Drabble Series: A Romantic Divorce (NEW-DRABBLE Pg 34) 25th February - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Navin!!🤗
Thank you thank you!Thank you!! Thank you!! You took so much trouble and wrote this the same day!! I love it and you!! You gave me everything I wanted!! Shivaay's crazed concern for his sweet wife, the Oberois getting a earful for not taking care of Ani( I felt bad for everyone except Pinky) and Pinky got a dose as well! I loved it!! And the best part, Mallika witnessed the whole thing!! And she thought that her ex had literally lost his marbles!!

It was funny but I wondered if she felt a bittersweet happiness that Shivaay had finally felt for someone the way that she once felt for him! I know she loves Vikram now but still, I felt bad in the show when she spoke about how Shivaay had never cared!!But I guess she is a cool person that way and she liked Ani so its ok!! Anyway, the next dinner party that Ani hosts for the Ranas can be another drabble way in the future ( when the drabble numbers reach two digit numbers) when this whole Tia mess is sorted out and Ani is Mrs. Anika Singh Oberoi to the world as well!! Ooh, and I almost forgot, you even had everyone ignore Tia which I liked too!!
Did I mention that I love you!! And I am ulcer free thanks to this update!! Love and Jhappis to you Navin!!
Edited by chottekikhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Thank you thank you
Hahaha. .that was all but awesome. ..still chuckling as I type.
After commentin on the first part ...I was like...if anika is sick...Shivay will miss the party..duh...
What a reveal
Ok...so how's the family to take this now...I mean he went bat shit crazy...so it's very obvious now.
So can we pretty please have updates on the other stories too.
New year started of very well...thanks to you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Wow ..that was superb...love you for writing such a brilliant one...
Waiting for more ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayy, I thought you wouldn't update today- got a pleasant surprise before going to bed!

OhMyGod, this gives so many feels and sends my heart aflutter...❤️

It was also reminiscent of how SSO did tuck Anika in in yesterday's epi...you always write in character, kudos for that!

Can't wait for the next drabble...

And Malika, reading things from her perspective was wonderful...I always did like her.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Wow.. this is a big suprise two updates in 24 hours .This is a record i think and both updates having great writing 👏
Edited by anuridi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Thank you Thank you Thank you

Two updates in twenty four hours...you made my day. A big thanks to all those who made this wonderful writer break her record :)

After reading your stories again and again I am at a point where I don't comment. It's like you have reached a point...where I look for you name in threads and every where. I always find myself short of words after reading your work...it's just so amazing and out of the world. Your stories last in my mind and I always always look forward to more.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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?awsm jani thanx for the p.m conti soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Yeahh thanku for posting this awesome update love the detailing and the beautiful writing with all the nuances.. beautiful n please don't end it even though it's a Drabble just keep writing pleaseee
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

Yayy, I thought you wouldn't update today- got a pleasant surprise before going to bed!


OhMyGod, this gives so many feels and sends my heart aflutter...❤️

It was also reminiscent of how SSO did tuck Anika in in yesterday's epi...you always write in character, kudos for that!

Can't wait for the next drabble...

And Malika, reading things from her perspective was wonderful...I always did like her.


amru can we have her back in the show! she was so much fun!

also, navin - i didnt know we had to threaten you on PMS to get updates, i will do it more for next update 😆

this was lovely btw, cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was so delightfully wonderful, I absolutely loved it (:
I was lucky enough to read both parts together, and it made my heart sing with joy.

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