AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 6

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

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I can't read it in my phone...the font goes on and on

~Maha~

thanx for the pm though

Hi Maha!

Sorry about the big font. I've changed it to the default one of IF. Take a look and please let me know if there is still a problem.

Anju

I really want to commend you on writing this beautiful story. To say the least I am hooked and intrigued by it. Please pm me when you update

That was another lovely chapter
I loved the camaraderie between Om and rudra
It's great to watch
Keep writing 😊

Just loved how you integrated their love story with the camaraderie between the Bros.

unres ...well I think I'll get tired of praising u ...the only author I absolutely adore is nimmi I used to literally stalk the forum just for her fiction to be updated and now am doing dat cause of dis fiction...

My goofball rudra he's worried for his abs and yet he still wants to eat those pastries man his whole monologue was so beautiful I was imagining leenesh expressions here ...

someone with a devilish mind and overgrown hair Hayee my O and dat cherry was also in O shape bechara babyyy...oh teriii rudra dancing ...junglee hein yeah puraaa

Yeah le romantic couple ko disturb karna chahtha hein I can so see dis happening in d show ...ROFLMAO isko off button bhi nay pata and then enters O...anshi breaks apart ...man these r scenes I wanna see on anshi he getting close out of love she will think its all a trap even though liking him ...

OK next comes d part where I was rolling and rofling man just read dis part so many times...my baby wanna demonstrate ( mere pe karo na) O is boggled confused Hayee if dis happens na am gonna die dat day ...

Then OBbros scene baby wants to eliminate tia yaa go on love ...he's upset his brothers don't tell him anything but hes not a kid now and will protect them dat was sooo beautiful ...shivaay cuddling with my baby was chooo cute


u still didn't tell ur name... warned u big unres will come

beyond amazing! please continue soon

just read all the parts of this story love it you are a amazing writer

read all the part in one go.what i'll say,it was a emotional rollercoster for me.u r very beautiful with ur words,ur way of telling a story,emotions...u r fav writer.pls update soon. 👏