Her Rise and His Fall ShiVika SS: Ch 5 on 14

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Superb story...
Just loved all the 4parts...
Specially the ishkara flashback...
it was awsum...
Nw Ishana works as detective...
N she will find the truth abt Tia...
Eagerly waiting for next update!!
continue soon

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

wow loved ishana and om story

please do continue

bye sumi

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Lovely update ...thanks for pm dear😊😊😊

IshKara flashback was so beautiful 😊...they confessed. .. .night were together 😉 Om gifted her a dancing peacock pendent ...it's beautiful. ...but that one call for ish's sis broken his heart into zillion 🥺...he broke their relationship 😕

Present they reached Om's studio ...he saw the pendent and was thinking that did she really lived him😊...it's a good sign

Continue soon

Thanks for pm 😊

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Superb update. Plz don't write ishkara secene this much beautifully yaar. This is a severe crime😊 jokes apart. Sincerely, after your last update I crazily missing ishkara.i want next update full of shivika. A strong Anika and tensed shivaay. Hope u will update soon.Thanks for the pm...

Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

its a long and soulful update and i just love it.

continue soon👏

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Oo very interesting story of how they met and what they went through

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Aquamarine03

@Aquamarine03

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
The past was painful... ishana lost her father and om in same day...
The story is really interesting...
Eagerly waiting for your next update...
Thanks for the pm

No problem. Honestly, I did not like her father's character in the real show, so i thought he deserved a dramatic exit 😆.

I am very glad u liked my story.

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Aquamarine03

@Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bworm
That was beautiful.
Loved it.
The story is for all couples it seems...Anika being the catalyst.

Waiting for more.
Thanks for the pm

I started with Shivika OS, i did not plan to continue it into s series of stories... So i decided to add little bit about each character...

Shivika are the central characters and in the real show their story is more emphasized, so i thought why not add little back story into RuMya and IshKara. 😊

Shivika alone cannot be united, they need other's help. I mean in reality we all need help from our family and friends to live.

Edited by Aquamarine03 - 8 years ago

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Aquamarine03

@Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: lakshmi32
Superb update. Plz don't write ishkara secene this much beautifully yaar. This is a severe crime😊 jokes apart. Sincerely, after your last update I crazily missing ishkara.i want next update full of shivika. A strong Anika and tensed shivaay. Hope u will update soon.Thanks for the pm...

Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.

I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana.

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.

I will write CH5 ASAP.

P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter 😆