Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
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amru can we have her back in the show! she was so much fun!

also, navin - i didnt know we had to threaten you on PMS to get updates, i will do it more for next update 😆

this was lovely btw, cant wait for the next one
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Nahi nahi yaar, me darr ke maare chup jaungi! 😆 I do get PMs from some cuties, and discuss plot and where I'm going and what not with some really awesome readers. The shy readers also PM me sometimes, but with this drabble, for some reason, I got a mega response and people who I love demanded updates in very.. ahem.. serious terms! So time bhi mila tha, I was also high off an episode that had all sorts of adorabs. For once even Ranveer Randewa saab was behaving like a policeman instead of someone a policeman should be arresting, so mood aya, likh diya! Half an hour me jo aya daal diya so I'm glad you liked it! These drabbles are SO much easier to write, than the SS, just be all gooey and mushy since its a romantic divorce!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: samaz95

It was so delightfully wonderful, I absolutely loved it (:

I was lucky enough to read both parts together, and it made my heart sing with joy.


Awww! what a compliment! I literally could not hope for a better reaction, I really wanted to make people feel GOOD with this one. I am so so so glad you felt that way! Please keep reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Omg ❤️ what you write is shivaay of everybody's dream I need to re read ❤️
Thank You navin for this pleasant update.. it made my day.. A good day 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shizuku.T

Thank you Thank you Thank you

Two updates in twenty four hours...you made my day. A big thanks to all those who made this wonderful writer break her record :)

After reading your stories again and again I am at a point where I don't comment. It's like you have reached a point...where I look for you name in threads and every where. I always find myself short of words after reading your work...it's just so amazing and out of the world. Your stories last in my mind and I always always look forward to more.


Ive actually noticed your likes on posts, and I've gone to your page to see what you read and find interesting, which I somehow always enjoy and like, so I guess I also follow you! I hope you'll comment, I'm breaking my rule of never commenting on my own thread because of your post, because I REALLY want you to know how much I appreciate what you say. That's how we get to know each other. I hope you will not feel awkward, I would hate to think my stories made anyone feel tongue tied, and you are so articulate, too! I'm such a blabbermouth, I LOVE exchanging thoughts and ideas with people who I also cherish and would like to know better--please do comment, my love! Don't ever feel you cant, that would suck, and would deprive all of us.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuridi

Wow.. this is a big suprise two updates in 24 hours .This is a record i think and both updates having great writing 👏


Thank you! But yaar, don't get too used to 2 updates per day! I'll die dead, because I tend to write and write and write, and editing takes as long as writing, truly! Glad you enjoyed the work, I love that you commented!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Just LOVED it! This manically possesive Shivay...is so awesome to read. Anika is a goner!! Poor girl. Please continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi

Navin!!🤗

Thank you thank you!Thank you!! Thank you!! You took so much trouble and wrote this the same day!! I love it and you!! You gave me everything I wanted!! Shivaay's crazed concern for his sweet wife, the Oberois getting a earful for not taking care of Ani( I felt bad for everyone except Pinky) and Pinky got a dose as well! I loved it!! And the best part, Mallika witnessed the whole thing!! And she thought that her ex had literally lost his marbles!!

It was funny but I wondered if she felt a bittersweet happiness that Shivaay had finally felt for someone the way that she once felt for him! I know she loves Vikram now but still, I felt bad in the show when she spoke about how Shivaay had never cared!!
I loved Mallika, how I want her brought back for a cameo!! Gul, are you listening? She's doing another thing with you, what is the harm in a week long arc for Ishqbaaz? I know my love is an absolute minority position, but her role was the one time I felt that Gul used an excellent character actress correctly. Mallika establishes the position of the main heroine without taking away from the elegance and spirit Surbhi was bringing to her role of an independent, intelligent career woman. I think the audience needed to see it, too. It kind of framed the whole SSO-Anika thing going forward as a meeting of characters and minds. Of equals who both CHOOSE each other in a way, and arent together just due to the normal physical attraction of two beautiful people.

Somehow, on IPKKND, a lot of people took that reading --that Arnav's insane attraction to Khushi was why they ended up together, he could have done better, she just happened to... happen. On Ishqbaaz, they addressed that without turning the ex into a vamp, and giving SSO a past with an actual, believable woman in it--and a love story that highlights how shockingly intense his reactions have been with Anika, from the moment he met her. Hearing Dadi and OmRu, and having Mallika say it, comparing him as her ex and how he is with Anika are two different things. Mallika was everything SSO could have wanted, everything his brothers wanted for him. She loved him, and her family was ideal. Better than Anika, for SSO, in every way. But she wasn't..Anika. And that's the rub, naa?

But I guess she is a cool person that way and she liked Ani so its ok!! Anyway, the next dinner party that Ani hosts for the Ranas can be another drabble way in the future ( when the drabble numbers reach two digit numbers) --Nicely done, yaar. I almost didn't catch this one...nicely done 😆

when this whole Tia mess is sorted out and Ani is Mrs. Anika Singh Oberoi to the world as well!! Ooh, and I almost forgot, you even had everyone ignore Tia which I liked too!!
Did I mention that I love you!! And I am ulcer free thanks to this update!! Love and Jhappis to you Navin!!

