ShivIka SS...TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE(final chap/ pg30)16 jan - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My bechari Anika😭
I really feel for her❤️
You have penned down all of her emotions so beautifully😳
It's a sheer masterpiece!
In such few words you have created a deep connection between Anika and the reader👏 I hope that Shivaay brings some hope in to her life
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh sheet poor annika... hope shivaay realise his mistake soon as you said in prologue that he is also behaving rudely with her... but plz i request you make happy ending haa...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

My bechari Anika😭

I really feel for her❤️
You have penned down all of her emotions so beautifully😳
It's a sheer masterpiece!
In such few words you have created a deep connection between Anika and the reader👏 I hope that Shivaay brings some hope in to her life
Do continue soon!

Thank u some much. I am feeling really happy that u liked my writing 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter : 2
Anika's Pov:

At very tender age i had learned to take care of myself. After that accident i was sent to boarding school. They never tried to call me or sent any letters. I practically grew up there only. I spent my every vacation as well as my birthday alone. I used to be left alone in dorm when all other children goes home for there vacation. They used to sent money only to the school . When i was of right age they sent me credit card which i rarely use.

Finally i bidbye to my mom n sis whom i was looking them in that shining stars as today was really special day for me. But i guess it was never special day. Today is my birthday. I get up from the couch n went down n found no one. Who am looking for? It's Shivaay Singh Oberoi. My husband. Guess what? We r already married for one year. What's the catch? It was marriage of convenience. We both don't wanted to get married but i think it was not acceptable to our destiny. The marriage happened.

FLASHBACK :

While i was returning to home from my work...i saw there was an old lady who was fainted. All the people were only looking n gossiping around. I took help of some people and carried her to the hospital. After an hour she got conscious while i was sitting beside her. I can't leave her alone in this state n there was no one for her. She smiled at me n hug me . She said thank u for saving her life. "What's ur name?" She asked. "Anika", i said . She asled many things about me like about my family, where i live , what do i do? She was really sweet with me. I was feeling happy after long time. Then i left from there n went home.

Next morning dad came into my room n told me to get ready as some guest r coming. Ivwas shocked as well happy that for the first time my dad has asked me to involve in family get together...but i was unware who were the guest. After i got ready i went down n saw there was the same old lady whom i helped yesterday n a boy infact a handsome boy was sitting there with my father n brother.

After settling myself on the sofa...i watched the boy who was doing something on his phone. I must say he was really handsome especially his eyes which were blue. It was really beautiful. I was brought from my dreams when i heard the word"marriage". Then i got to know that dad n that old lady were discussing about my marriage with him. After sometime i n shivaay was in my room. We were sent to talk in alone. I got shocked after what i heard. " i don't wanted to get married to u. I am being forced to get married. I can't even imagine to live my life with u", Shivaay said. "But why"was only the words came out of my mouth. " becoz i am... i am not interested in getting married. I am only doing this because of my grandma whom u help yesterday. My grandma wanted me to get married to u as she think i can't get a better wife than u...seriously!. She have given me promise so that i can't go against her wish. So now it's only u who can't stop this marriage by denying the marriage proposal", Shivaay said feeling really frustrated. With this he left the room.

After his confession i was standing there thinking about his word . Suddenly i heard a knock on door n saw dad . Again i was shocked after what i heard. "Anika anyhow u have to get married to shivaay", said my dad in a little loud voice. "What?...but why dad? He is not even interested in this marriage...neither am i ." , i said. But he was not even listening to me. "Anika do u remember what u have done to ur sister...if u want to pay for ur sin then get married to shivaay", said my dad with disgust. With this dad left n i was standing there numb. I wasn't able to think anything.

After one week i n shivaay got married. He never talked to me after that infact he started hating me. But i also don't have any choice left. I was in guilt that i had killed my mom n sis. So i agreed to get married as per as dad's word...aleast may be by fulfilling dad's wish i can get him happy. But i know i did wrong with shivaay. After marriage we both left for mumbai as shivaay's business is there.

FLASHBACK END

When we came to mumbai i got to know the real reason that why he doesn't want to get married. Because he was in a relationship. Well he has a steady girlfriend. But time really flies very faster n one day i woke up n i am already head over heels in love with my husband. But his feeling towards me never changed. He still love his girlfriend Mallika n they r still together until now like i never existed. All he feels about me is pure hatred. Well i have done to deserve this.

It's maybe my birthday but it just an ordinary day for me. I cooked some dinner n have . After that i went to my room n lay on the bed wondering why would god let me live another year wen everyone clearly doesn't want me. I closed my eyes n tried to remember the happy times wen i was with my sister. I missed her so badly. How i wish it was me who died at that day. Maybe my dad would be happy. Maybe they would have complete n happy family without me. I sighed n fall into slumber.

It has been two days since my birthday n shivaay didn't came home yet. Although i am already expecting that he will not come n do some romantic on my special day but i was hoping that somehow he will home so that i could get glimpse of him. I love him to the moon n back. I am already happy to see him for like 2 minutes even he is scowling when he sees me. I am always worried for him. I know i don't have to worry because he is safe in someone arms where he is happy. He belongs there not here no matter how much i want him to be with me.

Shivaay's Pov:

It's 6 pm n i should be heading home now. Not that i consider it my home anyway. I am a married man for 1 agonizing year. I didn't want this marriage in first place. But i can't break grandma's promise. Now i have a wife but i don't love her. Anika is kind n sweet to me but i despise her. If she didn't agree with this bullshit i would have married Mallika. Mallika is my life n am thankful that she stayed by my side despite of our situation. I thank her for being so patient wid me. She is smart, intelligent n drop-dead gorgeous unlike my so called wife.

I know it's Anika's birthday so i decided to go to Mallika's home instead. I bought that house for two of us. I don't want to give any impression to my wife that i care for her because i don't. Instead i will go to the arms of the women i truly love n make love to her all through the night.


So guys how was this chapter...do share ur views..

Edited by Kunaljaisingh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so heartbreaking yet beautiful
Anika really loves Shivaay a lot 😳
Yet Mr Billu ji would rather be with Malika 😡
Anika is a really strong girl to face all of this
You have made me love her even more ❤️
You have captured every emotion; whether it was pain or anger very well 👏
I love it ❤️
Do update soon!
Thanks for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a bas***d Shivaay is...make anika fall in love with someone else... please...all those guilty should repent of what they had done to her...make a happy ending for her...please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww.. Poor Anika!!!! Plz continue soon and plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Readboth the parts together...
U ve portrayed Anika's emotions beautifully...
My eyes were wet...She is really brave nd strong...
I feel really bad for this Anika...
Shivaay loves Mallika...nd is going to her on Anika's birthday.
Poor girl...love ur updates...
Pls update this one a bit regularly nd ur story is soo gud that no short updates...i want looonnnggg updates
Continue sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
iss shivaay ko to main 😡 pyar nahi karte to dard to mat do yar 😡
annika 😭 😭


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Posted: 8 years ago
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i read the both the updates in one go
feeling really bad for anika dear
will anika ever get any love in her life

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