Drabble- Reactions, After The Wedding (Drabble 3-RUDRA) Pg 7-3rd March

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Hello Ladies! Welcome to my under 1500 word series. I promise I haven't abandoned my other stories, but I hope you like this one, too. This drabble series is meant to be short snapshots, if you like, of the reactions of all the people in the Oberoi world to the HUGE revelations during the Shitia wedding.

This is written
to celebrate one thing I've waited for-- a start of just Shivika, and an exit, permanently, of Shitia. Leaving aside the fact Navina cant play a vamp to save her life, I've HATED that we've dealt with Tia as the ML's gf/ fiance / baby momma /sauten /vamp for the past 8 months.

And now thats over--its time to handle the Redemption track, hmm? So, in honor of that, since CVs wont give any internal thoughts of the characters, or even reactions beyond Dadi's patent-pending heart attack expression, I decided to do it for them! Enjoy..

PINKY SINGH OBEROI

"YEH Shivaay Singh Oberoi ka mummy hai, right? Pinky Oberoi? Her son escaped a huge scandal, not to mention some random man's love child being raised in his cuckoo nest. That bitch of a girl and her mother! They even managed to get away, kitna bara dil hai, Oberois ka. Mere beta ke sath hoti to mein murder kaar deti, aur isko dekho! Why is SHE sobbing like Tia is her saagi daughter and not the cheating, lying dhokebaaz she has confessed to? Doesn't this lady know how big a scandal they got saved from? Hai hai, koi aise rote hai, jaise uski sara duniya hi jaala hua ho?"

What could Pinky say to the loud whispers of the guests, as she sobbed, her face buried between her shaking palms? No one knew what she had lost, here tonight. Her pride, her self respect, her family, her future. She was the one who had been cheated, more so now, that the truth was out. She had lost so much. And no one cared about her loss. Understood her pain. Not even Mummy-Ji or Shakti had come to her, when she collapsed onto the chair here. They were too busy crowding around Omkara and Rudra, still in the pandit's clothes. Around Shivaay and that girl.

Who had all played such a monstrous game. Allowed her, their choti-maa, his mother, to make a bigger fool of herself than even Tia had managed to go. Discounted her pride, her intelligence. As she planned ceremony after ceremony, as she loved and fussed over the perfect bride she had finally managed to get Shivaay to accept. They had used her. To give the whole pretend marriage a real flavor. Who would not believe the shaadi was real, when the mother of the groom was so happy? Who would suspect the son when the mother blissfully decorated the hall, wrapped the gifts, chose the jewels?

"Don't cry, Maa. You know I am married to Anika, this couldn't have been real without the divorce papers. But thank you. You have been very useful."
Shivaay had said so, and Pinky had been too numb then, to slap him, to scream. But she hurt, now. And so she cried, as she watched her dreams and hopes for Shivaay, her own future daughter, walk out of the Mansion. Without a backwards glance at the Mummy-ji who had defended her like a virago against the entire household for three months. Who had swallowed her natural distaste for a baby born without
any pheras. Who had taken her son's flinty coldness, her nephews' barely disguised insults, her in-laws' impatient anger onto herself.

All to protect someone else's bride, someone elses' child.


Tia had murmured words that didn't register for Pinky, words she assumed were apologies. Sorry? Tia was sorry? For what? What part? Pinky didn't know, she didn't ask, and in any case, Tia left. Holding her husband. A man who hovered over Tia, who was protecting his child. NOT her grandson. Pinky's loss seemed magnified by the very love and care this.. Dushyant? Robin? Who knew.. this boy was showering onto his wife's small baby bump. That baby. Even ten minutes ago, it had been Pinky's hope. Pinky's dream for a future filled with possibilities. She would raise her Shivaay's image, she would have another chance. It was a culmination of everything Pinky had wanted, from the moment that small tangle of cells had been announced to her. The birth of a new child, a new era, for her.


Dushyant's tender regard, eyes wide, expression of awe as he escorted the mother of his child out of the Oberoi Mansion hurt Pinky now. The loss bit, bit harder, when she remembered how she had begged Shivaay to show a little of this tenderness to this child. How she had despaired of her son showing even a glimmer of this awe.
How would Shivaay have given this counterfeit child any of that? He saved all of his regard, his passion and love for the girl dressed like a misplaced bride, standing before the empty mandap. That Anika. She would be the permanent one, then? Because no matter what Pinky said anymore...now, more than ever, she would not be heard.