Yeh lightning fast update ke liye tum responsible ho to a LARGE extent, my love. That was some beautifully crafted emotional blackmail. You are a PAST MASTER at it, bol deti hu. I could NOT leave you hanging, not when you wrote that post I've been reading all day. Likh na hi tha, tumhari liye.😆 I tried to give you everything you asled for, tia ko bhi ignore karwai!

Edited by napstermonster - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
OMG...its awesome
...superb...amazing...
this part is totaly rocking...just loved it...
waiting fr next update...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: bworm

Thank you thank you

Hahaha. .that was all but awesome. ..still chuckling as I type.
After commentin on the first part ...I was like...if anika is sick...Shivay will miss the party..duh...
What a reveal
Ok...so how's the family to take this now...I mean he went bat shit crazy...so it's very obvious now.
So can we pretty please have updates on the other stories too.
New year started of very well...thanks to you


Thanks for commenting, and you know, you always always comment, and I LOVE that, and I look out for your opinion. I sometimes don't post until I see if you and couple of others have read my update or not 😆 But yeah. I wanted to build this, drabble to drabble, to a point where the issue of what is going on between them is suspected by the family. But not for a while though. I still have some mushy romance scenes bubbling away, and I want to do a slow burn to the reveal. But I thought this would be a good starting point to making things a bit more difficult.

You know, among the adults, my favorite character is Pinky, because she is the MOST like Anika, and also, MOST like Tej. She is an enigma, her relationship with her family is so ..fluid. And she truly, utterly does not understand the aristocrat she gave birth to. Like, at ALL. And yet she loves him, desperately. Its so interesting. I would want to have Pinky at least question why she is so unfair to Anika, and so in awe of her to-be daughter in law. Its also odd that she cant see her son's love shining from his incredible eyes.

I mean, in the actual serial, even TEJ knows Shivaay married Anika mainly because he wanted to, and Janvi tells Pinky again and again, daal me kuch kaala hai with the pregnancy. On a side note, with Tej and Janvi-I wish these elders were involved, because if SSO is allowing himself to be blackmailed over the Om issue, come on--shouldn't Tej know something this big might be coming to hurt the one son he despairs over, but fiercely loves?

Thoda random and different rant ho gaya, but thanks for commenting, and for liking the Drabble, my dear! Seriously, thank you.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I loved Mallika, how I want her brought back for a cameo!! Gul, are you listening? She's doing another thing with you, what is the harm in a week long arc for Ishqbaaz? I know my love is an absolute minority position, but her role was the one time I felt that Gul used an excellent character actress correctly. Mallika establish the position of the main heroine without taking away from the elegance and spirit Surbhi was bringing to her role of an independent, intelligent career woman. I think the audience needed to see it, too. It kind of framed the whole SSO-Anika thing going forward as a meeting of characters and minds. Of equals who both CHOOSE each other in a way, and arent together just due to the normal physical attraction of two beautiful people.

Hearing Dadi and OmRu, and having Mallika say it, comparing him as her ex and how he is with Anika are two different things. Mallika was everything SSO could have wanted, everything his brothers wanted for him. She loved him, and her family was ideal. Better than Anika, for SSO, in every way. But she wasn't..Anika. And that's the rub, naa?

Love the way you put it Navin!! I really loved Mallika too. Many people felt that her cameo role threw the story off track but I felt helped the audience actually realise how Shivaay would be in a relationship even if the girl was smart and complimented him in literally ever way but wasn't in love with her!!

See, like you said, Mallika would have been the perfect society wife for Shivaay , she was sophisticated,educated, understood him well, got along with his brothers and even seemed really comfortable with him and unlike Tia, was smart and sweet. But unlike Anika, never affected Shivaay!! I really liked the way how Mallika pointed out this fact to him multiple times and really gelled with Ani as well!!

And when she left, advices him to not ignore whats between Shivaay and Ani and the first word that comes to his mouth is 'love' and its absurd then for him but I imagined that it planted the first seeds of such a thought in Shivaay's head!! A sort of role that Lavanya played in IPK but she told her bit to Khushi!!

As for Gul bringing her back to the show, I think she seems to be bringing back only new villains!! I mean I am still waiting for Om's girl to show up but we get to see Dil bole Kapoors moments (with that funny 90 degree "Heil Hitler" followed by abrakadabra moves !!)

Do you know, there was even a time when I wished Rana didn't exist so that Mallika and Om could be together! I have actually read MalliKara fanfiction and I liked it!!😆😆


( when the drabble numbers reach two digit numbers) --Nicely done, yaar. I almost didn't catch this one...nicely done 😆
Heehee...😆



Yeh lightning fast update ke liye tum responsible ho to a LARGE extent, my love. That was some beautifully crafted emotional blackmail. You are a PAST MASTER at it, bol deti hu. I could NOT leave you hanging, not when you wrote that post I've been reading all day. Likh na hi tha, tumhari liye.😆 I tried to give you everything you asled for, tia ko bhi ignore karwai!


You flatter me Navin!! I dont do emotional blackmail at all...just ask my college friends!! I usually resort to sad faces and puppy eyes and get my way!! 😆😉
Thank you so so much Navin!! And for the nth time, love you!! Muah!!😳
Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago

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