Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Damn! How I missed this work of yours. anyways it was awesome as always. Shivay fussing over anika was cute.

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Thank you so much for updating again within a day🤗

I knew it will be worth losing my sleep(im very particular on sleeping till satisfied types)over this because YOU write it so wonderfully...

One thing that i love about your writing is the way you put in these small small hindi words here and there which makes me feel like im reading something which i can connect with with my heart...like for example: when shivaay says "this stupid sa one on the bed" in part B. Thats one of my favourite things about your writing...

Ok coming to the update...

Pinky deserved that rant,scream that she got from shivaay...like she herself doesnt know about her son, she should have known when to talk when shivaay is screaming his head off at the family for not looking after his jaan...even sowmya who just came into the family few days ago kept quite...i dont feel pity for pinky at all...

I just cant get over this happy happy sa feeling that i get when shivaay takes care of anika like she is his baby...i was expecting this mother hen behaviour from shivaay and i got to read it🤗

I loved that om considered mallika as a family and let her in...

Mallika is love isnt she?😳 she even let tia flirt with sid just to find what the problem was🤣 gosh that was hillarious

Lol at when shivaay wrapped anika like a human burrito🤪

His anika sensors are really tuned well in this story😆

Can i say i love you for all these amazing alternate stories that u give us which makes me feel like hugging you really tight?

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

...Come to the bed and see her, but don't get her excited or help her to get off the bed, or I'll throw you out, like I did to Rudra." Somehow, I really cracked up at this one. 🤣

But what a treat this was! A fussy SSO at his best! If only this guy could control his temper, he's a gem of a person. Absolutely loves how you went into the details of Shivaay doing this and that, sensing things being off with her, coming home an finding her. :) And Mallika, that girl is the cutest! She was so awestruck by this side of Shivaay Singh Oberoi that she was at a loss for words but instead of accepting it, she thought it was Shivaay who'd lost his marbles. 😆 I had loved Mallika in the show and the Ranas too. With Gul bringing back all and sundry, I hope she brings back the Ranas someday, even if for another cameo.

Looking forward to your next drabble. I think I've only read Dirt by you - and that was another beauty.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

ahahahaha this was hilarious yet so cute and romantic

ofc shivaay sensed and found her

poor Maalika got the shock of her life hahah

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Shivaay. .. What a mess he is seeing Anika like this.
Loved the update, continue soon

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shanry

@shanry

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

I actually wanted Anika to leave OM so we could watch Shivaay coming up with ridiculous reasons to visit Anika & to watch their romance blossom in more real surroundings rather than the surreal OM 😒

Please don't get me wrong, I love your take on this especially since I love your writing style, but if you think the above is a good idea, could you maybe write something along those lines... pleeaasseee 🤗

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Nirmala

@nim_var

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Absolutely love the Drabble series and the latest one was just superb...

It brought to mind the way Shivaay wrapped up Anika and fussed over her like mother hen... went batty with worry that she might still be cold...

I was surprised to see Anika up and about with a jug near the fridge.. how did he let her get up????

Had the scene played out like your story.. it would have been perfect.. he physically getting into bed to keep her and warm her in the process...😉 oh my..that would have been perfect...

Loved how Tia was ignored and the family kept up appearances while the two were busy in their own world to care for what was happening outside their BR. Malice's reactions was priceless and Poor SAumya pulling in another contact of hers... at this rate she is going to run short of docs and nurses to call upon. SSO giri... on in full swing.

Keep them coming... love your tales. 👏

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Piya

@Piya1199

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Just wow!!!!

U write it sooo well..it just ffels like i am really watching it

Shivika were soo cute😳

Shivay didn't care about his party but stayed in his room for his anika..sooo sweet

Awesome

Pls update the next part sooon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Chapter 3 (B) as expected brought in varied feelings of Shivaay to the fore..if it was his family first facing the music and wrath of the famous Shivaay Singh Oberoi's anger for not taking enough care of Anika..and in the next instance it was his worry for Anika that poured out, with every inch of him being scared for Anika...Shivaay taking care of Anika was extremely heartwarming to read about..loved all shades of Shivaay in this update... the only person, outside the Oberoi household who I wished gets to know that Anika is Anika Shivaay Singh Oberoi first is Mallika and just like Shivaay even I am glad she is here...Shivaay outpouring his worry, taking care of Anika and him being the perfect husband, awww..I loved it...without a care of the world Shivaay being near Anika, by her side shows how much she means to him...it is obvious for Mallika all this is alien and even after Shivaay telling her Anika is his wife, she thinks her friend has lost it...this is so funny...and topped with this Omkara and Rudra's laughter, Shivaay being flabbergasted and finally Anika's laughter, this completely cracked me up...and what I loved in the update most was when Shivaay took Anika in the protective cocoon of his arms and soothing Anika's fever and also comforting his tensed heart... simply beautiful...I am so happy Mallika will help Shivaay, Anika, Omkara, Rudra and Soumya to show Tia her right place...awesome update... absolutely superb...please do continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly!

Edited by MysticRiver - 8 years ago