Drabble- Reactions, After The Wedding (Drabble 3-RUDRA) Pg 7-3rd March

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samaz95

@samaz95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Absolutely loved it!(:

Now can't wait to read about the secret Shivika shipper 🤣

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Nirmala

@nim_var

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Navin, brilliant take on Pinky's reaction. I don't think we will ever get to see her inner conflict to this level but she is definitely dislikes Anika more than ever before. She will find it hard to accept or forgive her. Her dream lay shattered at her feet and she may have lost her son for the time being.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

This a wonderful insight into the brain and thoughts process of Pinky Singh Oberoi...Very well put...Pinky is the one who has been left khali-haath..Well she put her trust on the wrong one, she was blinded towards Tia, hurt Anika innumerable number of times unnecessarily and to top it all she neglected her son, Shivaay's plight...and every other member of the family be it Rudra, Omkara, Tej, Jhanvi, Dadi, Shakti or Pinku standing surrounding the stars of the moment, Shivaay and Anika makes sense..no wonder each one of them is sighing in relief and are of the thought that 'bala tali'...but Pinky is a different case altogether..and for all the wrongs she has done, now she will have to bite back every taunt she will have for Anika, because for Shivaay, Anika matters a lot to him and if Pinky targets Anika than what lies as a hanging balance is that she will end up losing her on...Shivaay and Anika's win over the baddies, it is a clear win of their bond and the love they have in their hearts for each other..and while it is Shivaay and Anika's win, Pinky instead of seeing the situation in the light of her son being saved, sees it as her loss..and from where I am standing I can only feel pity for Pinky as she is not ready to see the gem she has got in Anika as a life partner for her son...awesome drabble..it was a brilliant read..👏

Edited by MysticRiver - 8 years ago

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

ur writing is always mind blowing.what i love most how u take ur reader inside of the character so easily.how u describe their inner feeling with such ease.

thanks a lot and looking forward eagerly for next one.

👏⭐️

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This was mind-blowing...

Pinky is not going to accept Anika so easily as she sees her as a women who is coming between her and her son...

Fantastic👏

Continue soon😭

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Piya

@Piya1199

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

This seems soo real to happen in the upcoming plot

Pinky will definitely feel cheated, betrayed and insecure

Its a natural feeling of a mother specially if u dont accept the daughter in law

But i also feel that she should be given some respect

Coming to shivika they are going to face real tough times battling their inner turmoil

It will take time for shivay to fully accept her as his wife

But anika is soo adorable that one cant help but fall in love wid her

I think she will gradually mend her relationships wid pinky

U wrote each and every part so munutely that it felt like i was actually watching it

Pls update sooon

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow Navin u hv written pinky so well... This is exactly how she might play out in show too... I dont expect a person like her reacting any different...

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bworm

@bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Navin...you are awesome...what a fantastic idea... we are never gonna see this on screen...but thru your words our wishes will be fulfilled.

Pinky. ...yes...we can well expect this to be her reaction. ..I'd the cvs can get jyst a bit of what you have portrayed will be do happy.

Very well written. ..felt as if o wad pinky and this was going in my mind ...yhe jealousy , the inferiority. ...all exploding inside. A live tome bomb...gonna explode any time.

Looking forward to Khanna

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Zarmina

@falala333

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Love love love

This is something which I strongly feel WILL happen in the days following the exposing of this whole sham...
Pinky is not a character I can see going up to Anika and thanking her for saving the family, going up to her and apologizing for all that she's done to her.. This will not happen

Pinky will sulk.. I feel we may not even see her for all of the next day, but when we do, it's not going to be happily ever after for Anika..

This may just let Pinky's dislike and hatred for her grow even stronger..
She's going to wake up the next day and see Anika and Shivaay prancing around the house together behaving the way they do only when alone.. She will see Anika speaking to everyone in place of who could just as easily have been Tia

All in all I love how you've portrayed Pinky's emotions and reactions 👏

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Manonidz

@Manonidz

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Its amazing ...and this is very much plausible ! Pinky harbours enormous hatred for Anika, and its not going anywhere soon. Instead it will shore up when Anika will be proven right again !

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