or actions could... so much, that amidst the shattering, she lungs forward to stop him midway. ❤️Sometimes the rude voices of the past ring out so loud and alarmingly, that they deafen every hopeful whisper~It took him a moment to lose trust in her... Now its gonna take a while to win her trust... Whoever said love was easy? Fair enough!!!❤️Now coming to the characters... the ones I have come to love... OMKARA and GAURII loved the stark contrast of the characters ~In the very cloak of darkness ~~Omkara knows what he is holding on to... he is persistent on Gauri's presence in his life... as his lifeTo put it as Shakespeare did~"It is not in the stars to hold our destiny, But in ourselves"In that very cloak of darkness ~~Gauri keeps swaying between holding on and letting go...her desires and uncertaintiesTo put it as Shakespeare did-"To be, or not to be: that is the question.I'll hope she finds her answers right there as he holds on to their destiny tenaciously - and we witness a love that transpire time... like the one of the folklore of a certain Sahiban and a certain Mirzya.Thanks Faye for the WORDS ... I will be waiting for your next update... with whatever best you have decided for them... in the meanwhile all I can give back is my undying stock of HugsTill we meet again❤️ n 🤗SnehaP.S.: There was this part in your write-up where they both spoke about how they did not want her to be another Jahnvi and their children another Omkara- that is such a deep thought there... its not mere names- Jahnvi and Omkara are hurt and pain personified. The want of being a happy family in truest sense is so deep-rooted, reflecting something that they never had as children... And that someway had me sniffle and break into a sob or two.Love you Li'l one 🤗
Haaayyiii Sneha! Yaar, you kill me everytime with those shaayris.
The title was a cry and to symbolise how Sahiba does the very thing that is the end of both of them by breaking the arrows. Here, Gauri is doing the same because leaving her kids and husband is going to slow-poison her while her very absence will kill Omkara. But there's also the hope - marta nahi ishq o Mirza; sadiyo Sahiba rehti hai...
A mother leaving her kids willingly causes a heartbreak that can never be mended. It's not about leaving them in a better place, it about her choosing to leave with whatever is left of her self-respect and her diginity.
Thank you for feeling for every part of this Gauri.
Kabhi kabhi humaari khamoshiyan hi bohot kuch keh jaati hai, lafzo se kahi zyaada. Whatever Gauri does, she simply can't let anything happen to him. That's how crazily in love she is with him.
Omkara knows what he will be loing by letting her go while Gauri doesn't know what she will get if she decides to stay except for her kids. But sometimes just being a mother is not enough. Sometimes you need the love of your husband. I'm happy you liked this. She'll find the answer soon, because we all know how good Omkara is with words and how easily Gauri gives in to him.
Ps: Jhanvi and Omkara are my favourite characters because they encompass everything that life can do wrong to you. Because they are the messy people who somehow manage to hold on to life just because there are people who want them to. It's so nice to hear from you.
Sending you hugs back. I love, love, love your gifs. Keep those long comment coming which are an OS in themselves. *And you got the Faye part!!*
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