Unshakeable - FF [updated, 21/08/2016; page.7]

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: abhiya_12
Noor prologue is damn beautiful.
Am waiting for the update now.
I just loved it.
The conversations between three pairs 👏

Thank you, Rev 😳

Glad you liked it! And I will be updating today, hopefully. Almost done 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Meha101
Awesome dialogues between three couples...
Looking forward for more

Ruddy growing up as shark ...ooh la

Thank you, Meha! 😉

And Rudy boy has the potential to grow into a shark, doesn't he? 😆

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ..Amekha..
Beautifully written ff.
But i couldnt' bear the pain the 3 brothers felt. You have just describe it so beautifully an flawlessly.
So rudra is trying to gain the confidence of their enemies and destroy them?
Can you pls send me the pm to next part

Thank you, Am! 😳

I'll send you a PM when I put up the next part! 😉

And let's just say that Rudra Baby's gotten a hang of this being-cunning-and-smart business 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: falala333
Love this.. I can see lots of suspence and mystery in this, and I love mystery and suspence stories😉
Waiting for the next update😊

I am glad that you liked it 😳 Likewise! Add a little bit of suspence and mystery to a story and it becomes the more interesting 😆

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: srividhya68
wow
thats an awesome start
ObBros are apart but still together
this is what i love the most most about the obbros
waiting for the story to unfold
cont soon

Thank you, dear! 😳

And yes, this is what I love most about them, as well, and hope that as the show progresses, they never tamper with this. It'd take away from the uniqueness of their bond.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa
Brilliantly penned down. I am amazed at your skills. The fliw of the scenes the emotions in it all just leave me speechless ev everytime. Can you please pm me when you update next? Pretty please😊

Wow, thank you! 😳 And yes, I will PM you when the next part is ready - which should be very soon. Preferably today 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hey when will update the first chapter dear?

Am waiting eagerly! 😃

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1018283

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: coolove
That was lovely
Somehow I always feel Rudra is like the dark horse in the show as well
That one day he will do something that will literally shock people

Thank you 😳

And yes, I completely agree. Rudra is a walking oxymorong, you can never be too sure how he will react, what he will do. But due to his naivety, innocence and childishness people tend to either, overlook him as a potential danger or think he'd be easy to manipulate. But Rudra has the potential in him to be a greater manipulator than others 😆

Plus, when it comes down to his bros? He doesn't tolerate any nonsense 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: AdreamerA
Okay..
So it was a perfectly written, described and executed update. 😊
Just fell in love with it.. 😃
The mystery, the feelings, the heartbreaks all have left me intrigued 😳
Though I feel bad for Ishaana. Just because they are Omkaara's brothers they stand a chance in his life but not her. Just not fair!! 😭

But am impatiently waiting for your story to proceed. Continue soon!! 👏

Ps- This is longest comment of mine till now in Ishqbaaz Forum. ⭐️

Thank you! 😳 And your longest comment in IB forum? I feel honored 😳

Glad that you liked the start! As for Ishana... well, let's wait and see what exactly happened 😆 It might seem unfair, but that's how I see the Obros functioning: they can fall in love, care for others and so on, but other kind of relationships won't touch the level the one between the three of them has. One soul, three pieces and all 😳