TS | Lessons. // ShivRi/OmYa/AniRu // [Pt. II Updated] - Page 5

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update innika 👏👏👏

I am so glad that you decided to write something based on the brothers and sister in law...

you potrayed it very beautifully...

something is very different and adorable in shivaay and gauri's bond...it was well seen on the mahasangam episodes...and she can understand shivaay very much...it surprised me seeing shivaay bonding with someone who he barely knows...its really overwhelming...I really loved the scene where gauri comforting shivaay and om witnessing that from far

it's beautiful

Originally posted by: fffan123

Super awesome emotional update. Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

It was so beautifully written. 👏

Originally posted by: Apu_915

It was amazing...Superb Concept...❤️

ShivRi conversation was written so beautifully...

Thanks fr bringing OmYa... I miss Saumya a lot...

Post Soon... 😊

Originally posted by: piyali_rockstar

So beautiful ! Thank you. Thanks a ton for writing like this. So deep yet true to the characters.waiting for the other parts :)

Originally posted by: farinaks

Sooo beautiful nd emotional
Update ur other story that with title cake

Originally posted by: twerping

First of all, I love what you are trying to do with the characters through this series. This series does justice to the fact that the brothers and their wives could forge such unique bonds among themselves by helping each other, standing by each other through thick and thin.

The poignancy of Gauri's way of helping Shivay find a semblance of an anchor in the tumultuous waters he is in was beautifully brought out.

Keep writing, girl!

Also any hope of an update of the SVR/Mallika story where the brothers have to babysit?

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

This was so beautiful. I reallu wish they show this kinda bond between Shivaay and Gauri where she can try and instill the fact the He loves Anika and should trust her no matter what.

Phenomenal writing. ❤️

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy

Me! I live for such bondings more then any couples' romance.

ShivRi are love. I feel when the time comes Gauri will be there for Shivaay just the way you have beautifully penned down their feelings. Though the awesomeness wouldn't be same as yours but I can sense ShivRi will share an understanding bond.

Am waiting anxiously for OmYa and AniRu.

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

The idea is so beautiful !

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