RiKara SS - Laal Ishq Pt 3 pg 8(10/7/17)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
I read the first part ... Will take some time for commenting ... Thank you Sakura for writing this ...🤗

Thank you dear! I will wait to hear your take🤗

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

awesome yar...totally loved it

you portrayed it very well

it's different from your other stories...

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Sakura 🤗 I love you ... I love you ... I love you ... I love you ... 😳

So Kali Thakur has personally chosen the Artist for the muse ... Woah... This is the grace his art owns ... Along with the intensity it manages to hold. Time and again the bad mean people responsible for Ri & Kara to come together ...

I am just bowled over by the factual description of your hero and heroine ... More than imagining ... It could be felt ...

The way Gauri has drawn comparisons of him to her god ... The way the Artist is feeling her beauty ... The expression is aesthetic ...

So here again ... He is misunderstanding her on judgmental grounds owing to his own bitter experiences ... Not giving a chance to the truth that he knows nothing about her ... Closing in his mind that she is a lie ...

This main man with real flesh and bone does not give a darn damn! Not even about Kali Thakur ... Its not just Gauri ... Even I am madly in love with Omkara ...

Omkara is strikingly relatable but what so special about him did this malicious Kali note that ... He wanted this sculptor only ... That he let Gauri go to him ...

The way both of them came on point to square up to each other was fantabulously amazing ... Even though he has allegations posed ... Gauri gets a chance to express herself ... She will realize that in the hands of this artist .. She is safe

About Kali and Om ... In front of each other, it is so going to be worth the wait and read ... Kali will so have to run for his life ...

Ooh LA LA ... The muse, The Artist and a Naked sculpture ... I am helplessly imagining Sakura ...

Yet again Om proves that dignity is worth more than anything else to him ... Even proffesionalism ...

The storyline is very bold but you have kept your characters strong and intact ... Looking forward to what's next ... Eagerly wanting to read the real reason about Kali wanting Om to make a Naked sculpture of a woman he wants to be his own wife able ...

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Kripa Shankar

@silver_dustXX

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Great chapter and an interesting story line dear!!! Loved it❤️ you brought in the same relationship RiKara share in the show, but only better, cuz even Gauri gives it back..

Do continue, n thanks for the pm

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Dear Sakura

I am falling in love with your writing

I have read all your stories on RIKARA

U have this talent to get me hooked to a.story

I get attached to the story

Can really imagine the scene happening in front of me

And then when the chapter ends I don't know

I wish the scene could have continued

I want to read more n more

Hats off to u

Superb update

Gauri compared Omkara to lord Shiva

But he is no god

And he proved it to her

But he did the unexpected

He will.make her sculpture

Using his imagination

He knows she is uncomfortable

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Superb update👏

You are awesome😳

The concept is very different and very intersting

I agree with above mentioned comment of vrindagupta

But he did the unexpected

He will.make her sculpture

Using his imagination

He knows she is uncomfortable

Waiting for next update 😳

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Sumaiya_Scrible

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Hi Sakura. I've read ur other fics but this one has become my personal favourite.

An artist and his muse.

After reading the sneak peak i thought omkara would be just and artist under kaali and I'm really happy and glad to see that u did complete justice to his character.

Gauri was bang on. She didn't kept quiet at his allegations, throwing it back at him.

Last part was interesting.

The story line and concept is different. Something I've never read before. It suits omkara being an artist.

P.s This concept slightly reminds me of ek paheli leela and titanic. Waiting to read more already counting days for ur next update. Please don't punish me by making me wait long [:p]

Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago