Shivika SS: What belongs to me,will stay with me!Part 3,page 8-3/7

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice..

Thank you very much dear. 😊😊

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: KashiTessa
Samar and Anika are engaged.
Waiting for next update

YUP they are engaed, their part of the story will be revealed as the stry progresses.

Will update very soon.

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl
Nice... Continue soon

Hey dear,

Thank you for dropping by. Glad you are liking it.

Will update very soon.

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Nohsin10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Awesome update

Poor shvika

They are heartbroken

But both are so stubborn

Edited by Nohsin10 - 8 years ago

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Jaslee Saggi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
Dear Jasleen, so happy that you have ventured into writing ❤️
And this is a fantastic piece of a work. I have always believed writing first person isn't easy. I guess more than easy, I find it restricted because you cannot write anything. You have to write stepping in shoes of the characters and most of the time... almost all the time, characters do not understand their feelings, as writing from one's point of view, we can not bring another one in between unlike third person but you are doing an amazing job here.

I read the first one when you posted and left the like, thinking I would be back to comment soon but today, even next chapter was updated. You are pretty quick in updating dear 😳

Loved reading both the chapters.

Cannot go without a special mention.

First part - Third Paragraph - First four lines 😆
Oh god. That was just hilarious.
Just one question - You had mentioned in the last of first part when Shivaay thinks Anika understood what his brothers meant to him then how could he believe in what she did ?? Erm see if you can find the answer 😆

Keep updating .

Much love
- Harshada

Harshada!!!

I cannot explain how happy I am to see you read my work. Somewhat you have been an inspiration for me to write. Your way of writing really encouraged me to give it a crack and I guess what better place is there other than India Forums when there are lovely people like you to have as encouragement.

It actually took me a while to decide in what person I wanted to write my story. I realise now that it really is difficult to write in first person. But I don't want to back away now as that will ruin the flow of the story. Thank you for your encouragement here as well!

So glad that you liked reading it so far. Hopefully I can have you stick by throughout the whole story, then it will be truly be an achievement for me.

I had a lot of free time after exams that's why I updated it really fast, and I fear that if I slow down then what is happening in the show may overpower what I have planned to write, so I am trying not to drag it, and update as soon as I can.

And to answer you're question- I think Shivaay knows that Anika is not like that, but the way everything was played out in front of him made him take the decision that she is wrong. Your question got me thinking though. 😆

Will be trying to update regularly. Thanks once again for popping in and giving this story a chance.

-BIG HUG