ShivIka SS...TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE(final chap/ pg30)16 jan

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Posted: 8 years ago
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" WHEN U STOP LOOKING FOR THE LOVE OF UR LIFE N START DOING WHAT U LOVE,THE LOVE OF UR LIFE WILL FIND U"
Anika was neglected since her childhood. Her father n her only brother hated her for the death of her mother n sister. She practically spend her maximum day at home. Now that she is married, nothing really changed. Her husband Shivaay is just like her family. He never treated her as his wife. Through it all, Anika still loved her family n her husband unconditionally. She waited n waited that someday they will love her back but no. Will Anika give up n walk away forever? If so , is Shivaay going to realize Anika's importance?


INDEX:
CHAPTER 1 : pg2
CHAPTER 2 : pg4
CHAPTER 3 : pg6
CHAPTER 4 : pg9
NOTE : pg11
CHAPTER 5: pg12
CHAPTER 6: pg15
CHAPTER 7: pg18
CHAPTER 8: pg23
CHAPTER 9: pg25
CHAPTER 10: pg28
Final chapter : pg30
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter:1
Anika's pov:

I sat quietly n watched the sky which was full of stars. They were shining really bright. The cold breeze hugged me but i don't care. My heart has become cold as ice. I am broken n lonely all my life. So what's new? I have been like this only even i dont remember wen was the last time i smiled genuinely. I don't even know the feeling of being happy anymore. I am really tired of my life. I leaned on the couch n rested my head n closed my eyes. Memories rushing through my mind . That day when it all started.

FLASHBACK :
(18 years ago)

My name is Anika Malhotra. I have a sister named Aisha Malhotra . I am six year old. I have a big brother named Sahil Malhotra n my dad. My mom is no more wid us. I heard dad told grandma that it was my fault that mom was gone but i didn't understand why. I know my dad n brother hates me but still i love them.

We were celebrating our brother's birthday in our house. We have alots of visitors. A lots of my brother's friends. They looked very happy. I am just watching them from my room becoz dad said am not allowed to go down n play wid them. I watched my brother opened his gift. I too have gift for him. I draw a picture of him n mine n i really hope he liked it.

I heard little footsteps coming to my door. I know its my di Aisha. Dad n my brother adored her so much unlike me. She was allowed to play wid others but not me. I still love her as she is very kind to me. She brought cake for me. We both were munching cakes in my room. I got up n handover my gift for my brother.

"Plz give my gift to him.", i said. Instead she held my hand n told me to give this gift by myself. I tried to protest but she wouldn't listen. I was shaking as she was taking me downstairs. Dad saw us n got ballistic. He scolded me n told me to gi back to my room. He snatched my little arm n dragged me towards my room. I heard di calling dad but he doesn't want to listen. I turned around to see her n i was startled when i saw her clutching her chest n it looks like she can't breath.

"Aisha diii..."

But i wasn't able to help her. She fell down from the stairs. She was rushed to the doctor while i was locked up in the room...alone. Two days later they told me that aisha di was gone n dad never wanted me to see again. It's my fault that we lost mom n di that's why he hates me so much. That day they sent me school far away. They never called me or sent any letters. I have no one since then.

(Flashback end)

I opened my eyes n found myself crying. I lost my whole family when i lost aisha di . They blamed it all to me. At very tender age i have learned to take care of myself alone.


So how is this chapter...hope u guys enjoyed it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Im first to comment [:D/] .oh what a life she is living.really feel bad for her.hope u give us her father and brother pov about their attitude.continue soon.thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh poor Annika! She's being punished without any fault of hers! Her dad and brother are stupid if they think that Annika is responsible for anyone's demise. I hope she gets all the love she deserves soon, be it alone or with Shivaay.
Update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Feeling sad for anika
Emotional story
doha.omar thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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o my.. i loved it waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh gos it so emotional..my eyes got moist...continue. soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nice story...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's nice story...please write ahead and continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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u made me cry with this update..
it was really painful..
Anika has suffered a lot.
thanks for the pm.
update soonish..

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