||Ishqbaaaz FF - 'Apart'|| Chapter 1...10 Oct... - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oberoi house

Shivaay is sleeping in his room ..He sees Annika in his dream and starts murmuring her name and suddenly he opens his eyes which were he opene his red shot eyes and was toally in anger... He gets up and picks a flower vase from the side table and throws it...


Shivaay - what's wrong with u Shivay ..?damn... Tu uske bare me kese soch sakta hai ..no no ..me Nai soch raha uske baare mei...( with attitudly and anger ) beascuse I HATE YOU Annika ..hate you alot.( he remembers something and becomes sad ) sabse badi galti Ki Maine ..tumse pyaar Karke ..kaash kabhi pyaar Na hua hota tumse...


In between, someone knocks... Shivaay becomes normal...


Shivaay - come in...


Its somya..she was looking ery beautiful in red colour Anarkali...


Soumya - Good morning.. Bade bhaiyaa

Shivay - good morning

Somya - bhaiya...choti maa ne aapke liye black Coffee bheji hai..


Shivay nods - hmm...rakh do baad mei pee lungaa ..


Soumya keeps the black coffee on table... .she notices the broken vase and understands what actually happened before her entering the room...


Soumya -( in mind - aaj vapas vase tootaa..Annika Bhabhi Ke Jane Ke badd Ye to rozzz Ka ho gaya hai )


Shivay Ki taraf dekh Ke
Somya - bade bhaiya...aap theek Hai na ..?

Shivaay kept silence for few minutes...

Shivaay - offcourse ..Muje Kya hoga ..I'm perfectly fit n fine...

Soumya- ha... woh to dikh hi raha Hai bhaiya ..isliye to Maine pucha...

Shivaay - tum naa ..woh idiotic TV serials dekhna bandh Karo ..tumhara dimag kharab ho gya Hai ..mei Bol raha hu Ki I'm perfectly fine,that means I am actually fine...


Soumya - bade bhaiya ..Ye dilaasa aap aapne aap KO de sakte Hai .hum Sab KO Nahi ..Sab jante Hai unn dono Ke Jane Ke baad aap kitna ..


Shivaay cuts her in between...


Shivaay - Rudra kaha Hai ?.


Soumya - woh to early morning office chala gaya..

Shivaay sadly smiles - kitna serious ho gaya hai hamara Rudra..Om aur hamesha yahi chahte the Ki Rudra serious ho lekin itna bhi serious ban jayega woh kabhi Nahi socha tha..agar Om hota to dekhta Ki kitna badal gaya hai dumbell oberoi.

A Voice interrupts them...


Voice - Om Hota toh naa..reality is om yaha Nai Hai or nahi kabhi aayega ..


Shivaay and soumya turns and watches Tia standing their wig a devilish smirk..


Shivaay nd soumya give an angry look to Tia ..Tia notices that Shivaay is angry...


Tia - Shivaay baby ..gussa mat ho ..mene Jo kaha Vo sahi to Hai ..Ye sachai KO jitna jaldi accept Kar le vahi acha hoga Na ..I know sach kadva hota Hai lekin badla to Nahi jata Na .


Soumya - hum log accept kare ya Na kare ..its none of your business...

Tia - whatever ..tumko Koi Bol bhi nai raha ..

Soumya - itni subah subah Kya Kar rahi ho yaha ?

Tia- mai Shivay baby Se Milne Aayi thi ...kuch baat karni thi ..

Shivaay - bolo ..

Tia - I'm happy to know that Ki tum move on Kar rahe ho ...

Shivaay - hmmm ..somya mai camp me call Kar Ke aaya ..


Somya -Theek Hai bade bhaiya ..mai aapka breakfast ready rakhti hu.


Shivay nodss and leaves...


Soumya - Tia ..tumhara hogaya ya kuch Baki Hai ..

Tia - what do you mean ..

Soumya - mean that ..agar ho gaya ho to tum Ja sakti ho .. Tia - Ja rahi hu ..vese bhi tumse bat karne ne me .Koi intrest Nai Hai
Somya - to kisne kaha Ki Muje bhi Koi shokh Hai tumse bat karne Ka.

Tia left ..

Somya - Anika Bhabhi Ke Jate hi aa gayi ..unki jagah lene Ke liye...

Opposite side...In a small beautiful collage...


In hall .. a girl was searching something .. She turns ,her face was visible now.she was Annika...She look very beautiful in pink kurti with black denims...


Anika - mera phone kaha Hai...


One girl comes - Ye raha phone


Anika looks t her aNd smiles - thank you ishaana ..kab Se dhoondh rahi thi mil hi Nai raha tha


Ishana smile ..she look very beautiful in red crop top and denims...


Ishaana - Your welcome Annika...

Anika - chalo me nikalti hu canteen Ke lie ..sham KO milte ha...


Ishana - nashta to karto jao...

Anika - Nahi ishana. Bahot late ho gaya hai .nashta karne ruki to or late ho jayega...


A Voice comes - late ho to Koi bat Nai ..tum nashta Kar Ke hi jaogi..kam zaruri Hai lekin itna bhi nai Ki ..family Ke sath bedh Ke nashta Na Kar sako


Anika and ishana smile.

Anika - sahi kaha om ..lekin Aaj samaan Ke delivery karni Hai ..mai late gayi toh delivery bhi late hogi...


Omkara - Nahi hoga late ..Maine manager Se baat kar li Hai ..Vo time Se delivery karva dega .so ,relax hoke naashta Kar lo


Anika smile - Thik Hai

Ishana - chalooo..

On dining table... Ishana goes to serve Om's plate ..om stops her...

Om - Muje bhookh Nahi Hai .tum dono kha lo ..

Ishana aNd Anika sees each other and then at Om..They get to know his inner turmoil...

Ishaana - tum Nahi khaoge to ..hum bhi nai khayege..

Anika - Haan

Om - Mujhe sach me bhookh Nai Hai ..


Ishaana holds his hand ..


Ishana - I know om.tum unn dono KO Bahot miss Kar rahe ho..

Anika - Haan omkara .Vo dono bhi tumhe Bahot miss Kar rahe hoge..

Omkara sadly - don't know Vo dono kese hoge ..agar Kuch hua to ..

Ishana - Kuch Nai hoga ..sabse badi bat Vo dono Ek dusre Ke sath Hai ..agar Kuch hua to dono mil Ke handle Kar lege .dono Ek dusre Ki himmat hai

Anika - Haan om..tum khamkhaaa unki fikar Kar rahe ho ..chalo aab Kuch kha lo
Omkara smile - u are right.. Me Kuch jyada hi tension le raha hu
Ishana - akhir me tumhe samaj me to aaya .. Omkara - Haan samaj to aayega hi Na ..qki Jo tumhare paas Na Hai Vo mere pas Hai ..dimag..,


Ishana - haaawww omm...

Ishana starts going from there...


Om holds her hand ..

Om -ishaanaaa

Ishana turns nd gives sleepish smile ..she again sits aNd hold Om's hand

Ishaana - Mister pati Dev ..mai mazak Kar rahi thi,,,

Om - lekin mai mazak Nahi Kar raha ..

Ishana -om

Ishana, Omkara and Annika starts laughing...


a/N : Do comment if you guys liked it...and the chapter is not proof read so their must be many typos...
Edited by KJ-Deewani - 8 years ago
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Awsm update...

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