Unshakeable - FF [updated, 21/08/2016; page.7] - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Panda-

Noor, my hoor.

This sounds so intriguing.

And the 3 part prologue was the best decision you've made.

It gave an insight into all the different view points, and what each brother is dealing with, but also solidified the fact that the bond that ObBros share is too special, too unique for them to ever let go of, and sadly for anyone else to truly be able to understand.

Through whatever hell they seem to be going through right now, and how different their paths are, their souls still remain entangled. Afterall, it's one for all, all for one.

And, I see that you've kept a slight negative light onto the Girls, and at first thought I felt like I'll pity them or hate them, but now as I'm writing this, I feel like, I could definitely like them as well, despite my love for ObBros.

Because the fact that you're trying to show that these girls are vary of the kind of love they hold for each other despite it all, it seems very real. I'd imagine this to be a problem in any couple, irrespective of how 'good' the girl is. Maybe you didn't intend for me to like them, but too late now😆

Also, I see something fishy's going on in that little(or not so little) brain of our Ruddy boy, what's it that's making him act this way.

You've got me thrilled, excited, and all that jazz for this FF. Now you better update fasttt, or I'll torture Sarcy to death😆

You know I love your work, You can make the story of a vada pao also sound intriguing and soulful.

Enough praise for the day.

K bye

Originally posted by: crushcrushed

My heart broke reading this.*sigh* Amina the prologue was so beautiful. i Can't wait for the entire story to unfold.Plus that angst factor is making it more intriguing.Update ASAP. I can't wait already.Gul needs to hier you

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Res! 😊

Edited:

Dear Amina,

What a brilliant and intriguing prologue! This is probably something that all IBians are waiting to see on screen - the vanvaas! So Shivaay is out of Oberoi mansion, Om's been betrayed already by con woman Ishaana and Rudy boy is no longer the comic brother. Through all this their trust on each other remains intact, though cracks of doubts and questions are trying hard to penetrate this unflinching wall of trust. Brilliantly penned Amina. I really enjoyed how you have shown all three women too. In the end it is an Ishqbaazi tale of bromance and love. Bang on portrayal of that here. It left me curious and still content. Weird, I know! 😆

I loved the fact that there are so many unanswered questions and possibilities here that I can imagine. Shivaay and Anika seem to be going strong and own a restaurant together? Which was recently sabotaged, definitely not by Rudy Boy. Om is reeling from Ishaana's betrayal and from the turn of events regarding Oberoi empire. And Amina I was happiest with Rudra's mind blowing plan. Hit the enemy from within indeed! I can't wait to read the rest! Please update soon. 😊

Love,

V