Rikara FF: Heal my Soul (Updated conclusion part in Pg 60) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_86

You write so well...the portrayal of simple emotions are so beautifully done

To say the truth...i would want the story...to progress in this line... but I know we will get something else😆

Keep on writing dear...😊


Thank u so much!!

i think a story doesnt need villains as is. situations are enough.. but doesnt happen in show 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing story dear!!! 👍🏼 Rikara ko kuch kuch honey laga hai. 🥱 Waiting for the next update!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all,
Thankyou for all your comments. Please keep reading and provide more feedback on the OS. Inspires me to write more.

Love all..!!

Here you go:

<Part 15>

It was 7 o clock in the evening and no men were in the house. Pinky was glued to a special pravachan, Dadi and Buamaa were in their own room. Jhanvi was in the study room. Anika, Gauri and Saumya were chatting with each other and roaming around the Oberoi Mansion. They came across a video room which was set up with Home theatre and a mini screen to have a theater like experience. They all went inside.

A: O bete ki, mujhe pata hi nahi tha, ghar mein aise cinema hall bhi hai.

G: Haan Bhabhi, theatre mein jo screen hota hai, waisa sa bada hai. Kitna shandaar hain naa..

S: Wow, di this is so exciting. Mujhe naa abhi koi picture dekhne ke mann kar raha hai. Dekthe hain koun kounsi movies hain..

G: Salman khan ki picture hai kya??

They were discussing and finally decided to watch "Ae dil hai mushkil"

Jhanvi came in and smiled at all 3.

J: Lagta hain, sab picture dekhne ki mood me hain. Dekho dekho..

S: Haan Jhanvi aunty, kya aap madat kar sakthe hain isse lagane mein? Jhanvi started the projector and movie started.

G: Maa, aap ko kuch madat chahiye..? Kuch kaam hai..

J: Nahi Gauri, bas maine tum teeno ko dekha aur yahan aayi.. Aap log enjoy kijiye movie ko. Waise bhi sab late aayenge aaj, to kuch kaam nahi.. Carry on.. Saying so, she went off.

Saumya got some chips, popcorn and juice and all three were sitting comfortably ina recliner and watching movie. After an hour more, Rudra and Shivaay came in together and they were chatting with each other, Om walked in. Obros were chatting with each other. They noticed the house was very silent. Shivaay looked into his room, anika was not to be found neither was saumya in Rudra's room. Om looked above, Gauri was not to be found. They all gave a curious look at each other.

R: Lagta hain, Trideviyon ghar pe nahi hain. Jhanvi came across and saw them.

J: Aap log, aagayi. Aao khaana kha lete hain. All three refused they will have it later.

S: Waise badi maa, Anika ghar mein nahi hai kya?

O: Haan, Gauri bhi baahar gayi hain? R: Sumo nahi hain?

Jhanvi smiled at all three. Impatient men.

J: Nahi, wo theeno humhaari home theatre studio mein picture dekh rahe hain. Upar. Maine keh diya sab late aayenge, enjoy karna. Tum log disturb mat karo. Enjoy kar rahe honge.

"Picture" All three men had poker face.

R: Dekha bhaiyaa. Kitna entertainment ho rahi hai ghar pe.

O: Picture hi to dek rahenge hain naa.. Itna kyun overreact kar raha hain..

S: Wo kaise, agar wo log picture dekhenge, to hum bhi saat baitkar picture dekhenge.

They decided to interrupt their movie session. They just walked by the video library room and peeping inside the glass pane. Inside those three were enjoying the movie with chips and juice.

A: Kasam se, kitna cute hain Ranbir Kapoor. She was full on fangirling and gave a flying kiss at the screen.. Rudra and Om gave a funny laugh at fuming shivaay.

S: Dekho, agar uski bas chalthi to seedhe screen ki andhar gus jathi aur Ranbir ko.. he stopped fuming

G: Haan di, kitna acha dance karta hain naa. Main keh rahi hoon, isse acha koi dance nahi kar saktha. Dekho kya movement hai...mujhe naa dance karne wale hero bahut ache lagte.. Bahut badiya..

Now it was ShivRu's turn to pull Om's leg. "Dance" they said in chorus. Om was having a annoyed expression and went into a defensive mode. "Toh kya hua, Ranbir Kapoor ki to baat kar rahi thi.. Mere baari mein thodi na baat kar rahi hai?"

