||Ishqbaaaz FF - 'Apart'|| Chapter 1...10 Oct...

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All the characters in this fiction are same from the show... The FF is actually a sequel from the show... Taking a leap of some years...



A/N: So here I present my cutiee Dhara Di's FF "Apart"... I am just helping her in this ff and posting it here as she isn't on Forums...Will be updating the prologue shortly...Till then share your views about the banner only...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue - Below (Page 1)
Chapter 1 - Page 5
Chapter 2 - Coming soon...

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For PM's comment below...

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Scene 1


Dadi cleans the dust from an old photo frame...Tears were flowing continuously from her shiny eyes...


Dadi - Kuch yaade sirf photo frame me hi reh jati Hai ..


Priyanka comes...


Priyanka-Dadi aap vapas iss photo frame KO dekh Ke Rone lage..


Dadi - Iss photo frame KO Roz isliye dekhti hu is umid Se Ki kabhi Na kabhi Ye pal photo frame Se bahar niklega ...or Meri nazro Ke samne Ye pal vapas dohraya jayega


Priyanka-Dadi...aapne jhoothi umeed leKar rakhi Hai ...Vo tino aab kabhi ek Nai ho sakte ..Ye aap bhi jante ho ache Se..


Dadi -Iss bat Ka hi to afsos Hai



Bua comes ..


Bua - Maa...Ab aapko Ye bat man hi leni chahiye Ki aab oberoi parivar Ke tin Nai do hi pote Hai


Dadi embrases the photo frame near her heart and cries... Priyanka also starts crying...



Scene 2


Pinky and Jhanvi sadly sit on a couch.. ..


Janvi - Unn tino Se Ye ghar me ronak thi ..Tino Ki hasi Se Ye ghar gunjta tha ..hamare parivar Ki dhadkan the tino ..uske chale jane Ke bad...to esaa lagta hai Ki...


Pinky - Manoo..kisi ne dhadkan hi chin li ho ...Sab ji rahe hai lekin jine Ki vajah hi Nai bachi ..


Scene 3


Roop (laughing evilly)- Aakhir Kaar Meri mehnat rang layi...Toot Ke bikhar gaya oberoi parivar..aab Jake mere kaleje KO thandak pohchi...



[B] [Color=orange] A/N: So here I am back with the prologue...Do let me know if you guys liked it... N do share your views in the form of comments...
Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: heemasomani

Interesting prologue

continue soon

Thank You... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was an eye catching prologue.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was very intriguing! Update soon! Will be waiting!
Ps. I hope no one is dead😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparklle801

It was an eye catching prologue.
Update soon.

Thank you... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

It was very intriguing! Update soon! Will be waiting!

Ps. I hope no one is dead😆

Thank you... ❤️
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Thank you... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you... ❤️

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