Her Rise and His Fall ShiVika SS: Ch 5 on 14

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Awesome

Please continue soon😊

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Oh wow so this is ishkaras past...

That was such an detailed description about their past...

Looking forward to how things will improve between them and shivika

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03

Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.
I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana.

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.

I will write CH5 ASAP.
P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter 😆

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03

Aw thanks for reading and your feedback.
I went back to watch few IShkara scenes to write this Chapter... honestly, I too missed Ishana, even though I hated the pathetic Bela and Mela track, I loved the confrontation scene between Om and Ishana.

Originally, I did not plan to continue the OS into a series, but after getting all these wonderful review from you guys i decide to continue it. I Just wanted to add back-story to the other Obros.

My Ch 4 is long, because i wanted to fast tract to present situation with Tia's exposure.

I will write CH5 ASAP.
P.S I promise to add more Shivika in the next chapter 😆

waiting

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Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ISensedYou
Oh wow so this is ishkaras past...
That was such an detailed description about their past...
Looking forward to how things will improve between them and shivika
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

😳Sorry for such a long chapter...I will keep it short for the next chapters... and thanks a lot for the feedback.

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Aquamarine03

😳Sorry for such a long chapter...I will keep it short for the next chapters... and thanks a lot for the feedback.

Actually i liked the long chapter😆 so keep it like that pls😳

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Oh that was heartbreaking

Poor ishana

Loved d update

Thanks for the pm

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Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Oh that was heartbreaking
Poor ishana
Loved d update
Thanks for the pm

Thanks. I wanted ishana's character to have strong motive to change herself from a con person to someone who want to help others. That's why I gave her painful back story .

I am working on the ch 5 . It will lighter less emotional 😃

Edited by Aquamarine03 - 8 years ago

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choco0709

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Wohhh awesome what a ff mind blowing
I really liked ishkara you portrait it so well eagerly waiting for next chapter I have read all chapters in one only it was amazing

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Aquamarine03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: choco0709
Wohhh awesome what a ff mind blowing
I really liked ishkara you portrait it so well eagerly waiting for next chapter I have read all chapters in one only it was amazing

Aw sweetie thanks for liking my story. 😊

I will update it soon as I am done writing ch 5.

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