TS | Lessons. // ShivRi/OmYa/AniRu // [Pt. II Updated] - Page 3

The idea is so beautiful !

wow, intense and interesting. loved the bond.
continue soon

Lovely, beautiful and awesome story. 👏

So beautiful Innika
I actually love the bond n also wished the same was explored in the Show
But never the less u r here to give words to our such desire !!!
Nicely penned down !!!

i cried thats my reaction

This is really amazing.. continue soon please

This was a beautiful gem out of the brilliant collection of poignant tales you seem to have up your sleeve.. you are the Story teller indeed.. !!!

ShivRi were beyond words.. the stark contrast and yet the subtle similarities.. between them both.. fiercely protective.. I think that's what both these characters share in common.. ❤️
Very well written.. 😳 I hope they explore this equation in the show ahead specially after this separation fiasco.. also because the glimpse of ShivRi was awesome in the Mahasangam as well.. ❤️
A job well done.. waiting for the other updates as well specially after last night's AniOmRu episode ❤️

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

This is so, so beautiful and poignant Innika.

I love how you are delving into uncharted territory by depicting the relationship between the brothers and their sisters-in-law.

Shivaay and Gauri in particular- they had a lovely bond in the Mahasangam, which is amazing considering that both of them are poles apart.

Loved how you tried to reconcile Shivaay's cynicism with Gauri's faith. And I LOVED the last line- about Omkara being a bystander, watching on- something very haunting and poetically suggestive about it.

Elegantly written as always! :)

Originally posted by: DilSeDilTak

this is so so so beautiful ❤️ your writing is really powerful and gorgeous😳👏
truly loved it and ShivRi are love❤️

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Innika this was something amazing and lovely,You know what I really wanted someone to write something regarding the brother's and sister in laws and especially I wanted to see shivaay and gauri's exchange,as we have seen alot AniRu as well As Om-saumya's equation and in the mahasangam,I loved ShivRi's one,but this story was a bang on!

You have really showcased their helplessness as well as the thoughts of shivaay regarding Gauri,It was heart whelming❤️

And Om was looking at this exchange from afar.It was just lovely as always,

Kudos to your writting babe!

Love,

-Anya 😳