Unshakeable - FF [updated, 21/08/2016; page.7]

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

res phat the whuck wats dis...I'll have to read dis so many times...mela baby ...

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Abhiya

@abhiya_12

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Noor prologue is damn beautiful.
Am waiting for the update now.
I just loved it.
The conversations between three pairs 👏

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Meha

@Meha101

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome dialogues between three couples...

Looking forward for more

Ruddy growing up as shark ...ooh la

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
Good one

Thank you, dear 😉

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: arachne
Despite your warning, I read this and just love it. The intrigue, the mystery, the heartbreak...💔
Now I have to think of ways to live with infrequent updates..😆
But I trust that it will be worth the wait.🤗

I'll be chanting this mantra for you

I have the right to be angry. I have the right to be upset. But never will I have the right to doubt Noor's updates

So, you read on your own risk 😛 But thank you! Am so glad that you liked it 😳 And I think I have some good managers behind me making me write.

And LOL - that mantra is good, ain't it? 😆

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Amekha

@Amekha

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautifully written ff.

But i couldnt' bear the pain the 3 brothers felt. You have just describe it so beautifully an flawlessly.

So rudra is trying to gain the confidence of their enemies and destroy them?

Can you pls send me the pm to next part

Edited by ..Amekha.. - 9 years ago

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Zarmina

@falala333

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Love this.. I can see lots of suspence and mystery in this, and I love mystery and suspence stories😉

Waiting for the next update😊

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

wow
thats an awesome start
ObBros are apart but still together
this is what i love the most most about the obbros
waiting for the story to unfold
cont soon

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Brilliantly penned down. I am amazed at your skills. The fliw of the scenes the emotions in it all just leave me speechless ev everytime. Can you please pm me when you update next? Pretty please😊

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coolove

@coolove

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

That was lovely
Somehow I always feel Rudra is like the dark horse in the show as well
That one day he will do something that will literally shock people

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