RiKara SS - Laal Ishq Pt 3 pg 8(10/7/17)

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Hey sakura

First of all than you so much for the pm

And about the update it is perfect update

Amazing part

Loved it

I love each and every part of this chapter; their emotions their feelings annd their expression

You nailed it dear

Update soon

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maivelli

@maivelli

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Another superb update loved it

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Hi Saku, 😊
Read ch-2 n 3 together. Lovely updates. 👏 And I must say the way u write, explaining each n every emotions of Rikara is so beautiful!! Loved reading both the chapters! ❤️
Sorry for the short reply, I hope u got my PM. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

KT enters. Pure evilness. Disgust fills the air with him around. I loved the way you captured the transition from heavy life changing moments in the previous chapter into these emotional moments where two lost souls just sit thinking about life's way all the while unspoken emotions threaten to get louder by the second just when reality comes knocking n throws them off the track. RiKara are intense n beautiful n deeply saddening. They are caught unawares in the twists of life n have no one to call their own. These short exchanges between them are charged. Can't wait to know what brings them together. Thanks for this part Sakura . Loving it. Have nearly given up on RiKara in the show. But thanks for this truly .

Bye for now

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

I must begin by apologizing. I am sorry that it took me so long to come to this story and the loss is all mine! In my attempt to stay away from everything IB/DBO related, I would have missed out on such a perfect gem of a piece of writing.

As always your narration has me floored. You create intense passion so effortlessly. The title of the story is perfect for this whirlwind of a love story that you are writing.

The scenario is perfect! And if the CVs read it, they would be wringing their hands for not using this in the show. It is so perfectly fitting in terms of Omkara's back story as well as Gauri's predicament when we first met her in the show.

Beginning right from the prologue you had me hooked. One good thing about getting to read three chapters together is that I greedily jumped from one to the next.

Gauri's first reaction to Omkara's physical presence contrasted with his reaction to her was so poignant. And then the way they both proceed to confuse each other as they try to form opinions on one another was so poignant. Made for excellent read.

The scene at the temple was one I could perfectly visualize! If only we got to see something like that! And then Kali thakur's entry! Ouff! The words you put in Omkara's mouth had me trembling with fangirlishness and excitement.

And then Gauri trying to fathom this new pain that has become part of her existence!

You are such an incredibly powerful writer, that every time I read something by you, I am in awe.

Eagerly waiting for the next update. Do not want it to be the last though...

And thank you for not giving up on me and for the PMs. 🤗

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Awesome update. Om isn't ready to accept his feelings.

Beautifully written and described every part 👏
Continue soonish. Waiting for next chapter

P.s sorry for late review

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Awesome story!!

Loved it.

Very well written.

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