Shakti was there, over there, by the mandap, pumping that girl's hand, like he was congratulating an Olympic winner. Janvi was hugging her, sobbing relieved tears over her return as "Anika". Tej was slapping Shivaay on the back, grinning at Anika, saying something. Proud. As if this had all been a monstrously good game. Mummy-ji and even Prinku was surrounding her, demanding answers, pelting her with questions, exclaiming, laughing, discussing the whole tragedy like it was the most incredible of comic stunts.


And she? She was smiling--
that girl-- her lips curled slyly up, her eyes downcast, as if she felt shame. As if she could. Shame for pretending, for driving everyone out of their minds with tension. She had somehow been responsible, Pinky knew. Responsible for the lines that bracketed Shivaay's face during this entire farce of a wedding. Item by item, she had clawed back from Pinky things that Pinky once had. Shivaay's love. Her nephews' respect. Mummy-ji's trust. Janvi's patient friendship. Shakti's support. And now she had won. She would be the one Pinky would have to face, across the dining table, in the home,for years upon endless years.

Pinky sobbed louder, her shoulders shaking with mingled rage, baffled fury, and keening loss.

She could not face Anika. She did not want to face her, not as a servant, much less as her Shivaay's bride. Pinky decided it. On this couch. In this moment. She would not lose her self respect, at least. No. Not to that girl. Pinky would not accept, thank, acknowledge her. Anika had taken away the world. Pinky would not forget this. No matter what else happened, what anyone said. She knew it was stupid. Irrational. Yes Tia had turned out to be fake, the baby.. oh god. The baby was not even her son's. Pinky had been living in a dream world, a world where she was important and loved. Where she could love her son's wife, so he would love her too. Where she could be the mother and mother-in-law she often hoped she could be, to a girl she could respect. A good girl, a girl she could admire and even share Shivaay with.

A fake world. But it had been a good world, a world where Pinky was happy, where Shivaay was still hers. Where he allowed her to touch his hair, where he listened to her, where he did what she wanted him to do. Did what was best for him. What her mother's heart told her, was best for him. A fake world, where her son's beautiful eyes did not skip over his mother, on their way to seeking out the girl he could not tear his gaze from. Where he did not use her love for him as camouflage. Where he mocked his mother's joy, all the while planning a cruel game with that girl. That was not who Shivaay had been, in that fake world. In that world, where Pinky was going to have the daughter she wanted, and a son who she so desperately missed. Not this one. God save her. She did not want this one. Pinky had been woken up from her dreams, into this nightmare. That girl.

No. Pinky Singh Oberoi would not forget.

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INDEX OF CONTENTS:

DRABBLE ONE: PINKY SINGH OBEROI (PAGE 1)
DRABBLE TWO: ANIKA AND SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI (PAGE 3)
DRABBLE THREE: RUDRA SINGH OBEROI (PAGE 7)


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chottekikhushi thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all...YAAY ME FIRST!!!😆

Navin,
I can so picture this happening...I can imagine Pinky's betrayal and I for one dont think that Pinky will accept Ani wholeheartedly even after the Tia fiasco either...when Ani somehow was the reason why Shivaay became all right in the hospital, you could see the jealousy and blind hate in Pinky's eyes...She knew she was wrong then, but she was almost afraid of the power this girl had over her Shivaay and that incredible connection that Ani shared with her son, a son who had just begun giving Pinky the love she craved and the importance that she had been denied by even her own husband all these years...

Also, Its harder to forgive people when you are in the wrong, much less a person you hate and one who you have never respected...Pinky's insecurity is bound to reach spectacular heights and Shivaay's inability to wholeheartedly accept Ani even after this is surely going to make things difficult for Ani...but bring it on I say!! With the Nbz out of the way, albeit temporarily, we can get to see the actual conflict that Shivika have, and thats all internal...its childhood fears of abandonment and worthlessness from Ani and a lifetime of believing in and following NKK philosophies as far as Shivaay is concerned...