Rudra gave a mischievous laugh "O, chodo, Ranbir jaise dance kar Bhabhi ko impress karna, aap ki bas ki baat nahi hain. Aap sirf stupid si sher sunate ho, jisse sunke Bhabhi seedhe nidhra mein udd jayegi."

"Shut up, Rudra"

Saumya: Haan di, kitna classy hain na. Acha hai six pack ki chakkar mein body show nahi karte. Kitna achi profile hain na uski. Dressing sense, the way he carries himself sab kitna elegant hain.. Wow.

ShivOm were singing in chorus "body show". Rudra was having a twitchy lip now.

Bhaiya, hume ab andar chalna chahiye aur movie dekhna chahiye.. kya keh rahe ho..

"Haan" came the chorus.

They opened the door of the theater and went inside. Three women weren't expecting all three would come together. Their eyes popped out.

A: "aap log, jaldi aagaye kya?"

Shivaay: "Haan, aap log ki entertainment full on chalthi rahi. So we thought why don't we join in for the movie. Waise aap log in logicless romantic movies ki alava kuch nahi dekthe hain kya? Try some classic Hollywood movies.. Shivaay was going on.

O: Shivaay unhe jo dekhne hain, dekhne de. Tum kyun suggest kar raha hai.

Saumya: Aao bade baal wale bhaiya, shivaay bhaiya.. Join us. She gave a poker face at Rudra. They all sat in a opposite three seater.Unlike before, now three women were talking among themselves in a very low tone about the scenes.

Aishwarya's dance floor song was going on. Rudra was thinking of playing a prank.

R: Waise Shivaay bhaiya aur O, aap ko kya lagta hain. Aishwarya rai kitna hot hain naa.. Iss umar mein bhi, kya fitness hain. Figure ko dekho.. Wow..

Saumya glared at him even in darkness. He knew this would irritate soumya. He wanted to pull her leg.

Shivaay: Haan, I like the way she carries herself with so much poise.Hot hain, beautiful hain, talented hain and her language skills kitne ache hain. Wow internationally india ko represent karti hain in a big stage and she does it very well. Rudra looked at anika, he found that his mission succeeded. Now it was anika's turn to stare.

R: O aap kuch bataya nahi..

O: She is tall and elegant. Ofcourse, she is timeless beauty. Uski eyes bahut expressive hain.

Rudra looked at Gauri. Her face was serious. He decided to pull Om's leg more.

R: Matlab, aapko Aish issliye pasand hain, kyunki wo tall hain?? Rudra started laughing badly

Om looked at Rudra suspiciously and then realized what he said. He turned towards Gauri. She was not looking at him. G: Di, mujhe na picture dekhne ki mood nahin hain. A:haan mujhe bhi nahi hain. S: Chalo sab chalthe..

Three women got up.

O: Kya hua, picture nahi dekhni hai?

"Baad mein dekhlenge" all three replied in chorus and went off.

Shivaay: Lagta hain.. aaj rain jacket pehana padega. Paani zaroor phekeji. Sab tumhaari wajah se. Shivaay glared at Rudra. "Par bahut zyaada khush mat ho, tumhe bhi zaroorat padegi rain jacket. Saumya ko dekhe lagta hain, tum paani paani hone wala hai"

Omkaara still was in deep thoughts whether Gauri misunderstood that he teased her height.

R: Humhe chodo bhaiya.. O ki haalat dekho. Bhaabhi uski paintings par bulldozer chalane wali hai..

O: Shut up Rudra. Who kya soch rahi hogi ki mein usse tease kar raha hoon height ki wajah se..

R:Ab jao jaake bulldozer ko rokh lo. Jao..

<to be continued>

Love,

Yayini.

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Posted: 8 years ago
awww...its the best part...I really wanted this seen to happen in the show...It will be so amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful one shot series

very simple n sober liking it alot craving for more

plz keep updating the way u update😃



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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update.
Loved the teasing session. Awesome chemistry and nok-jhok among the couples.
Waiting for the next update!!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awwh... So all the girl gang was watching movie firstly the oberois got jealous then rudra played a prank .. nice one
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb
Would love to see angry wife's
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super chapter.
Poor Om, being nice and feeling bad to tease Gauri
Edited by KashishJ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor the Men, wifey are going to be angry. Lets see what happens with Gauri and Omkara..

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