ShivIka SS...TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE(final chap/ pg30)16 jan

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Jishka

@Asad08

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Damn awesome update!!! Loved it
Thanks for the pm and continue soon

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floral

@floral

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

omg awesome update

loved it very much u made me cry

poor anika i really felt bad for her

now shivaay understands about his love malika

plzzz do continue soon

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---Angel---

@---Angel---

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

This is brilliant dear👏

Once again you have showcased your amazing writing skills!

My heart aches for Anika🥺

I hope Shivaay realises his mistake😭

I am glad that Shail is finally going to help Anika

As always I LOVED it!

Thank you so much for the pm dear🤗

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Superb update!!!

Shitt maann!! A few tears fell from my eyes reading ur update...

Anika divorcing Shivaay...

Shivaay not feeling good about it.

I knew that Mallika will betray him..i was waiting for this part...

Finally Sahil is turning good which is the best part of all...

Anika left the house...

Loved this update...u ve fitted evrything perfectly in there...

Comtinue soon

Love Sharmi

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Akshnavlove

@ShivIka..Ketaki

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

emotional update but still ab mujhe ek umeed dikh rahi hain,,, shivaayko mallika asli maksad pata chal gaya sahilko bhi apne kiye pe pachtava ho raha hain ab mujhe lagta hain ki sahil shivaayse bat karega aur shivaayko anika ke pastke bareme pata chalega... 😃 but anika to chali gayi hope so uske sath aur kuch bura na ho wo itne jaldi ab shivaayko maf na kar de... jo dard shivaayne usse diya hain wo bhi usse thodasa tadpaye 😉 but still wanna happy ending haa 😆

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Oh my poor anika,how all her life she suffered.but atleast now sahil understand her misery and decided stand beside her.and shivaay deserve what milika did to him 😡 .continue soon.

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_Niki_

@_Niki_

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Interesting! Pls update soon 😊

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Vishaka

@Vishakha..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

cont soon...
it was awesome..
let shivaay repent his wrong deeds

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Kunaljaisingh

@Kunaljaisingh

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Note:

For chapter 5 am going to show the guilty Shivaay so i want u guys to choose a song for me...i listen to many songs n i choose two ...so u guys tell me which one i should use.

1. Tera pyaar teri yaad by Rohith Dethan

2. Gunaah kiya dil maine from movie Blood Money

I request u guys to listen this song from youtube to feel his misery. I will be waiting for ur response guys.

Even u can also suggest me some other songs...maybe it will suits his situation.

N lastly thank u guys for ur beautiful comments...am really happy getting so many response.

Plz listen to both of the song n decide .

After i will get suitable song am gone update so vote. Or u can give ur own song also.