Shivika SS: What belongs to me,will stay with me!Part 3,page 8-3/7 - Page 4

Samar and Anika are engaged.
Waiting for next update

Dear Jasleen, so happy that you have ventured into writing ❤️
And this is a fantastic piece of a work. I have always believed writing first person isn't easy. I guess more than easy, I find it restricted because you cannot write anything. You have to write stepping in shoes of the characters and most of the time... almost all the time, characters do not understand their feelings, as writing from one's point of view, we can not bring another one in between unlike third person but you are doing an amazing job here.

I read the first one when you posted and left the like, thinking I would be back to comment soon but today, even next chapter was updated. You are pretty quick in updating dear 😳

Loved reading both the chapters.

Cannot go without a special mention.

First part - Third Paragraph - First four lines 😆
Oh god. That was just hilarious.
Just one question - You had mentioned in the last of first part when Shivaay thinks Anika understood what his brothers meant to him then how could he believe in what she did ?? Erm see if you can find the answer 😆

Keep updating .

Much love
- Harshada

Awesome... Read both the chaps in one go
Continue asap

Originally posted by: bworm

Nicely done. Interesting hai. Hope samar plays cupid here.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

so Annika and Samar is engaged...

waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: minamma

I m looking forward to this

Splendid piece of work

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehe shivaay got her chance

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Feeling bad for both of them having to pretend that they are not affected by each other, but dying on the inside. Felt bad that Annika found it so overwhelming that she had to excuse herself and cry it out of her system...and Stupid Singh Oberoi...you still don't know why she is crying!😡 Looking forward to the car ride...i hope you give them some progress...some connection to the SHIVIKA they used to be...some shared tenderness...missing Shivika desperately!

Originally posted by: water9786

Amazing update dear...Update soon..

Waiting

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

This is amazing Jasleen!Continue soon :)