Amidst all this Ani has to somehow carve a place in the hearts of all the Oberois and become the one that you wrote about in your DBO series!!😳
Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i can so imagine this happening in serial.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The chasm that exists in Pinky's mind between her daughter in law and Shivaay's wife. The former would be someone who she could share her son with. Someone who she could use to have some influence over her son. She would want someone who her son is simply fond of and not someone who he's in ishq with. Also, Annika doesn't tick the boxes that Pinky finds herself lacking in and yearns for. She is not someone who she would be proud to introduce to the world as her bahu. Dare you snigger at her bahu as they have at her.
No, she will not accept or respect Annika.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Navin,

I don't know cv will show it or not, but you have written very well! 😊



Edited by dattu21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i am also sure..pinky will not accept anika even after this... her actual problem is not anika being middleclass... the problm is the power anika had on shivaay...she saw a different shivaay with anika which pinky dnt knw... anika reached a place in shivaays heart where pinky cant reach...her sons eyes are searching for anika...she knew it... she fears that anika will take shivaay away from her...her existence is shivaay..once like tej said...pinky had nothing except shivaay..and now shivaay belong to someone else...its her insecurity...once she said that her dreams always shattered after caming into OM..she said that dadi always gives importance to jhanvi because she is from highclass,classy, well educated...may be its not completely true.. but somewhere that create a great scar in her memory.. her husband didnt gave her importance earlier.. so she want best for her son...but while wishing best for son.. somwhere she failed to understand him...which anika able to do... and she failed to support him...while anika do that...she wanted a daughter in law who will respect her,who will do as her say...for him...but in her blind love for her son she failed to notice that...god had given her a daughter in form of anika...
who will care her,love her,respect her.. more than her own son...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Navin Jaan!
You've penned down Pinky's conflict with her the girl who happens to be shivaay's wife so beautifully. I hope Cvs show the tiny bit of this but sooner or later they tend to forget the character's actuality.

Pinky surprised me and everyone else too(I think) the moment it was revealed that Anika is the bride instead of Tia. She acted so lovingly and at times asked for her help regarding Shivaay but that proves that her dream's bahu matters more to her than the reality. Tia was a bahu she wanted. Anika crushed her dream and she will be in no mood to understand what exactly Tia did to the whole family. To her Anika will always be the rastay ka pathar that doesn't allow a smooth walk. A walk her son allowed her after years but her son has chosen Anika as his partner. Pinky thinks that she can't reach out to her son because of Anika. Even after going through a classic OMM she'll blame Anika and now that everyone will be all praise for Anika this is something that'll cause pinky indigestion.

Waiting for Khanna's reaction 😉
Edited by fizy_wizy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pinky's monologue was Epic!

thanks for a brand new story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why does my gut say.. that this is exactly what they are going to show in the serial.. if not as good as you have managed to explain and write.. but this same track..and it's all true..the position Pinky is in..she will think and act like this and it will hold true..Pinky wanted a trophy wife for Shivaay..Anika is the real deal here..
Pinky doesn't know how to become a MIL at all., a real one atleast..where the son is in love with his wife..she's used to and habitual to a wife the son doesn't acknowledge so she can easily be satisfied with the fact that her son is just her son...

She wasn't prepared for a wife her son will worry and care about..someone he will value and consider his partner in times of torment and distress..someone he will become extremely possessive about..someone who will enter the deepest parts of his heart that no one else dared to do...
Tia had to ask Pinky to make Shivaay do things..here we have Anika who he blindly trusts..the way he said it once.."..Kueen mein kudne ke liye kahungn..to kud jaayengn kyaa..??" With full conviction he said "..Yes.." Pinky needs to understand and accept ki Shivaay sach mein kud
jaayega..

That "..Mera Shivaay.." is now Anika's husband and Anikas Shivaay as well..


It's time for Pinky to face her demons and accept that her son is a husband now and there is another woman who has become the most important part of his life..and she needs to learn this..and I am sure they will show this journey just like Shivaay's redemption with his NKK rant..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And you did a fantastic job.. 🤗 beautiful writing. ❤️ .amazing depth in Pinkys thoughts..

Very good idea.do continue soon... 😳

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